Date: 04/25/08 07:23 am Title: Chapter Six
Aw...poor Nick! I would be pissed too. This was so sad-you had me teary eyed. I'm sure Brian had a great reason for picking Nick...can't wait to see why!
Author's Response: Well, I don't think Brian would take that kind of choice lightly, so there must be some logic behind it somewhere. but, "will they ever figure it out?", is a whole different thing. lol. thanks, as always for reading, hun.
Date: 04/25/08 05:59 am Title: Chapter Six
Yeah, I don't blame Nick for being pissed, I've actually gotten mad about that whole undermining my authority issue. lmao I feel really bad for both of them I know Nick's missing Brian just as much as Baylee so it must be really hard. I think they need to go to family therapy. Please update soon!
Author's Response: UH! I have dealt with that problem myself! It's just too bad that Nick won't express wht he is feeling...it wouold probably help him conect with Baylee more. But noooo, not Nick, lol. I hadn't thought about professional help for them, lol. My mind was headed a different direction, but who know what'll happen.
Date: 04/25/08 05:53 am Title: Chapter Six
Aww. Poor kid! I bet Brian explains why he/they chose Nick in that journal! I am so anxious to find out! Lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: le gasp! what on earth makes you think Baylee might find juicy info in that journal?!? Then again, could there be any OTHER reason for me to bring it into the story? I guess you'll find out eventually! thanks for your input Lenni!! ;-)
Date: 04/25/08 05:21 am Title: Chapter Six
love this story
i love readin it
keep up the good writing
Author's Response: i am so glad the you like the story. I sure hope that you keep reading and that you continue to enjoy it.
Date: 04/25/08 05:17 am Title: Chapter Six
ok now you got me cring I have to say this story is really good and I can not wait to see what is going to happen next. it also kind of funny that Nick is a parent. now. but at the same time I kind of understand why Brian picked Nick after all he is his best friend and he knew that Nick would never let Baylee ever forget his parents love for him. please update asap.
Author's Response: crying, eh? Nick being the parental figure is kind of weird isn't it? LOOK OUT Nick is the next Kevin! AAAAH! lol. and you do have a point about Nick making sure Baylee understands how much his parent loved him. I plan to update sometime today (if I can sit still). thanks a bunch for your detailed review...I appreciate it.
Date: 04/25/08 05:15 am Title: Chapter Six
Aww the journal made me sad :( At least he's got something like that though, to look back on and learn more about his parents. I hope Nick gets his issues solved soon, whatever they may be. Also I'm interested to know if you'll make something more out of this Morgan character? That could be cause for some nice drama, woo! Loved it darlin!
Author's Response: well, the journal was supposed to be a window for Baylee to see his dad. Nick's issues may take a while...you know how Nick is, lol. As for Morgan...I'm not too sure about that. I figured I needed to bring in some friends from OUTSIDE the Backstreet family...after all Baylee IS Mr. Popularity at school. I am glad the you are continuing to like it. Thank you for your detailed feedback.
Date: 04/25/08 02:32 am Title: Chapter Five
Lol...so totally awesome! Nick should chill out. I mean Howie and Aje wen to the asylum WITH Baylee...and they are both OLDER than Nick. True, he is the guardian...but...his buds are responsible...even if they are just big kids at heart! lol. Awesome update. Amazing store. You're incredible!
Author's Response: Nick's inability to "chill out" stems from somewhere, something, someone, or some event. the man trusts his friends but there are underlying reasons for his reactions and behavior. However, you won't get to know about all that until WAY WAY later in the story. *evil grin*rnrnas for your comments about the "amazing story" and me being "incredible"...well...*blush* I am not so sure about all THAT but I appreciate your compliments and the fact that you like the story so much! thanks a ton, Ash. *smiles and hugs*
Date: 04/25/08 01:59 am Title: Chapter Five
I supposed Nick would have changed on account of becoming Baylee's guardian. I can see where Baylee's perception of him would be changed, because he's more of a parental figure now. LOL Oh Howie that troublemaker. It figured as much, he can't be 'Sweet D' all the time haha! Fabulous chapter Kristal! Oh, and calling him Nickerbocker? Hilarious :D
Author's Response: later on there will be more detail about Nick's changes and stuff. it's kind of more about his new perceptions and feelings that he won't talk about until later. I have called Nick "Nickerbocker" quite often for years but just now decided to use it. lol. I am happy that you found it funny. I wan't too sure about how everyone would like this chapter but it seems to be getting good feedback...and thanks for yours, Steph. *muah* you rock.
Date: 04/25/08 01:31 am Title: Chapter Five
this is the first time i have ever seen Howie represented like this. it's very daring. the "Ghost Hunters" referance was great, something many can relate to. i love it!
Author's Response: I knew I was taking a risk when I decided to show him in this kind of light, but I figured I would take him out of his "peacemaker, sweet D, always off in the shadows, and often forgotten" type role that he is always thrown in. the latin lover deserves some fun, too! lmao. anyways, I am glad you liked it. Thanks for your feedback.
Date: 04/25/08 12:45 am Title: Chapter Five
I love this story. That "bite my ass" bit had me laughing for two minutes straight!
Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: thank you so much for reading! It is a bit odd writting Howie in this light, but yet a lot of fun at the same time. In reality I can't see him making that kind of comment but hey...it's my story, lol. The next chapter will be up soon. thanks again for reading and for your review.
Date: 04/24/08 10:10 pm Title: Chapter Five
I just read this story for the first time and I absolutely LOVE it!! It's so unique! I cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: wow, I am so glad that you came aboard! and I am even happier that you like it! I hope that you will continue to read, enjoy, and review. *hug* thanks again!!!!
Date: 04/24/08 09:33 pm Title: Chapter Five
great chapter it is very cute please update asap
Author's Response: thank you, I am glad that you liked the chapter. I was a little nervous about this one, but it came out alright...since everyone says it did, I will take your word for it, lol.
Date: 04/24/08 09:24 pm Title: Chapter Five
not fair they should have taken Nick with them he love stuff like that and how come Howie is more fun than Nick??? what made Nick change to be more kevinish???
Author's Response: all things will become clear in time, my darling. Patience is a virtue! *evil grin* keep reading and you'll find the answers to al you questions...eventually. thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/24/08 09:00 pm Title: Chapter Five
lol, that was awesome. reminds me of this one place on campus. it used to be an insane asylum, now its a dorm. there is actually a tunnel that went to the doctors house but its caved in (but the door is still there and if you open it there is a pile of rubble). the tunnel was there cause he would go to the patients at night and torture them. theres this haunted house every year where they "re create it". its pretty awesome :) loved it like i said :D
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it. I based it off my experiances at an asylum...a lot of the main buildings are still standing but they have recunstructed (boo, we had to stop going). and my friends and I used to spend HOURS at that place! I still drive through it every so often for old time sake. I am glad you liked the chapter!!
Date: 04/24/08 08:34 pm Title: Chapter Five
Ok yeah see that would scare the crap out of me!!! I can't watch those shows but my mom loves them! I can't believe those 2...after he just got in trouble for it too...lol
Author's Response: I know it! How IRRESPONSIBLE of them! *shakes head* obviously they aren't scared...they think its cool (but I based it off my experiances going to an old asylum, lol) thanks for reading, hun!