Date: 12/10/08 09:39 am Title: Secrets and Lies
Good lord almighty what a way to find out that Mia is pregnant. That was just plain fucked up! How is she not supposed to think soemthing is going on, when he lied about his whereabouts. OOO I liked the part about her making out with Adam, it's weird but I almost like him more than Nick. Ha...NIck breaking down. love it!
Date: 12/10/08 09:26 am Title: Monday Madness
Aw Ernie just finished breaking Ray's heart she is already upset and that is not going to help. That last part was hilarious, Nick checking out the Stephanie girl was priceless.
Date: 12/10/08 09:16 am Title: Loss of Face
Another wow chapter, I liked that Ray and Mia were bonding, something they don't seem to do. Plus I don't like Nick much in general, but he seems so sweet and romantic in this story. That was cute of him to set up dinner on the deck and a blanket on the beach. Ray does have an image issue so obviously she was going to take it personal. I would have, especially knowing he's screwed so many other girls. (sigh) Great chapter woman!
Date: 12/10/08 09:00 am Title: Almost Goodbye
Ok, let's see, Nick being a macho ass mofo, that was just. I'm glad that she stood up for herself and he dragged his ass to her house to apologize. Her dad is such a bastard, hitting that poor girl like that, I have a feeling that he secretely has been smacking her around or worse. I thought it was cute how AJ the one she loves went with her to the abortion thingie and they decided not to do it. Did I say I love Angel, she is so down to earth.
Date: 12/10/08 08:28 am Title: Confessions
This chapter was wow! I mean Raidyn drunk up the booty, with fine ass Adam. Nick so pissed off at her and Mia drinking while knowing she is pregnant and deciding to get an abortion. Like I saw WOW!
Date: 12/10/08 08:07 am Title: Not You Again
Wow, Nick's friends sure do like to fuck around and they know he has a girlfriend and are still trying to push random girls onto him. Glad he isnt doing anything dumb, besides running around with the girls on the beach. AS for Ray finding that fine ass Adam again, and him carrying her. That was funny! He sounds dreamy and I get a hunch that he has a thang for her.
Date: 12/10/08 07:45 am Title: Guess Who
Wow Ray sure has some issues with her dad, he sounds like a jack ass! I like her relationship with her mother, sounds like they have a strong bond. No comment on AJ in this chapter. lol! Nick seems to not care what they might say about Ray, let's hope it stays that way.
Date: 12/10/08 07:28 am Title: What's Wrong?
Uh nice way to just come out and tell the poor guy that he might be a father. I feel sorry for Ray she has no clue. Then AJ just seems to become a bigger ass as we get deeper into this story woman. At some extent I feel sorry for Mia too.
Date: 12/10/08 06:26 am Title: Christmas Eve
Lmao!!!! Them silly babies-lol. And NO way in Hell is Mia allowed to give them up!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOT after all of this!!!!!
And A.J. needs a good, solid kick in the ass!!!!!! God, he pisses me off so damn much lately!!!!!
And that was extremely sweet of Nick! I loved him for it!!!! :)
And I'm back now - was without Internet for a lil' while there.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 12/10/08 01:52 am Title: Christmas Eve
Great chapter. That was so nice of him to do that for her. And AJ, oh my gosh, he's so lost. The poor man. Girl I would never forget Ray and your story I love it, classes are ending so final exams, Please update soon. Take Care!
Date: 12/09/08 11:57 pm Title: Christmas Eve
Great chapter. What nick did was so sweet and it's great htat she talked to Nora and didn't get mad at him. Now as for AJ and Mia, this made me very sad. Please please fix them and make him stop. Please!!
Krystle
Date: 12/09/08 10:15 pm Title: Stumbled Upon
Just started this story and enjoying it so far.
Date: 12/09/08 08:08 pm Title: Christmas Eve
yeah I love this story...but i like to know more about the shower sound funny
Date: 12/09/08 07:56 pm Title: Christmas Eve
awww....I am glad that she seemed to find some closer....How sweet.!
Date: 12/09/08 07:41 pm Title: Christmas Eve
I loved it amazing job i cant wait for more....
