Date: 12/09/08 05:31 pm Title: Christmas Eve
{Leigh-Anna}
PS: Happy Holidays!
Date: 12/07/08 10:52 pm Title: Disorder
Well, at least out of Janes visit came something positive. Now he knows what she's doing, I just hope he keeps pushing until she accepts that she needs help. Can't wait for the next chapter. Take Care!!
Author's Response: Yara you've been missing for a while...Yeah I guess you can see it that way, although what would be the reason for her bringing it up. To get Ray help or to make Nick worried, so worried he will break it off with her *ponder* hum...thank you girl for not forgetting Ray!
Date: 12/06/08 05:44 am Title: Disorder
amzing job.
Author's Response: Thank you girl!
Date: 12/06/08 01:37 am Title: Disorder
Okay...first off.....Who is Kimmy?
Second, I can't help it, but I am really having a hard time believing that Ray can't lose wieght even though she has an eating disorder. I really love this story, but that is really getting to me. If someone really diets and purges as must as Ray does, i don't care who you are you are going to lose weight. i would find it all a lot more believable if she were losing weight and she were trying to convince everyone she was doing it in a healthy way. But having her stay a size 14, even though she supposedly doesn't eat, takes diet pills and when she does eat, she purges....kind of sounds unrealistic.
Okay, so since I got through that, i still loved teh chapter. I am seeing little glimmers of hope that Nicks mom is starting to come around. i mean she did seems concerned that Ray had an eating disorder. I hope that Mia doesn't give the babies up for adoption, but then again it may be the best thing to do if AJ doesn't come around.
Lastly, I want to make sure you know that I LOVE this story and I hope I haven't offended you by being bothered with the whole No matter what she does she can't lose weight thing. Being a RN tells me that just is so very unlikely.
Update soon!
Author's Response:
Kimmy was the waitress at he club, the one that aJ was getting down with while high on coke! You know what I didn't even realize it girl, that I was doing that. Want to know why I was keeping her from losing weight, cause I really don't want her to change to satisfy everyone else. But after this review I just got an idea...he...he...thanks! Well about Nick's mom it could be cause she was concerned or because she thought it would be something that Nick wouldn't want to deal with and ray would pissed at him for bringing it up you know. I'm debating on Mia's choice....he...he...since she is so in love with AJ she just might make a odd choice.
I'm sooo glad that you love the story...you haven't offended me in the least, it's thanks to you (my readers) that I'm able to better my writing and work on my ideas. I will work on Ray's losing weight. Thank you Brandy...
Date: 12/05/08 11:08 pm Title: Disorder
omg update soon
Author's Response: Thank you more coming soon!
Date: 12/05/08 07:51 pm Title: Disorder
Let me just say...it's about time!! Awesome update girl! Thank god those bitches are gone home. Poor Nick! He just wants to help Ray, I hope that happenes. Thank god you updated, I was going through serious withdrawals! Update soon missy!!
Author's Response: Your so funny...yeah I wasnt sure where to go, but i think I'm back on the Ray bus, plus Jack has invaded my mind lately. I love Jack!! More than Ray...oops I didn't say that. thanks LA!
Date: 12/05/08 04:42 pm Title: Disorder
omg! more soon!!!
Author's Response: Yay! more soon I promise thank You!!
Date: 12/05/08 04:18 pm Title: Disorder
Great chapter. Hopefully Ray will come clean about what she's been doing and that Nick is serious about wanting to help her.
Author's Response: I'm not sure about it, you know Ray she keeps everything to herself. Of course Nick WILL hopefully do something and not just let her be. Thank you girl!
Date: 12/05/08 12:32 pm Title: Disorder
hehe so happy that they are gone, i think his dad will surpise him like he might like her and happy the last one of his children is not shallow x
Adam is really gonna turn mean I think he just likes her b/c Nick does
Author's Response: Me too girl, they were on my last nerve. His mother reminds me of that woman that plays the step mother in "Ever After" even though she's not blonde. Hum...I think that is a good idea making the dad a good guy. Adamn *sigh* he's just...becoming a dick head! Thanks girl, didn't know you were still reading. Glad you are!
Date: 12/02/08 04:19 am Title: Forgive me
Aww... So many good points in this chapter. I love how Nick finally stood up for Ray in front of his Mom and BJ. It's about time! And then Ernie almost spilled the beans to Ray about her Dad being the father of Mia's babies! Something tells me that isn't going to stay hush hush for too long. I am glad that Nick and Ray made up for like the 2 millonth time lol Nice work Erika!
Author's Response:
I thought it was about time he did so, or else they were going to continue on their rants and put downs. I feel bad for Ernie, cause he's friends with both of them but he's Ray's best friend and he has to keep this secret from her. *sigh* (2millionth time) lmao...Thank you so much Mellz!! *Squee* for having a Mellz review!
Date: 11/30/08 11:55 am Title: So Sorry
That was cute, how they made up. Weird how they haven't had sex yet, and that he's actually waiting. Well, I guess him screwing Melanie, makes up for it. They love each other.
Date: 11/30/08 11:46 am Title: Beaten
Holy macrol, Ray sure got herself in a mess with that asshole Adam. He sounded so hot and interested in her and turned out to be an ass. What a shame! Then Nick got his ass kicked for her, I guess he does care. Cute chapter.
Date: 11/30/08 11:27 am Title: Need You
Ernie is adorable, it's like he keeps them going. I don't like Ray's dad, he is a mean and grouchy man, and he does have some kind of power over Mia. i just don't know what!
Date: 11/30/08 11:17 am Title: The Banquet
Wow! That was a coinky dinky, him being at the banquet with that skank and his family. I guess Ray didn't make such a good impression on his family. Then he was so mean...UGH! Nickolas!
Date: 11/30/08 10:58 am Title: Back Home
Nick is such a liar, I can't believe that he said that he told his dad. Well maybe he did. She fully trust in him too. OMG!! And Mia is pregnant. I wonder by who? AJ or Nick? What a BEEEEEP!!!
Author's Response:
LOL!! Mia is a beep isn't she...and Nick is a fool too. Thanks.
