Date: 05/03/08 04:11 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
wait... there isn't anymore? WAAAA!! I was getting hooked and *poof* dead end.
*whimpers* Please update soon... I shall make virtual cookies *big grin*
Author's Response: as soon as I get the virtual cookies, I will update. *grin* actually, I am working on the next chap and it should be up soon. thank you so much for deciding to give this story a chance! I appreciate your response, too.
Date: 05/03/08 07:50 am Title: Chapter Eleven
ROFLMFAO!!! That would be a sight to see....even them with Baylee now!!!
Ohhh we're gonna see why Howie didn't make the cut, can't wait!!
UPDATE soon please!!!
Author's Response: I am so happy you got such a laugh out of the chapter! It would be a site to see wouldn't it? as for the journal...don't get too ahead of the story because I have plans and nothing is ever clear cut, lol. dont count the chicks before they hatch hun. *grin*
Date: 05/03/08 04:03 am Title: Chapter Eleven
update update update
Author's Response: soon! soon! soon!
Date: 05/03/08 02:20 am Title: Chapter Eleven
no headache now, now im just plain sick haha. loved it, loved how they got no shopping done. i cant wait for the next chapter and journal entry :)
Author's Response: well, I am thrilled that your headache is gone! I hope you get over being sick, too. I am also happy that you liked the chapter. I'll put up another as soon as I write it, lol.
Date: 05/02/08 08:49 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Oooh, so we're going to get to see exactly how Nick got chosen. Yay, I'm excited! I hope Kevin doesn't cause too much trouble for Nick and Baylee, especially now that they're finally bonding. But of course, that's how things always happen, isn't it? I can tell there's going to be much more drama to coem and I'm loving every word! Fabulous chapter! The guys on the merry go round were really cute haha! :)
Author's Response: 'much more drama' is probably an understatement! i am so happy that you like the story and the drama. hint...you haven't seen the last of Kevin, but you probably knew that. I'll be putting up another chapter soon. thanks for all your wonderful reviews!!!
Date: 05/02/08 08:44 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Ugh good Lord Kevin! What a psychopath! He's super controlling. I mean, obviously Nick was chosen for a reason. Yeesh, that was intense. It makes me so glad that Kevin was replaced as guardian. And how awesome was Baylee sticking up for Nick? Yay! Oh! And AJ calling Nick "Nickers"? LOL I loved that. Great chap!!
Author's Response: tense chapter both to write and to read. I normally don't make Kevin such a butthead but you know *shuruggs* someone has to play the role. I am trying to make Howie a big character, too. what can I say? I am trying to write out of the box, lol. and you just wait becasue I have lots of nicknames for Nickers. *muah*
Date: 05/02/08 08:38 pm Title: Chapter Nine
I'm sorry I've been MIA the last little while Kristal!! However, I still exist, and I still LOVE this story! Nick and Baylee's prank was hialrious! And Kevin was originally supposed to be the guardian, hm? Interesting, I like how you put that in there, since Nick seems like sort of an unlikely choice. Hopefully through Brian's journal we'll be able to see how this all came to be. I'm off to read the next one! Great job!
Author's Response: welcome back! I was worried that you lost interest. *gasp* now you HAD to know that Kevin was the original choice, i mean who would just pick Nick?!?! lol. thanks for all your love!
Date: 05/02/08 08:34 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
lol that was great update soon.
Author's Response: yeah, it was pretty ammusing, huh? I had fun writting this chapter...pictureing 40 yr old Howie on the mrry go round is highly entertaining to me!
Date: 05/02/08 08:31 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Hmmmm I'm getting more and more curious as to what the journal entries say!! And the flashes are those going to end up the front page of a magazine? I can see Kevin now...oh gosh! Hope you update soon!!
Author's Response: the journal will be getting very detailed, very soon. as for pictures in magazines...you know its bound to happen, the REAL question is 'what will the headlines read?'. lol. could get interesting, huh? i'll update soon. thanks!
Date: 05/02/08 07:44 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
This was the CUTEST chapter! I loved it.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter because I enjoyed writting this one. I was laughing so hard because I was picturing in in my mind as I was typing. lol. it still cracks me up.
Date: 05/02/08 07:35 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Sounds like they nad an awesome time at the mall. How simple it was to be young...lol. I miss those days!
Author's Response: funny thing is...Baylee is the only young one! the other are just...immature, lol. i miss those days too. thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 05/02/08 07:32 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Very cute chapter! I love picturing them act like children!!
Author's Response: thanks, I thought everyone would like thier childlike behavior. lol. i appreciate all your feedback.
Date: 05/02/08 12:40 am Title: Chapter Ten
hi. love the story update. i actually on the verge of tears as i read the start of this story, realizing that it must have been sad if this really happened. i wish you well, and looking forward to more updates. =)
Author's Response: aaaw, thanks scarlett. I am so happy that you decided to give this story a chance. I appreciate your feedback and hope you will continue to read!
Date: 05/01/08 07:57 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Daaaaamn. Kevin's a jerk.
Author's Response: *rolls eyes* I know it! What is wrong with that boy?!? geesh take a Midol, Kev! lol
Date: 05/01/08 05:18 pm Title: Chapter Ten
**The whole day was wasted playing video games, eating pizza, crushing cans on our foreheads, and arm wrestling.**
You forgot belching, farting and scratching themselves, LMAO!!!
Bloody fantastic chapter....LOVE the journal entries
UPDATE!!!
Author's Response: yeah well, I didn't NEED to say it now did I? lmao...you figured that part out all on your own...as I am sure most people did. *shruggs* when you talk about guys the burping, farting, and scratching is a given. HAHAHAHA! I am also thrilled that you thought the chapter was 'bloody fantastic'. and there will be more from Brian's journal...you can count on it! TTFN
