Date: 05/20/08 07:08 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Yay! Glad he shared the journal with Nick. And LMAO at AJ being Howie's bitch!
Author's Response: It was good for Baylee to let Nick in on what the journal said. And yes, the thought of AJ being Howie's bitch IS quite amusing. lol. glad you liked it!!
Date: 05/17/08 08:18 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Mission solved!! And Howie's right, AJ wouldn't be the bitch, it's the other way around. Howie has more womanly habits and AJ...well... he'd request dinner alot lol
Author's Response: LMAO...nice! Howie does admit to spending a lot of time in the bathroom getting ready! AJ is definately a bit more masculine. but I think Howie was trying to make it sound like he was too good for AJ and that AJ couldn't handle him. *grin* they're dorks! thanks for reading and reviewin!!!
Date: 05/16/08 05:09 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Yeah...have to say all the signs have been there all along that Nick was meant to have Baylee. lol. I loved the whole Nick and Bay teasing Aje and Howie about being gay. haha. classic. Another great upate. Another soon please?
Author's Response: it took Brian forever to realize what was knocking on the side of his head, lol. As for the whole gay thing...I thought it was a good mood lightener. *giggles* plus, it would be REALLY funny to whitness. thanks for reading, Ashley. I am starting the next chapter now, so it'll be up sometime this weekend.
Date: 05/16/08 05:06 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Yay! I've been out of town so haven't been able to read but now I'm all caught up. Btw, that whole Kevin and drug thing is CRAZY!
Author's Response: lol. you've missed a lot then? I'm glad you spent the time to get caught up. and I am also happy that you enjoyed it. Yes, Kevin has indeed lost his damn mind! lol.
Date: 05/16/08 04:59 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Ri and Aje seem to have a close, joking relationship. I like that. Its like they can mess around with each other without getting feelings hurt. I like Morgan too. I wonde what the barbeque will bring...lol. Great chapter! On to the next!
Author's Response: lol. I am glad you like the relationship between Ri and AJ. I tried to give the impression of it being different than what he has had in the past. Morgan's character has a lot more to it...but it hasn't been written in yet, you'll see more of her. thanks for your reviews!
Date: 05/16/08 12:04 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
the enty ade me sad.but the going to bed thing was SOO funny. lmao!! good job!!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you found it funny! I was trying to lighten things back up for them. thanks for keeping up with the story ;-)
Date: 05/16/08 07:12 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
can't wait to read more, update soon.
Author's Response: I'll try to get another chapter up soon. thanks for reading. *grin*
Date: 05/16/08 06:05 am Title: Prologue
I highly look forward to being able to cheer again!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: look out *gasp* because it will probably be...*looks around and whispers* tomorrow!
Date: 05/16/08 06:02 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
awwww I loved the update!!!!And you know it was right infront of him all along haha...I wonder if he ever did discover what Kevin was up to..I mean he must have if he told Bay not to go with him,right?
Author's Response: I am so happy that you liked the update. and yes, it was right in front of him...sometimes our answers are! as for the whole Kevin issue...well let's just say "the story ain't over yet"! thanks for reading and reviewing, hun. *muah*
Date: 05/16/08 05:59 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Okay, I like, literally cheered when I saw you'd updated this - haha!!!!
YAY!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLY we know why Brian picked Nicky!!!!! And that was such a hilarious entry!!!!! Haha!!!!! I think God did everything but smack you upside the head, B-rok! Lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: cheered? lol. *rolls eyes* Brian is such a goof isn't he? You gotta love him. And YES you all FINALLY know why Brian picked Nick! Hopefully everyone will keep reading because that was what everyone was waiting for *gasps and slaps forehead* what was I thinking?!?
I am glad you liked the chapter. It came really easy to me this time. *grin* I'll try to make you cheer again soon!
Date: 05/16/08 05:48 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
LMAO Nick and Baylee singing Veggie Tales..so, so, SO cute! And I ADORED the journal entries, they were just awesome. Finally Brian realized what was right in front of him the whole time! Great job Kristal! This story is just excellent, I'm in love with it hehe
Author's Response: AAW, thank you so so much, Steph. I am glad you liked them singing...the sad thing is that I already have it memorized (as well as many of thier other songs) so there was no required research! lmao.
Ah, yes, the journal entries...the one thing EVERYONE looks forward to with antisipation! lol. *rolls eyes* every once in a while I come up with a stroke of genius and I think this story was one of them!
Thanks for all your compliments. I enjoy your writting so it make me feel good to hear that you like my story...or 'in love with it' as you say. thanks again! *cookies*
Date: 05/16/08 05:39 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
awww....nick got all emotional. loving it!
Author's Response: I am happy that you are still reading along and enjoying it. there will probably be alot more emotion to come. but, they ARE still guys, so I wouldn't count on any real tears! HAHA
Date: 05/14/08 11:58 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Oh you did NOT just leave it there!!! Ugh, I think I want to know what Brian wrote in that journal as much as Baylee. Update soon. :)
Author's Response: aaaw, thanks! I will be working on it tonight so it should be up soon! I appreciate your feedback.
Date: 05/13/08 08:55 pm Title: Prologue
i'm working on it but, i'm having a hard time. i'm kinda stuck..idk, i just don't want it to sound stupid...maybe i'm doing something wrong..i'm not sure..
Author's Response: well, if you want to talk it out or need suggestions you can let me know and I'll try to help *shruggs* my email is in my bio. but I'm sure you're doing fine. ;-)
Date: 05/13/08 08:31 pm Title: Prologue
no, you are NOT done. i'm working on chapter six RIGHT NOW. it'll be done tonght. so you have to update to! and it is NOT my fault i haven't finished chapter six. so don't blame me!!
Author's Response: lmao! what do you mean, 'not done'? If I want the story to be complete then it is, lol. I'm just kidding though. It's probably far from being done! *lopsided grin* am anxiously awaiting your update, though.