Reviews For Ray of Hope
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Reviewer: Negris Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/09 07:35 pm Title: It's Me!

omg god!! another one that take my words away

Author's Response: Right, I promise, it's not going to be this sappy anymore, things will get better. Not sure, in what direction, but they will. Thank you Negirs, updating very soon.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/09 02:58 am Title: Goodbye

Oh my loved it can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Yay I'm glad you loved it girl, much more very soon. Thank you!

Reviewer: Negris Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/09 01:28 am Title: Goodbye

oooohhhhhh crapppppppp, don't have words....update soon that was awesome

Author's Response:

Woot!! I like that reaction just as much!! Updating really soon! Thank you Negris!

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 11:42 pm Title: Goodbye

OMFG!!! more soon!!

Author's Response: LOL!! I promise more soon. Thank you!

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 11:13 pm Title: Goodbye

Woah!!! Ray and Nick made me very sad. Mia needs to explain what happened. Great chapter as always. Update soon. :)

Author's Response: I know, right! AW, girl they made me sad just writing about it. I think once, Mia cools down, someone will convince Ray to hear out poor Mia. Thank you so much Krystle.

Reviewer: nickslilmami Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 11:01 pm Title: Goodbye

Wow...I can't believe she left, hopefully they'll meet up again. :)
Great chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah, it was hard for her (and for me to write) but she had to do it. I'm debating on the meeting up again girl...Thank you!!

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 10:24 pm Title: Goodbye

ahh wonder how her mom found out? assumin he told her. im glad ray finally broke it off. they were doing my head in. great new banner too! cant wait for more!

Author's Response: Hum...maybe it was Ray's dad, he thought he could be smart and tell her, before Mia beat him to the punch. LOL!! Thank you Mary!!

Reviewer: brandy_d Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 10:18 pm Title: Goodbye

OMG, Erika....I am actually effen crying! I know it is for the best right now. This may be exactly what Nick needs to realize exactly what he has in Ray.

I hope he trys to do something with his trianer, but just can't go through with it because he really knows that Ray is the one for him. He just needs to stand up to his family. He has stood up to his friends and the majority of them now except her. The majority of his family excepts her.

He just needs to tell his mom to go to fucking hell in front of Ray. He needs to tell his mom to knock it off or he is no longer coming around and she is no longer welcome at his home.

I really want this to end well for them......

POOR Mia! I wasn't expecting Maria to drop the bomb that is for sure. I wish she wouldn't have just stood there. She never seems to defend herself. I bet AJ is going to want to get the bastard!

Please update soon....it is such a pevitol moment!!!



Author's Response: Oh man, your crying? Well I can't help the smile on my face, and it's only cause you felt the sadness I felt while writing it. I had to listen to a bunch of sappy songs to get into the mood. Yeah, I think they BOTH need to realize what they have, cause Nick may seem like the asshole, but Ray is just as much to blam about it all. Mia just looks strong, but she has just as many insecurities as Ray does, I find that I used to think that I was the only one with image and emotional issues, cause I was the big girl, and as I got to know my (skinny) friends, I realized that they were just as insecure (in other aspects) as I was. Girl I'm debating on the how it's going to end...well...not well...haha!! *pulls hair* I'm not good at endings, someone always ends up dying...or broken up. I'm really sorry that I haven't been responding, but I always love your reviews...they are always long and exciting!!! Woot!! Thank you Brandy!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/09 09:46 pm Title: Goodbye

Oh no!  But maybe it is for the best, things having been going too well for them recently.  If they truly are meant to be together then they'll find a way someday.

As for Mia, I really feel sorry for her.  Maria thinks she's a slut but how will she make her see that he forced himself on her.

That was such an amazing chapter Erika, really emotional.



Author's Response: Yeah you are right, they could find out either of two things. One, that they love each other, or two that they don't belong together. You know I almost forgot to add Maria into the picture, well her reaction. yay I'm glad that you liked the chapter...I had to hear a bunch of sappy songs to get into the sad mood. lol!! Thank you Steph!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/09 12:23 am Title: Making a Change

Awww men, that was just so stupid of him, as always he lets his mother do wathever the hell she wants, he is so weak mentally when it comes to his family, but maybe it was for the best. Ray should just leave his ass for good and get with Adam. And by the way, when she said she was going to make a change I just hope that if she does means loosing weight she does it the healthy way, but let's face it, there won't be any fun in that. Pleaseeeee update soon; Take Care!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/09 10:52 pm Title: Always Gets Her Way

WoW, I really hate Jane. And Nick should make up his mind already. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/09 02:37 pm Title: Not Again!

poor nick. He almost always opens his mouth and sticks his foot. Hope this trip isn't the end of their relashionship.

Reviewer: BSB-Chick-101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 05:04 pm Title: Making a Change

Nick!! You are bing such an idoit!! I cant believe he's thinking this!! Urgh, MEN!! Girl im so sorry i didnt review first thing!! But you're doing great!! Keep it up!! xoxo

{Leigh-Anna}

Reviewer: Negris Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/09 05:05 am Title: Making a Change

ooohh so sad, but they need to do something drastical

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/09 09:20 pm Title: Making a Change

Omg omg amazing job so can't wait for more.