Date: 11/21/08 02:38 am Title: Secrets and Lies
What?? Too many emotions and drama in just one chapter, I loved it,lol. First of all AJ doing coke, he's a total ass, then Jane, and Ray, and Adam, and Nick andddd oh man, just please update soon. Take Care!
Author's Response: Your so silly, I was thinking you didn't like the too much drama, but I'm glad you love it! Thank you Yara!
Date: 11/21/08 02:14 am Title: Afflicted
That must have been awful for Ray. Wow, I think I would've hang myself with a hanger in the dressing room, cause, how humiliating was that.
Date: 11/21/08 02:00 am Title: The Roommates
WoW, poor Ray, I bet is goint to be hell in that house. Hope Nick defends her in front of everybody and not just stand there like a stick. Take Care!
Date: 11/18/08 11:46 pm Title: Secrets and Lies
Yikes....Nick needs to chill the hell out. lol. He's such a hypocrite sometimes in the story! Rarr. And I'm glad Raidyn finally stood up for herself to Jane! I hope she really lets her have it at some point! LOL.
Author's Response: He sure does, hey never saw it that way. Your right! That would be an awesome thing to see...Ray letting Jane have it! Thanks girl.
Date: 11/18/08 08:58 pm Title: Secrets and Lies
You know what? I'm not even talking to you, right now. There was soooooooo many cruel things you did in this chapter! Jane...and AJ...and Tiffany...and Nick...and Adam...and Ray...and...and...and...HMPH! You better update ASAP and fix this mess!
Author's Response:
You know what is so funny...that you love me so much, you talked to me anyway. Plus I fixed it all later...didn't I. Love ya thanks!
Date: 11/17/08 07:49 pm Title: Secrets and Lies
OMFG Nick is being a total ass!! more soon!
Author's Response: Yeah he is a total ASS!! Thanks girl.
Date: 11/17/08 07:40 pm Title: Secrets and Lies
man what a chapter.....
I am glad that Ray is finally sticking up for herself to Nicks mom....
I kind of want to be mad at Adam, because you can't help but wonder if he was purposely trying to start something, but at the same time I still have a soft spot for him.
Now Nick...yea he pissed me off in this chapter. From the beginning when Ray let him know the way his mother was treating her, to the him obviously checking out the girls in the club, and especially the way he treated Ray when he got home....
Please update soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad she sticked up for herself too, it was about time. You know I feel the same way about Adam, I see it as he just wants her to be happy and wants to beat down those that make her unhappy. LOL!! Poor Nick he pisses off everyone! Thank you Brandy!
Date: 11/17/08 07:20 pm Title: Secrets and Lies
Holy fuck Nick!!!!!!!! That was TOTALLY uncalled for, you frigin' asshole!!!!!!!! QUIT being such a damn prick!!!!!!! You're getting to be as bad as the rest of your damn family!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: I love your reviews you tell everyone off...love it!! Thanks Lenni!
Date: 11/17/08 05:59 pm Title: Secrets and Lies
omgomg such an amazing job so can't wait for more. Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much!
Date: 11/17/08 04:14 pm Title: Secrets and Lies
OK!!! the hell with nick! and adam get me mad also
Author's Response:
they were both jerks in this chapter. I agree!! Thank you Negris!
Date: 11/17/08 01:45 pm Title: Secrets and Lies
oh man. this chapter made me very sad. please fix ray and nick and get rid of fhis mother. I don't even know where to begin with Mia and AJ!
update soon!
Author's Response:
I thought this was a very sad chapter too, probably cause of all those emotions flying about. Plus Nick was very mean. Thank you girl!
Date: 11/17/08 12:59 pm Title: Secrets and Lies
{Leigh-Anna}
Author's Response:
I sure as heck would have too, or maybe not. i would have been so hurt I would have closed myself in the bathroom for days. LOL!! Thank you LA!
Date: 11/17/08 11:26 am Title: Secrets and Lies
omg. it is just constant drama with them all. they can never be happy for too long. cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Its a drama fest girl! thank you!
Date: 11/17/08 02:01 am Title: Afflicted
wow! now is aj the one that is looking like a human to me so nice!!! and a hate those 3 bitches. I thought that bj is gonna be more nice but hell no!! you make her nasty too
Author's Response: He is, he better be changing for better right! I hate them three too. I had to Negris, make her mean. Cause Angel is the sweet one remember? Thank you Negris!
