Date: 12/19/08 02:40 am Title: U R Not the Father
Oh wow!! I was so hoping that it was AJ, so that they could be happy. Of course we are talking about you and your so evil that you wouldn't make it easy on them. I really liked this chapter. I just wonder what did happen to Mia within those two days, for her to have a flashback. Very Nice chap!
Date: 12/18/08 05:10 am Title: Black Suit, Red Tie
Well, you are evilll,lol. I bet everybody tought the same thing as they started reading this chapter, AJ had an OD,lol. But it was just his wedding day,jaja, what was worst? I don't know, and he is such a prick, telling Mia that he can't love another mans babies, that's lame. I hope he has such a wonderful time with Mia that his life with Beth is even more miserable that it's already going to be,lol. Pleaseeee update soon; Take Care!
Date: 12/17/08 11:41 pm Title: Black Suit, Red Tie
are you trying to kill me?!?!?! I was thinking, oh man erika can be SO evil to kill aj, but was bad enough see may hurt
next chapter danmit!!!
Date: 12/17/08 11:28 pm Title: Black Suit, Red Tie
Teehee...I was the only one who had caught on to the wedding colors! Sure, it was when you had me pre-read, before you posted. But I still guessed! Which was funny, btw. I was really happy you didn't off AJ, cuz I know you were kinda thinking about it. AJ really should focus on what makes HIM happy. I really hope he gets his shit together soon...but somehow, since its AJ, I dont foresee it coming. lol. I feel bad for Mia though. How could he get married then waltz in, tell her he loves her, and get ready to screw her? Does he have no regard for her feelings and how badly this is all hurting her? What an ass! I'm waiting for the next update, Er...it better be soon!
Date: 12/17/08 04:22 am Title: Black Suit, Red Tie
WTF A.J.!?!?!?! Stand up & be a MAN!!!!! Do what makes YOU happy, NO matter what the jam!!!! Dammit!!!!!
And you had me scared A.J. had died from the overdose! Gah!!!!! The wedding was the FURTHEST thing from my mind!!!! Lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 12/17/08 12:26 am Title: Black Suit, Red Tie
ooooo more soon!!
Date: 12/17/08 12:14 am Title: Black Suit, Red Tie
Okay first you scared the shit out of me the way you started. I thought it was a funeral and then when you said AJ did such a thing I thought her died!! I can' tbelieve he went though eith it. Are wegoing to find out why he had to do it???? I'd like to know. I hope things work out between the two of them. They should be together even if they are someone else's babies! Update soon!
Date: 12/16/08 09:22 pm Title: Black Suit, Red Tie
okay, so as soon as I read your last comment, I knew you were going to do something like this. So I didn't allow myself to totally freak out, although I was holding my breath, until I knew exactly what was going on.
Poor Mia and AJ, I feel so bad for both of them. AJ feels trapped and miserable, but is afraid of what will happen to him if he leaves Beth, and Mia is so totally in love with AJ and has to sit back and watch him marry Beth.
I am glad that a sober AJ finally admitted to Mia that he was in love with her, and I am also happy that he is going to make love to her. Although cheating is awful, it isn't exactly like Beth believes he loves her, so what does she expect she is going to get when she is practically forcing a man to marry her.
Great Chapter!
Date: 12/16/08 08:58 pm Title: Black Suit, Red Tie
Omg I thought he was died in the beginning amazing job can't wait for more.
Date: 12/16/08 08:45 pm Title: Black Suit, Red Tie
{Leigh-Anna}
Date: 12/13/08 01:44 pm Title: What a Party
Yes! He does care about Mia, he left Beth standing there with the guest and ready to toast, just to help out Mia. I loved that. Go AJ. Alright well woman it is almost freakin 5 and Jen wants to go shopping tomorrow, so I gots to get me some sleep. Love ya and your doing a great job.
Author's Response:
Damn girl I promise that I will respond to your reviews...it's just I have an eye infection fool. But thanks for all of them. Have fun in Cali woman!
Date: 12/13/08 12:27 pm Title: Testing...1 2 3
I have to admit that Ray and Nick are cute together, when they are happy. I see Nick is addicted to some Ray. lol. Those three messing around in the clinic is fucking funny. I can't wait to find out who the hell the baby daddy is.
Date: 12/13/08 11:59 am Title: My Ray
That was nice, rain falling and that romantic moment of getting back together. Cute. I loved how they finally did it, you gave enough detail to the moment without overdoing it. Great chapter.
Date: 12/13/08 11:11 am Title: Knock Out
I wonder who the hell that other fool is? Maybe it's Adam, oh shit! Seriously your have to much damn imagination woman...I loved Ray popping Stephanie, of course she just had to hit her back. Poor Ray, I feel bad for her.
Date: 12/13/08 10:56 am Title: I Still
Um...what a party, we got Adam spilling the beans. AJ and Mia having a good time. Nick and Ray having a moment. He was really mean, taunting her like that, but I liked it. lol
