Date: 05/06/08 02:26 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
*cackles* I know it's just a story, but I got so into it! lol
AJ and the moose, my god I can totally picture him trying to pose with teh moose as if it were a tourist attraction on display. Placing his sunglasses on the moose, throwing up the peace sign. Nick sniffing the moose while, Baylee attempts to ride it. Howie taking the pictures but trying to not get to close lol.
Awe Mason disowned Kevin, PAWNED! Kevin needs a huge, some pills and possibly some hair dye, cause all this anger must have him going grey.
Author's Response: lmao! nice. I am glad you got so into it. and I was having similar visions of the guys with the moose, haha! Who isn't disowning Kevin at this point? :-/ You are right about the graying tho. thanks so much for your wonderful review!
Date: 05/06/08 01:14 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Dude, Kevin has serious problems!!! LOL I'd love to stir him up, just to see him spit the dummy!
Awesome chapters can't wait for more
Author's Response: lol, go ahead and stir him up a bit, if you'd like. It doesn't seem like anyone else can get through to him! Maybe, we'll eventually find out what caused him to turn into this big meanie. thanks for reading and for all your feedback! you rock.
Date: 05/06/08 01:05 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
My God, what is up Kevin's ass? Seriously, he's being such a douche to everyone! He really needs to shape up or he's going to end up one lonely guy. I really enjoyed Brian's journal entry about AJ. It's nice to know that his wishes came true -- AJ is a major part of Baylee's life without being his actual guardian. Great update Kristal!!
Author's Response: lol, Kevin needs a session with Dr. Phil! I am glad you liked the journal entry, I wasn't sure how everyone would react to this one. I had a hard time wording what I wanted to say but it made it transfer and make it sound like Brian couldn't figure out how to express his thoughts. thank you so very much for being one of the consistant readers. I appreciate all of your reviews! I will start working on the next chap tonight so it might be up tomorrow. *squish* thanks again!
Date: 05/05/08 06:57 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Hmmm.. so Howie was the initial second choice after Kevin, eh? Interesting. I can't wait to read the journal entries about AJ and Nick! Also, Aaron as a police officer... hehehe. That creates an interesting mental picture haha. I love it. Great job! I'm excited to read more of the Kevin drama, so update soon, okay? :)
Author's Response: lol, are you getting confused at all yet? I have to say that this is the story I am most proud of, so far. I am actually surprising myself! 8-O lol. thanks as always for reading! I am working on the next update so it should be up tonight.
Date: 05/04/08 07:20 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
WTF, is kevin thinkin??? that man has some freakin issues or he just isnt gettin any from kristin...lol and seriously i cant see aaron being a cop, thats funny! im glad that they are goin away and tryin to forget about meanie head for awhile..dont leaveus hangin to long gurlie.. update soon!!!!!!
Author's Response: lol, I'll update as soon as I get it written. Kevin's motives are still secret, at least, for now. I am happy that you are enjoying the story. Thanks for all your responses!
Date: 05/04/08 06:42 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Maine sounds like a lot of fun! I wonder if they will enjoy themselves or be all tense and worried over Kevin, the asshole! Freakin PIG. Knowing him, he'll throw a fit and try to get Nick on taking Baylee out of the state without permission...or trying to run before the court hearing custody battle. He is pure evil in this! In the entry, I can see how Brian would chose Howie. I am dying to know just how he chose Nick in the end though. Another great update!
Author's Response: aaaw, thanks hunny bunny! Maine is a lot of fun! but as for what happens...that's yet to be written. I have thought of Kev trying to get Nick for taking Baylee out of state, but haven't decided on that part yet, lol. curse you, get out of my head! *grin* I'll have the next chapter up soon. thanks for your feedback!
Date: 05/04/08 12:01 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
ok, now I hate Kevin. but I LOVED the chapter. It was very real. I can acually picture Aaron in uniform, something I never thought I'd see. Well, I guess I should get back to writing my own story instead of reading your's...it'll be tough..you did a GREAT job..I really liked the fact that they're going to Maine..no one EVER comes up here.
Author's Response: Don't hate Kevin...you can be seriously upset with him, tho. I spent a bit of my choldhood in Maine because my great grandfather had a cabin up there...I thought it would be nice for them to have their vaction there! I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter.
