Date: 05/28/08 09:39 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
OMG, wow. At least he's finally ready to get some help.
HMM, that "fan who tried to shove a stick up my ass" bit sounds REALLY familiar... *cough* lol
Great chapter, I can't wait to see what Kevin wanted to talk to Baylee about. And Nick, too! He was about to talk to Baylee about Morgan!!
Author's Response: The stick sounds familiar? hmmm. I wonder why? lol. And you are right...there is a lot of talking for Baylee to hear in the next chapter or two. Hopefully everything will go smoothly. *rolls eyes* although, knowing this story, it is highly unlikely. lmao.
Date: 05/28/08 04:22 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
And the suspense thickens....I want to know the rest of the talk lol. But DANG didn't expect THAT to happen all in this chapter. What can he say to Baylee? I'm sorry?
Update soon!
Author's Response: LMAO...a jam packed chapter, huh? *grin* I'll try to update soon, but I'll prolly make you wait a day or two. HAHA!
Date: 05/28/08 03:22 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Hm...I wonder who that fan was....does her name start with L? lol. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: LMAO...BINGO! She has been cracking me up so much lately, that I couldn't resist poitning out her goofiness. besides...I haven't had to do much yelling at Kevin because SHE has been doing it all! *grin* I wouldn't put it past her to hunt him down, either!
Anyways. thanks for keeping up and sending me feedback. i love it! *MUAH*
Date: 05/28/08 03:03 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
wow great chapter, Why is Baylee calling Kevin his uncle since Brian and Kevin are cusions, and not brothers?
Author's Response: just the term. lol. i'm sure it's Uncle Nick and Uncle Howie and Uncle Kevin and Uncle AJ...why would he call Kevin his great cousin twice removed, or whatever? I'm sure they generalize it more. just my take on it. after all Baylee and Mason or like second cousins or whatever so in the referance Kevin could be considered an Uncle. lol. does that make sense? it does in my puny mind, haha. thanks for the review!
Date: 05/28/08 01:33 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
ohhhh what big show of testosterone, is very funny the part where a fan chase kev with a stick, i wan more, not pressure, a tons of love for you
Author's Response: testosterone is an understatement, lol. men are such nutso's. *blush* thanks for the love! I'll re route it into the next chapter. *grin*
Date: 05/28/08 12:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
i'm close to tears with this confrontation that has happened. i can't believe that Kevin would open up that quick. and i can't believe either that he would blame the fact that he's trying to be a father figure, or a big brother, to everyone. everyone has choices. he could have done it in a simple way and don't complicate things too much. **sigh** anyway,i'm just rambling. and, i think it was Lenni who saw Kevin and ran after him with that stick. LOL. so much for the seriousness of the moment, haha. you managed to insert a comic relief in the situation. haha. nice one. keep up the good work. couldn't ask for more. i'll just wait here for any updates. =)
Author's Response: lol...Kevin DID seem to open up rather quickly, didn't he? is he being honest? or is this a game he is playing? Yes...that part was writted in honor of our dear Lenni, lol. I am gald you enjoyed the tad of comedy stuck in the middle. I appreciate your feedback and will update again soon!
Date: 05/27/08 10:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I'm glad that Kevin is finally getting the help he needs and it was exciting how he came bursting into the house to have it out, but are you sure those kids are 10 and 15 or are they 20 to 25 year olds? lmao I've never heard kids talk like that before at that age, but it was a good chapter, thanks for the updates!
Author's Response: i have a twelve year old step daughter and you'd be surprised how mature she can sound when she is really passionate about something. if the boys were really upset and wanted to be heard, they might just surprise you, lol.
I am happy you liked the chapter and hope you will continue to read.
Date: 05/27/08 09:29 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Oh man, I literally gasped when Kevin started banging on the door. Good for Mason and Baylee for standing up to them! You can really tell how Baylee has matured throughout this whole experience. I'm really glad that Kevin has finally admitted that he'd got a problem. It's good that he's going to get help. Great chapter, girlie! I'm looking forward to what's next!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked how the chapter unfolded. It was exciting to write. I has to correct a lot of spelling errors becuase I was typing to darn fast! lol. thanks for being a faithful reader and always leaving such wonderful feedback! you rock!
Date: 05/27/08 07:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
lol good chapter, Bay and Morgan are cute together, I keep expecting them to kiss. update soon.
Author's Response: expecting them to KISS?!? why is that? hmmm. I'm glad that you think they are cute together, though. thanks for all your reviews! *muah*
Date: 05/27/08 05:12 am Title: Prologue
It was a VERY pointy stick that went up his good for nothin' ass quite nicely! :)
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LMAO. that's great Lenni! Maybe he'll be so scared of you and your pointy stick that he'll gt himself into rehab!
Date: 05/27/08 02:52 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Morgan and Baylee are such beautiful friend
Author's Response: indeed they are. *muah* thanks for the review!
Date: 05/27/08 02:02 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
it's amazing how you turn the sad moment into a night of fun, at the least, for everyone to loosen up after what happened on that day. i'm still in mourning though. it was so sad.
Author's Response: lol, well, you know Baylee has GOT to be a mixed up clone of Brian and Nick...and they can turn pretty much any situation into something goofy! I hope you continue to enjoy the story as I have got a lot more in store!
Date: 05/27/08 12:14 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
You stopped there! You STOPPED there! Bugger it was getting really good too. I love the happy moments when they all do kids stuff but have a blast.
*starts singing* Do a little dance, write a little more, update soon, update soon LOL
Dude you got me singing so UPDATE pretty please!!!
PS - I meant that Morgan seems to have a crush on Baylee, I think the guy she was talking about was him.
Author's Response: ROFLMAO...because you sang, I will work on the next update tonight and will try to have it up either tonight or tomorrow. And Morgan might have a cruch on Baylee...you'll have to wait and see. (Pssst, you said 'bugger' like Jack Sparrow! Jonny Depp is SOOOO hott)
Date: 05/26/08 11:52 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Can't wait to see what else is in the journal! I was so excited to see this updated...I know I'm a nerd. =)
Author's Response: I wouldn't say you are a nerd...I would say that I am flattered you like my story so much! thanks for being excited about it!!
Date: 05/26/08 11:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
LMAO!! HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!! What's the talk?? dying of suspense here! lol oooh more journal entries? *excited look*
Author's Response: aaaah, you'll find out about the talk in the next chap. and there will probably be an entry or two, too. thanks for reading and reviewing!
