Date: 04/23/08 05:46 pm Title: Chapter Three
wow this is so cute can't wait for the next update great story.
Author's Response: why thank you for reading. I am glad that you have enjoyed it so far. I am hoping to update tonight! thanks a whole bunch for reviewing, too.
Date: 04/23/08 02:03 pm Title: Chapter Three
oh man
i knew it was nick
but you had me so confused
anyway great great chapter
really beautiful
i want more :)
Author's Response: oh man, you were right! I wanted you to be a little confused, lol. I am overjoyed that you liked th chapter. so far no one is mad at me for the way I played it out. I will update soon. thanks for reading.
Date: 04/23/08 01:11 pm Title: Chapter Three
awwww that sweet. I had tears in my eyes through this chapter its like watching a movie.... am gonna go and read all the story a gain now :)
Author's Response: aw, I am so happy that you have been enjoying it. It was meant to be an emotional chapter and it seems like it turned out. thank you so much for reading (both times, lol) and for your review.
Date: 04/23/08 09:40 am Title: Chapter Three
Poor Nick...you got me teary reading bout it coz it's alot harder raising a child than most people think (thank god my son is still 5 LOL)
more updates please :D
Author's Response: lol, my daughter is only 2 but my (soon to be) step daughter is 12 and she has attitude issues! so some of Baylee's outburst might just be based off hers, lmao. You are the second to tell me they got teary eyed! to me that's a compliment so thank you. i hope the story continues to please you. *wink*
Date: 04/23/08 06:58 am Title: Chapter Three
I'm really liking this, update soon.
Author's Response: I am glad you like it and I will try to update again soon. thanks for reading!!!
Date: 04/23/08 06:05 am Title: Chapter Three
I knew it was Nick! I absolutely love this story...this chapter was very emotional. I can't imagine what either one of them is going through. I hope that things get easier for them. Can't wait for another update!!
Author's Response: it seems like almost everyone knew it was Nick. lol. who knows if it will get easier or just more tolerable! but thanks for reading and for your responses. I'll update soon.
Date: 04/23/08 06:00 am Title: Chapter Three
I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! I KNEW IT WAS NICKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean, he was Brian's best friend - so of course he's gonna leave Baylee with him! I bet they wanted for Nicky to have someone who loved him, the way he loved them - for who he is, not what he is. :)
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: you always crack me up Lenni *hugs* I am so happy that you are on board with this story. Brian and Nick did (technically do) have a good friendship but eventually it will be come clear what thier reasons were for leaving Bay with Nick...but you'll have to wait for that. (pssst I haven't told anyone but you, lol) anyways, thanks for all of your feedback, you know I appreciate it.
Date: 04/23/08 05:26 am Title: Chapter Three
fantastic update!! i knew it was nick.. i hope that baylee changes now.. update soon
Author's Response: of course you knew! lmao. as for Bay, we'll see where his teenage hormones and issues lead us (and them). I will try to update soon. thanks for your review! *muah*
Date: 04/23/08 04:59 am Title: Chapter Three
oh my gosh you have to update soon!!
Author's Response: oh my gosh! I promise to try! *grin* thanks for reading, hun.
Date: 04/23/08 04:33 am Title: Chapter Three
KNew it was Nick!! lol Yes!!! I mean after all Nick was Brian's best friend. I hope things get better for those 2.
Author's Response: besides that...could anyone see Howie saying "and if everyone decided it was cool to fly to Alaska and run around naked in the snow before screwing a seal, would you do it too?" Honestly, I thought that was gonna be a dead give away! but I still managed to get a few people questioning it. lol. i am so happy that you are pleased. thanks for your feedback!
Date: 04/23/08 04:07 am Title: Chapter Three
it was Nick!
damn...i was wrong..
oh well. his chapter got me teary eyed!
anyway...said it before and say it again...LOVE IT!!
Author's Response: lol. I'm glad you were a bit surprised. I am happy that I wrote it well enough for you to feel the emotions, yourself. I, personally, love stories that pull me in and make me feel them. it makes me happy that this did that for you. and I am excited that you love it so much! thanke a bunchie!
Date: 04/23/08 03:03 am Title: Chapter Three
Nick? That was my first guess, then Kevin, then Howie...damn! haha. At least they are kind of on good terms for the moment. Sort of. Another awesome chapter though. I am totally loving this story!
Author's Response: you know...that makes me happy. I know you are writting Not So Bad (which I haven't read yet) which is sort of along the same lines...in a way...with the disgruntled teen and all. so anyways, it thrills me that you are liking it. feel free to tell me if you see something that needs improvment. *wink* thanks again!
Date: 04/23/08 02:53 am Title: Chapter Two
Baylee is really in for it now! Wow. Sneaking out? Bad move, kid. I am thinking the guardian is Howie...not entirely sure...but I am guessing Howie now for some reason. If he goes with Kevin, his life will really be like hell. Another awesome chapter.
Author's Response: aaaaaaaaaw, thank you. I like words such as 'awesome' i feel a fuzzy now, lol. Baylee is pushing his limits. thanks for reading and loving!
Date: 04/23/08 02:50 am Title: Chapter Three
haha. he kinda loves him, huh? ;) loved it! and really like how it wasnt until they said they loved each other that baylee said nick and not his guardian.
Author's Response: technically, Bay said his name when he said he was sorry. lol. I am glad that you liked it though, that's good to hear. so far, people are liking the way I revealed it...I was a little nervous as to whether I went about it right. thanks a bunch for giving me so much feedback
Date: 04/23/08 02:30 am Title: Chapter Three
Aww I knew it was Nick! Yay! I liked how you didn't reveal it until now and how Baylee kept referring to him as "my guardian" that sort of showed his lack of respect towards him, you know? Now that he's actually calling him by name I think that he'll start to treat him a bit better. But who knows? This was very sweet :) Great job! You update more than I do, I love it!
Author's Response: lol. I always end up updating a lot when I first start a story because I have so many ideas and am all fired up about it. I did the same thing with all my other stories...then I start to fizzle a bit and only update once a week or so. *shruggs* this perticular story is invading my mind though and I am having to decide which ideas to use, whcih to forget, and which to save for later! LMAO. thanks for all of your feedback and I am glad you are liking it!
