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Reviewer: sweet18_2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/08 03:06 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Kevin truly is an asshole in here. WOW...but it suits well for this story. Hopefully if they do go to court, Kevin doesnt win. He will make Baylee try to kill himself. Nick is the best choice...for obvious reasons. Please update soon!!!!

Author's Response: I know, I have taken Kevin to one extreme end of the spectrum, but SOMEONE has to be the asshole. lol. Obviously it can't all be put on Nick, I like AJ to much for it to be him, and Howie...well...Howie is truely incapable. lmao. so...that leaves poor Kevin. *shruggs* you'll have to wait and see what happens regaurding the whole court thing. thanks, AGAIN, for reading my story!

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/08 02:35 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Kevin is big ass

Author's Response: no...not big...HUMONGOUS! lmao. I am glad that you are reading and I hope that you are enjoying.

Reviewer: barby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/01/08 02:25 pm Title: Chapter Ten

omg why is kevin such an ass?
wonder what happend to him that makes him acting like that
anyway update soon

Author's Response: ah yes, the ultimate question...why is Kevin an ass? I guess, you'll have to keep on reading in order to find out. lol. thank you so much for all your responses!

Reviewer: marie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/01/08 06:30 am Title: Chapter Ten

loved the update! kevin is such jerk.. i'm glad that he didnt get custody of baylee... now i understand stand why nick had a stick up his butt in the beginning, its cuz of kevin...update soon, gurlie!!

Author's Response: very good. Kevin was the reason for the stick! lol. I'll update in a day or two! thanks for all your lovin of the story!

Reviewer: bouncerok Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/08 05:05 am Title: Chapter Ten

all I have to say oh my god. just when things are getting good Bam you hit us with a new Plot. it is good. keep it up pleases update asap

Author's Response: BAM, I hit ya! lol. twist after twist. I'll update next week, I promise *wink* ........................................lol I won't make you wait THAT long.

Reviewer: Nikki P Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/08 05:03 am Title: Chapter Ten

*eyes bug out* Woah! I feel the tension & can majorly relate! More journal entries!!! And he isn't Really takinh him to court is he??

 



Author's Response: don't worry, there will be plenty more journal entries! as for court...you'll see. I'll update soon, I promise.

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/08 04:58 am Title: Chapter Ten

Holy Shit!! Calm down, Kevin. He needs to chill, seriously. I can't wait to see what will happen...wonder if he will go through with the custody battle =( I'm glad the other guys are backing up Nick.

Author's Response: leave it to Kevin to throw a wrench in things! as for the custody thing...who knows, lol. I haven't written that far yet. thanks a bunch for staying a faithful reader!

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/08 03:47 am Title: Chapter Ten

read it. loved it. would leave more of a review but my head hurts :(

Author's Response: glad you loved it! It made MY head hurt to write it, lol. thanks hun.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/08 03:47 am Title: Chapter Ten

Kevin is such an asshole!!!! I seriously want to smack him until he gets some frigin' sense into that head of his!!!!!! I bet he's pissed he wasn't chosen! Well, GROW UP RICHARDSON!!!! The world does NOT evolve around YOU!!!! And just because no one seems to agree with your fucking 'pratening skills' does NOT mean that their way is WRONG!!!!! Everyone is entitled to their OWN opnions & it's NOT even your damned child, so BACK THE FUCK OFF!!!!!!!!!

Gah! You got me all wrapped up in this & cursing Kevin!!!! If that man comes after me to lecture about lagnuage, I swear I am going to smack him!!!! Lol.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~

P.S. I highly enjoy sneaking into your brain every now & then - it's quite entertaining! Lol. 



Author's Response: *wide eyes* damn girl! lol. I got under your skin a bit with that one, huh? I was hoping to catch a few people off guard with this chapter. You weren't in my head on this one, now WERE you?!?!?! HAHAHAHAHA! *sticks out tongue*

Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/08 03:28 am Title: Chapter Ten

very good update, can't to read more, update soon.

Author's Response: aaaw thanks, hun! I am glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Moppy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/30/08 01:02 pm Title: Chapter Nine

Oh man, just when it was getting to the good stuff.....

Great chapter....update soon

Author's Response: lol. i gotta leave you wanting more! *grin* thanks for reading! I will be updating again soon, I promise!

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/08 08:27 am Title: Chapter Nine

OMG! Nick went through with it! I can't believe he did that...what a scary prank! Very glad they got to bond though. And I loved this journal entry...I would think that Kevin would have been the natural choice as guardian so this explains it a little...can't wait to find out more!!

Author's Response: well, we are talking about a group of guys that are masters at pulling pranks on each other...it HAD to be good. lol. I will update again soon so you can find out a little bit more. thank you so much for keeping up on the story!

Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/08 06:58 am Title: Chapter Nine

is Aaron a cop or something? I wonder if Nick really has ADD lol, good update, update soon.



Author's Response: you will hear more from Aaron and you'll find out, lol. and I am willing to bet that Nick may very well have ADD...well, I'm thinking more like ADHD lol. the hyperactive part is key. *grin*

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/08 05:47 am Title: Chapter Nine

Seemed a little short....*pouts*....Lol.

Yay Nicky pulled a prank!!!! An evil one, but a prank nonetheless!!!!! Whoot! Whoot!!!!

And yes Baylee, I do believe your father is going to spell it out for you - ever so slowly - lol.

I bet Brian puts down why each of the guys are wrong for Baylee & why Nicky is the right choice. Hehe.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: yes, it was a little short...the next will be longer, I promise, lol. and seriously, did you expect Nick to say 'no'? I mean, this IS still Nick we are talking about here! Now, the question is...how did you know that it would be painfully slow? and how did you know I was thinking about him evaluating each guy? lol. GET OUT OF MY HEAD!

Reviewer: bouncerok Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/08 05:13 am Title: Prologue

happy Birthday don't you just love april

Author's Response: aaaw, thanks. my little girl turns 2 on the 4th of May. *jumps up and down* I'm more excited about THAT!