Date: 04/24/08 07:42 pm Title: Chapter Five
Great chapter! Very funny. I feel bad for Nick because all of a sudden, he's not the "cool adult" anymore but more like a dad. And the other guys are messing with him to! Poor thing. It's so funny to imagine him lecturing Howie and AJ too. HAHA
Author's Response: Aaaah, but maybe they can bring him back over to the dark side! Howie and AJ messing with Nick? Noooo...I don't believe it! lol. I am happy to see that you got a laugh out of it though.
Date: 04/24/08 07:36 pm Title: Prologue
well, i owuld need em for alot more than cleaning. maybe, ant removal? hahahah.
pst, i updated. dont know if you saw or not....its prob way down on the first page now haha.
Author's Response: ant removal, huh? maybe you should call Kevin and Mason for that...BayJay is way too cool for any pest control issues! lmao.
Date: 04/24/08 06:33 pm Title: Chapter Four
that was so funny I love how they came together to help each other. Keep up the great work
Author's Response: thank you, sweetie. I am glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 04/24/08 06:09 pm Title: Chapter Four
this chapter is really cute. i was startng to wonder where Howie was. haha, AJ's jokes were so lame iwas funny. please update soon.
Author's Response: thank you for your reviews. I wanted AJ to have an odd sence of humor that Bay would find to be lame. lol...ADULTS, uh! *rolls eyes*
Date: 04/24/08 03:44 pm Title: Chapter Four
Awww...such a sweet gesture of Baylee actually making the place spotless. It sure did surprise Nick. I liked the beginning where he had a little playful attitude with Nick when Nick asked him to clean. lol. And pizza is so good...now I am wanting some...haha. Love this story SO much! Update soon!
Author's Response: aaaw, I am flattered that you like it so much. since I like your stories, it makes me feel good that you like this one! thankie *hug* You're the best, Ash!
Date: 04/24/08 12:42 pm Title: Chapter Four
wow!! they need a woman
Author's Response: lmao. or a new housekeeper.
Date: 04/24/08 11:49 am Title: Chapter Four
am so proud of BayBay he and JayJay make a great team lol and I like the how he joke lol keep the great work
Author's Response: gotta hand it to them...they are both dorks...but they are dorks who can clean! woohoo for cleaning dorks!!!!!! thanks for your feedback, too!
Date: 04/24/08 07:24 am Title: Chapter Four
lol update soon.
Author's Response: *grins* I just did!
Date: 04/24/08 05:38 am Title: Chapter Four
Aw...very cute chapter! I love to see how close Baylee and AJ are. Can't wait for another update =)
Author's Response: thank you for reviewing, again. I am glad that you liked the bond between them.
Date: 04/24/08 05:12 am Title: Chapter Four
haha, maybe i can hire the bay jay cleaning service for my dorm room? its alot smaller than their house, and i bet a teenie bit better than nicks room haha. loved it!
Author's Response: Its actualy BayJay Cleaning and Comedy Services. They do stand up comedy while they dust, lmao. anyways, thanks for keeping up with Baylee's adventure.
Date: 04/24/08 05:10 am Title: Chapter Four
Roflmao!!!!!!! They're ALL nuts!!!!!!! And that's nice, that Baylee is trying to make it up to Nicky for being such a Brat. :)
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Well, I am happy to see that you were amused by the chapter. Baylee still has a ways to go...they have only been getting along for a couple days, so it's not yet safe to say they are in the clear. thanks a bunch for reading, Lenni.
Date: 04/24/08 05:09 am Title: Chapter Four
lmao! attempting to clean Nick's room...yeah i probably wouldn't do that either hehe and really AJ clean? no! thought he was the messiest lol
Author's Response: Yeah, AJ was trying to help out his little buddy. who cares if he is the messiest...no one said HIS house was clean *wink* thanks, as always, for your replies!!!
Date: 04/24/08 05:08 am Title: Chapter Four
Awww of course the house is a mess hehe. The scenes with AJ and Baylee cleaning up were really cute. Great job love!
Author's Response: I am happy that you enjoyed the bonding or whatever BayBay and JayJay had. Thanks for keeping up with the story!
Date: 04/24/08 04:36 am Title: Chapter Four
LOL sounds like my place this chapter....plus no one is crazy to enter my room
Awesome chapter once again
Author's Response: lmao. I figured if you put Nick (at ANY age) with a teenage boy, it could equal nothing other than mass mahem and destruction! Nick admits to being messy and teengaers (boys especially) are horrible when it comes to cleaning. Howie and AJ are lucky to even be able to find the floor! lmao. Anyways, I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter!!
Date: 04/24/08 04:30 am Title: Chapter Four
Very cute chapter I like alot please update asap
Author's Response: aaw, I am glad that you liked it. we had to have a chapter without any drama...i'm not sure how long it will last, mind you, lol. thanks fro continuing to read, I appreciate your replies.
