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Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/08 08:39 am Title: Stumbled Upon

just can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: brandy_d Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/08 05:52 am Title: Forgive me

so, I got all excited because it said that you updated, but there is no new chapter.....what is up with that?

Author's Response: Shoot I know I was trying to post and I have a dumb habit of clicking on the wrong story. Sorry I will update very soon. Thanks girl!

Reviewer: IwantAJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/08 09:36 am Title: The Date

Wow! That was a cute date scene. They seem to have a very good physical attraction. Made me remember back in they day dates. (sigh) this is the second chapter that makes me sigh. Jeez woman. I really like this story, I'm gonna read another one.

Author's Response: Yeah, Estela gave me the idea, she had a date just like that. I used her emotions in this chapter. it's exactly how she was thinking that night. I thought it was sad. Yay I'm glad that you like it and that I'm making you sigh. Thank you!

Reviewer: IwantAJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/08 09:25 am Title: Best Kept Secret

Those two are a pain, one minute she's happy and giddy, the next she thinks it's all a bad idea. Then him, he's digging her and all, then he finds that Melanie slut and bangs her too. He can't keep his snake in it's place. Maybe it needs the head cut off. OUCH sounds painful. He is a cheater, I hope that Ray finds out too.



Author's Response: Imagine two undecisive people trying to get together, it's bound to be a mess. Plus the things that he does, don't make her feel any better about herself. Cut the snakes head off, only you would think that. So aggressive woman!! LOL!! Thankyou.

Reviewer: IwantAJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/08 09:14 am Title: Second Chance!

All that diet crap landed her in the hospital. tsk...ts...at least he waited for her in the hospital. Then of course he had a snappy moment, why wouldn't she be mad at him. I thought that part at the promenade was cute and the beach too. I know she gave in quick, but that happens when you fall so fast. (sigh)



Author's Response: I would have been pissed with him too, cause he started all the I like you crap. Then turns around and goes with Mia. Yeah I thought it would be cute, plus the beach is always nice and romantic. Yay to falling fast 'not' thank you!

Reviewer: IwantAJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/08 08:30 am Title: Double Crosser

That motherfucker! He banged that slut of Mia, when he had just told Raidyn that he liked her. Nick pisses me off with a passion. As for Raidyn, she's taking wanting to be skinny to far, so many damn pills and alcohol don't mix, now she's passed out. Lordy!

Author's Response:

LMAO!! I was laughing so much with your choice of word 'bang' ha...ha... sounds rough! Yeah he did, we've been over it, men have no will power, when it comes to a slut. Yeah, well I know how Ray feels, of course I"ve never gone that far...lol! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: IwantAJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/08 08:21 am Title: Fat but Fun!

GO Raidyn!!! Go...go! Who said big girls can't dance. lol! Very cute chapter, but I do feel like he's just playing with her emotions. I hope not!



Author's Response: We can get down, when the time comes. Woohoo! Thanks, I think it's one of my fave chapters, reminds me of my old days. Yeah he's just a confused man. You know how they function. Thanks so much for taking the time to R&R girl.

Reviewer: IwantAJ Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/08 07:40 am Title: So Dumb

Ok I read this chapter earlier and my stupid computer shut down. Low battery. Neways, so Nick is a real shit head. Ray is a dummy for even believing him, he's so bipolar. Argh!

Author's Response: LOL!! I have issues with my comp too, and it's definately not the battery. Argh! So Nick is a shit head huh? Yeah I guess in this one he is. lol! Ray really likes him and well you know what it's like when you like someone so much, you become a dummy. You make me laugh fool. Thanks so much girl.

Reviewer: Negris Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/08 01:14 am Title: Stumbled Upon

hey erika if you can please read my new story "breaking in pieces" thanks girl

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/08 06:09 pm Title: Forgive me

Well, I'm sure glad they talked things out, I thought the fight would be dragged for a little while. I hope she tell his mom and sister and mel la piece of her mind before they go. Pleaseee update soon; Take Care!

Author's Response:

Ray tends to give into Nick very easily. I think her feelings for him are too strong to be angry. Thank you Yara!

Reviewer: brandy_d Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/08 05:42 pm Title: Forgive me

Awww....Nick took up for her! YAY!!!! It is about time he told them like it was.

And I am glad that ray finally stood up to Nick and let him know that he needs to take he feeling into consideration. What a great chapter!

Author's Response: It was about time right! I mean they were being nasty and he was just standing there. Sometimes I think Ray is to volnurable and lets him step all over her. Thank you Brandy!

Reviewer: BSB-Chick-101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/08 05:09 pm Title: Forgive me

LMAO at the last two lines!! I would say that too! lol, Loved the update by the way! It took you time enough! But I'm glad you did...Update soon lol...xoxo

{Leigh-Anna}

Author's Response: I know I was having a mental block and issues on where I'm going with it. I'm gladI updated too...Thanks LA!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/08 04:51 pm Title: Forgive me

yay yay an update yay. Loved it. Such an awsome job. So can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it, I was hoping you would. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Negris Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/08 04:02 pm Title: Forgive me

aaww that was nice!! good for Mia for making feel Nick like crap lol!

Author's Response: Yeah I liked that she scared the crap out of him. I heart Mia sometimes. Thank you Negris!

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/08 02:04 pm Title: Forgive me

YEAH! Hopefully they will stay good now! Next mess: AJ and Mia!!!

Update  soon!!!



Author's Response:

I can't promise the will stay good. *snicker* As for AJ and Mia...I have no words for them. LOL!! Thank you girl!!