Date: 05/04/08 06:28 am Title: Chapter Twelve
this chapter actually made me cry :( in a good way tho. and it is hard to imagine aaron not only as a cop, but what...30 years old? im the same age as him, and im 15 years older than baylee, so yeah. that is just weird! (and makes me feel OLD now!)
Author's Response: aaaaw, I'm sorry I made you cry. :'( don't feel old. I hope the next chapter doesn't get so teary. but I make not promises, lol. thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05/04/08 05:42 am Title: Chapter Twelve
He really did do it....and Aaron is a police officer?? how did i miss that?? lol
Author's Response: Yep, he did it. You knew Kevin wouldn't let it go that easily! lol. thanks so much for all your feedback!!
Date: 05/04/08 04:51 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Wow, not only is Kevin a Jackass, he's crazy! lol Please update soon, I want see what Brian says about AJ and Nick in the journal.
Author's Response: well, hello, Sam.
First, I would like to thank you for reading. Then, I thank you for sending a response! I am happy that you are liking the story. and yes...yes, Kevin is crazy, lol.
and now worries, because Brian's journal has plenty more to say. I will update soon...as soon as I write it. *grin* thanks again for reading!
Date: 05/04/08 04:43 am Title: Chapter Twelve
WTF?? Kevin is being ridiculous! I wonder what happened to make him "hate" all of them...
Author's Response: I only have three reviews for this chapter so far and two of them include 'WTF' lmao. is that a good thing? *confused look* Kevin's issues may never be revealed! although you all might hunt me down so I guess I better bring some light to that before the story ends. lol.
thanks fro being a continuous reader and for giving me so much feedback!!
Date: 05/04/08 04:37 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Oh fuck Kevin! sorry *blushes* I almost flipped my laptop on the floor over this shit.
Seriously, he CANNOT take Baylee. Are you kidding? And where's poor Mason in all of this??
Author's Response: roflmao...almost flipped your laptop on the floor? you do realize it's just a story, right? *shakes head, snickering* Although, I guess it's good that everyone seems to get smotionally into the story.
As for Mason, I have only mentioned him briefly but not really elaborated on the poor kid's standpoint. Honestly, I hadn't really thought much about it...I haven't included Kristin either. Hmmm. That could make for an interesting twist somewhere along the line! *deep in thought*
thank you so much for reading and getting so into the story. I really enjoy hearing your input and feedback! Kepp it coming. *grin*
Date: 05/04/08 04:35 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Seems I missed a chapter-lol. Go figure.
ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!! They're ALL nuts!!!!!!!!!!! [& please allow me to remove that stick that seems permanently lodged up Kevin's asshole!!!! I bet him & Kris never had kids - or did they in this? I don't remember]
I'd say update, but you already have - haha!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: LMAO...I was wondering why you didn't comment on the marry-go-round scene. *shakes head* I wonder about you sometimes.
Yes, they have Mason in this, dear. But, I have not elaborated on the poor kid's mental state. *tear* Maybe I'll make him run away...or worse...turn into an AJ wannabe! Could you see Kev's reaction to THAT?!?! lmao.
Date: 05/04/08 04:29 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Aaron a cop???? Holy crap!!!!
Kevin is such a *screams* I can't even word what he is!!!!! And to have Nick served on Christmas is just fucknig LOW!!!!!!! WTF is Kevin's fucking problem!?!?!?!?! I think somebody needs to beat that man's ass good, & knock him upside the head a few times to knock some fucking sense into it!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: I love you Lenni! You crack me up, girl! and it wasn't Christmas...it was Christmas EVE...but that doesn't make it any better.
I am just waiting for someone to come beat my ass for making Kevin such an ass, lmao. *shruggs* oh well, they'll have to find me first, HAHA. thanks for all your reviews Lenni.
Date: 05/04/08 04:20 am Title: Chapter Twelve
How can Kevin be so mean? Please don't leave us hanging for too long. I don't think I can wait to see what will happen with this. This is truely turning out to be one of my favorite stories
Author's Response: aaaaaw, thank you so much! I am so happy that a lot of people seem to be enjoying this. I didn't think it would be such a hit when I started it, lol. I will try to have an update within a day or two. thanks, by the way, for your review...I appreciate it a TON!!!
