Date: 05/26/08 11:26 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
ok, i NEED to know what happens next!
so, do i sense something with Baylee and Morgan...?
ps. i'm e-mailing you right now i really need with this story!!
Author's Response: lol like the story much? you may sense something on one side or the other but not necessarily both. *grin* you'll have to wait and see. thanks for your review!
Date: 05/26/08 11:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Oye vey! *goes after Kevin with the stick* GET BACK HERE RICHARDSON!!!! I *NEED* TO INSERT THIS THING UP YOUR FRIGIN' ASS FOR GETTING KRISTIN KILLED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I sense more drama with that journal. Lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: you crack me up, every time, Lenni! is is a pointy stick? lol. get 'im! I'll try to update again soon!
Date: 05/26/08 09:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
oh wow, lots of action these past few chapters! i am hoping that will be what it takes fr kevin to want to get help, kristin being dead. was NOT expecting that! loved it :)
Author's Response: lol, I am glad you liked it. and, yes, maybe this will be the slap in Kevin's face that wakes him up. thanks for reading hun, I like to hear from you!
Date: 05/26/08 09:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Haha their pillow fight was so hilarious and cute. I can totally understand Baylee feeling guilty for being a bit happy that this happened. I mean, the situation totally sucks but at least Mason will be safe now. I can't wait to see what's next, great update Kristal! *hugs*
Author's Response: aaaw *hugs* back. thanks, Steph. I am glad that you enjoyes it. Baylee and Mason will be struggling with mixed emotions right now. life sucks, sometimes!
Date: 05/26/08 12:46 am Title: Chapter Twenty
for someone who wasn't even married and wasn't probably ready to have a family of his own, now Nick got two boys to take care of. but i believe he can do it.
wow, this is an interesting plot. looking forward on what will happen next. =)
Author's Response: yeah, he was kind of thrown into it. At least he had his crash course with Baylee and has had him for like 6 years, already. Mason should be no big deal becasue Baylee is there to help. I'm sure he would be happy that you believe in him! ;-)
Thanks for reading along. I appreciate all of your feedback and will try to update soon.
Date: 05/26/08 12:31 am Title: Chapter Twenty
whoa. that's so sad. and unexpected. =(
Author's Response: most things sad are unexpected. how interesting would the story be without some drama and sadness mixed in with the comedy and hapiness? lol.
Date: 05/25/08 07:46 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
the whole Mason thing had me in tears.
but...i KNOW something's going to happen between Bay and Morgan. i know it! PLEASE UPDATE!!
ps. i'm working on Degraded but i kinda wrote myself into a corner and i'm not sure how to get out..
Author's Response: glad to see you back, lol. I am looking forward to seeing your next chap on degraded...if you want, I'll email you another set of questions, after I read it (if it helped you).
I am happy that you felt the emotion of the chapter. As for Morgan and Baylee...they are only 15 so I don't know if I'm going to put in much of a romance line. but if I carry the story on for 'years', and they get older, who knows.
Date: 05/25/08 03:41 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
OMG...how heartbreaking. I can't believe Kris died....and now Mason pretty much is in the same position as Baylee. At least he will have more than enough love and support living with Nick. Hopefully there will be no way in HELL that he will end up back with his father....who is in jail...for drugs and violence and all. Wow...unexpected twist there. Please update soon!
Author's Response: LMAO...surprise! haha. Mason being in the same position as Baylee, gives them a bonding point. But maybe it will be the clincher that wakes Kevin up. I am happy I got you with the twist, lol. You know I've been springing them on ya a lot...and there will, most likely, be more! *grin* thanks for all your feedback!
Date: 05/25/08 05:03 am Title: Chapter Twenty
*starts blubbering like a baby* This is sooooo sad! First Baylee now Mason....I think there's something wrong Richardson/Littrell gene (lol I couldn't remember which one married and changed last names or I should say their mums)....obviously Brian got the good one and Kevin got the bad one!!!
Awesome updates, lovin what I'm reading so far!
PS - Morgan and Baylee sitting in the tree....I bet that's what she wants *snickers*
Author's Response: Lol. Hopefully something will smack Kevin upside the head soon and he will get help! As for Morgan and Baylee...I'm not sure what would make you think she wants to sit in a tree with him?!? lmao. I think Baylee will be a heartbreaker when he gets to this age though.
Anywho...thanks for reading and for your feedback! I appreciate it all!
Date: 05/25/08 03:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty
oh my how i wanted to cry!!! love it and can't wait for the next update keep up the great work
Author's Response: aaaaw, thanks, hun. I am glad you liked it. The next chapter will come up soon.
Date: 05/24/08 10:42 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Aw, that was sooo sad!! But I really like that Mason is going to be living with Nick and Baylee. And I'm sure this will obviously effect the whole custody over Baylee thing lol...I just hope Kevin doesn't keep fighting Nick for custody of now both kids, at least until he gets help.
Great update. I'm loving this story!
Author's Response: I am glad that you are liking the story so much! There will be a lot more drama to come...you can count on it, lol. Who knows what form it will come in tho. HAHA thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05/24/08 05:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
How sad for Mason that everything had to blow up like that :( I mean, it's good for Baylee and Nick for the time being since Kevin won't be able to harass them. But I can see this kind of turning into more of a drama when/if Kevin gets out of jail, because now Mason is with Nick as well. Great job Kristal! I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: LOL...more drama?!? What an Earth would make you think there was more drama to come?!? The three of them will have a rough road ahead of them. but, maybe, now, they can convince Kevin to get help. I am happy that you are still enjoying the updates and will try to get another up soon.
Date: 05/24/08 05:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
I dont see coming a lot of stuff you put here, aaron a police ¿?¿?¿, kevin in drugs (even bigger ?¿?¿?¿?¿), but is great read new things.
and in this chapter poor mason, thank god he got all this people who want to help him. cant wait for more, love so far
Author's Response: I know right?!? I have been putting a lot of twists in my stories lately. Makes them more interesting...but yet, I try not to make every chapter all drama because then it gets to be too much. does that make sense? lol. thank you so much for giving me good feedback!
Date: 05/24/08 05:33 am Title: Chapter Twenty
OMG!!!! What a shocking chapter!! I can't believe Nick's gonna be taking in Mason too! I wonder how they'll all get along. This was so sad...I wonder if Kevin will get the help he needs...can't wait for another update!!
Author's Response: Who knows what's going to happen...I sure don't, lmao. thanks for the review. I'll try to update soon.
Date: 05/24/08 04:56 am Title: Chapter Twenty
OMG, such a sad chapter. :,(
On the other hand, thank God Mason is safe with Nick and the other boys and Baylle now.
And Morgan is totally crushing on Baylee, even if he hasn't realized it yet.
Great chapter(even though it's sad!), this story is addicting! I hope to see another chapter soon. :)
Author's Response: I am super excited that you find this story addictive because I am addicted to writting it. lol. It's kind of funny that you are picking up on Morgan crushing Baylee, because I am trying to work that in on a very subtle level. I have not decided that anything is going to become of it...it's not a romance story, lol. but who knows...I guess it'll depend on how long the story ends up being. They are only 15 in this, right now. Anywho, thanks for reading AND for reviewing!!
