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Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/09 02:40 am Title: Christmas Eve

great chapter its nice that she could let all go thanx to nick...

Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/09 02:13 am Title: Disorder

about time he get his head out of is tight up butt and realize it but seriously poor ray and now what the heck is going through AJ's mind he such dumb ass boy...great chapter.

Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/09 01:42 am Title: Forgive me

I'm speechless!!!

Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/09 01:22 am Title: Secrets and Lies

First of all I got to say I'm back as I was away because I had alittle accident like 3 days or so before xmas and I burned my arm from the shoulder to the crock of my arm.

So needless, to say I couldn't write or log in to the internet as i was in such a pain but thanks to God I'm getting better everyday and I'm getting to my old self again...

Now here is my feedback: “I haven’t really had fun with her lately…either.” he such an idiot why he divulging his dirty language to the hyenas that would like to see her gone and out of his life poor Ray what a joke of a boyfriend she got that cannot cover her back or count on him.

What a dick head she should go back to Adam...yoowho Howie mentioning!!!!



Author's Response:

Aw I was wondering where you had gone. I'm sorry about that, but I'm glad that you are doing much better. You were missed. I hope you get better very soon too.

Ha...ha...You crack me up woman. seriously I love your reviews your always cursing out someone. I love it. Thank you Jackie.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/09 02:03 am Title: Falling Away

Oye vey in a half shell. More drama on the way - I can tell.

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: There certainly is, but it's going to die down quick. I hope! Thank you Lenni!

Reviewer: BSB-Chick-101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 12:55 pm Title: Falling Away

Thank god for an update!! They better not be falling apart!! I would leave a longer review but I gotta run, classes start again today!! Update soon! Misses you! xoxo

{Leigh-Anna}

Author's Response: LA!!! Yay, I'm so giddy, when your excited about an update. Hum...I wouldn't be able to tell with those two crazy ones. Updating very soon promise. Thank you.

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 07:48 am Title: Falling Away

I hate how she's slowly killing their relationship without even knowing it. And I have the feeling that if Angela as much as winks at Nick hes gonna end fu****g up everything. Please update soon.

Author's Response: I agree 100%, Usually i focus on how Nick messes up, so I thought I would turn the page. Your so right on that Angela predicament too. thank you yara. Updating very soon.

Reviewer: brandy_d Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 05:34 am Title: Falling Away

Naughty Nick...I have a feeling he is about to Fuck up big time!

Ray really gets to me sometimes. It is like she won't go to the gym because she say's it doesn't work, but she will eat diet pills and purge and it doesn't really work either. 

If I were her, I would be going to those freaking workouts, just to make sure Angela kept her freaking skinny ass hands to herself....

Mia...Mia....Mia, I was kind of hoping for her to divludge her love making session with Alex to Ray. And I can't wait to find out whether or not she keeps the little ones.

Update soon....Great Job Erika



Author's Response: I do too. lol! I hear you on that, you know I was like that for a while. I just didn't want to go to the gym, but yet I would sit there and whine about it. lol! I sure would be tied to Nick's hip if I had to, just to make sure no other girl takes him, she's just pushing him away with her insecurities. Yay, the outcome of the lil ones is coming very soon...actually there is a surprise there too. lol thank you so much Brandy.

Reviewer: Negris Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 05:20 am Title: Falling Away

come on Ray now is the one who gonna make the huge shit

Author's Response: I hear you girl, with that attitude she is just going to push him away. I dn't think she realizes that. Thank you Negris.

Reviewer: mandalovesnick Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 04:39 am Title: Falling Away

I love this story!! great writing. :) cant wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yay I'm very happy that you are loving the story. I'm always happy to see new readers. Updating very soon. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 04:21 am Title: Falling Away

He better not do anything with the new trainer. Amazing job. And I so can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Hum...I don't know, Nickis always full of surprises. Thank you so much. More very soon.

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/09 04:18 am Title: Falling Away

Yeah its back!!!! Oh boy Nicholas!!! Stop thinking those thoughts!! Ray is perfect the way she is. Hopefully Ray wouldn't lose all her confidence if he has a female trainer. More AJ and Mia soon PLEASE. Pwetty pwease!!!

Author's Response: Yes it is...it's taking me a little longer to brainstrom lately. Well i think right now they might both screw up everything, him with his wandering eyes and her with her low self esteem. More Mia and AJ very soon, promise. Thank you girl.

Reviewer: IwantAJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/08 03:45 am Title: The Video

That was funny how her stomach flipped when she saw Adam, I guess it would, especially since they were intimate before. Nick was such a dick head...although I'm glad that he apologized later in the night. As for AJ I have no words for his dumb ass.

Reviewer: IwantAJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/08 03:42 am Title: Double Up

Ok I have a little suspicion, I'm not sure how it could have been done, but there are ways. Wow, mia sure is in for it, with two babies, as if life wasn't complicated for her enough. I like that Ray is being very sisterly with her and heping her through the rough patches. Their relationship has changed drastically since the begining of the story.

Reviewer: IwantAJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/08 02:57 am Title: Surprise

OMFG!! That motherf***** raped her, aw no wonder she was such a mess at the begining of the story. Plus he is still haunting her. I love Ernie is such a sweet heart, all though he has just been put in a compromising position by keeping such a secret from Ray. I like how happy Nick and Ray can be when they aren't having drama. Your doing great fool...really great!!