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Reviewer: brandy_d Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/08 08:31 pm Title: The Roommates

I hate it how some people are so freaking shallow! This isn't looking very good for Nick and Ray, with the Adam thing lurking in the shadows and now Nicks disaproving family....I fill a big fight coming up!

Author's Response: I know I hate it too. ha...ha...I guess she better come clean about Adam at some point before someones else tells him about it. There is definately a big something coming. Thank you Brandy!

Reviewer: brandy_d Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/08 08:21 pm Title: Happy Thanksgiving!

I don't even want to think about how pissed Nick is going to be when he finds out that Ray is with Adam....

I smell trouble.

I am super happy that it seems that AJ is starting to see the light....I just hope he doesn't take to long..

Reviewer: BSB-Chick-101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/08 07:50 pm Title: The Roommates

*hugs back* no problem hun! And Oh dear god things just got so much juicier in this story! My god I'm going to beat Jane, BJ and Melanie for being such bitches! I wish Nick would stick up for her, anyway and as for Ray, I hope she gets her confidence back and sticks up for herself. Nice update! Glad I could help, update soon!! xoxo

{Leigh-Anna}

Author's Response:

Those three definately need a beating...for being so rude. Nick is afraid of his mom I'm guessing, they do pay all his bills...lol! Yeah I hope Ray doesn't fully lose her confidence. Thanks girl once again.

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/08 01:51 pm Title: The Roommates

things are going to get bad. Great chapter! Updaye soon :)



Author's Response: Yeah they definately are, I'm just trying to figure out how bad. lol! Thank you girl...

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/08 06:24 am Title: The Roommates

ergh. jane. ergh. what if she is pregnant. ah. cant wait for more.

Author's Response: Ha...ha...no one likes Jane! She's just unlikeable I guess. She just could be pregnant...wow will nick do witih two preggers in his house? If she is! Thank you Mary!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/08 06:06 am Title: The Roommates

hehe omg I so can't wait for more the days of nick carter lives hehe. So loved it amazing job. Keep it up.

Author's Response: Yeah I was hoping that would make you guys laugh. I'm glad you loved it thank you girl!

Reviewer: Negris Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/08 05:53 am Title: The Roommates

ok erika that was mean with ray!

Author's Response: Sorry...there are mean people like that our there Negris! Thank you girl!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/08 05:23 am Title: The Roommates

Wow...I'm the first to review? Lol...probably cuz I already read it, huh? Well first things first...Ray! Tsk tsk...how could you lie to him? I bet you that this will come back to bite her in the butt! (*wink*) I am highly disappointed in her lack of trust in him! Sure, he'll be upset but he'll be FAR more upset later on, if he finds out she lied! Then again...he's on the shit list too! "Roommates"?!?! You shouldn't have even gone there, Nick! Honestly! Who would you rather have mad at you? Your momma who is a pain in your side, or your woman whom you're in love with? If I were you, Nick...I'd get to fixing things before they have the chance to get any worse! I don't know that I should even get on the subject of his mother, sister and Melanie! Those three just plain pissed me off! People can't be judged by thier weight...how would you like it if I judged you on your IQ? Seeing as you're about as smart as a screen door on a submarine...it seems like you wouldn't want someone to judge you based on that. And lastely...you, Erika...you have written yet another great chapter. I enjoyed it just like usual. Thank you for providing me with a good read...that is realistically mushy and not over kill gooey! Love ya, girl...keep up the good work, can't wait till the next chapter!!! *muah*

Author's Response: Well let's see Ray lied because she was afraid to finish pissing Nick off, but your right he would have been upset and it's definately going to come back and bite her in the butt. I'm just not sure how yet!! Roommates, what a dumbass, he must really be afraid of his momma huh? As for the three hyenas yeah they are on my bad list and I'v definately met witches like that in my life time, and felt just like Ray before. Only you would think up a screen door on a submarine. hilarious!!! Yay thank you so much, for reading and giving me such reviews *blushes* and helping me when I get stuck...*smooches* Love ya too!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/08 07:24 am Title: Happy Thanksgiving!

Oye vey in a half shell!!!!!!!!!!!!! Waaaaaaaaay too much drama going on here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I woulda waited all damnedn ight for Nick & A.J. to come home - but, that's just me. :)

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: Yeah drama...drama...You know I wouldn't have waited either, cause she busted her chops and he is a no show. Screw that...although you might have waited for him, just to poke him with your pointy stick a couple of times. Thanks lenni!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 06:58 am Title: Happy Thanksgiving!

Well, I'm not happy to say this, but I smell trouble, lots and lots of trouble, have a feeling that Nick's mom won't be as well mannered as Adam's mom. Please update soon. Take Care!



Author's Response: Why? It's good and bad trouble...the thing is will they make it through and stay together. yeah Adam's mom was a sweetheart. Thanks so much Yara.

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 06:31 am Title: Happy Thanksgiving!

OMG!!!  more soon!!

Author's Response: Very soon. Thank you girl!

Reviewer: Negris Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 06:27 am Title: Happy Thanksgiving!

FUDGE!! the MOMS things are to come, awesome

Author's Response: Oh yeah...let's see what Jane is like. HUm...thanks Negris!

Reviewer: Negris Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 06:15 am Title: The Video

don't know why? but some crap aret o come because that tifanny girl

Reviewer: Negris Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 05:57 am Title: Double Up

oh crap!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 05:28 am Title: Happy Thanksgiving!

Why do I even bother leaving you reviews on here? First of all you already know that I love EVERYTHING that I read of yours! Plus...I tell you that everytime we chat, lol. At any rate...this chapter was interesting. I would have been livid, if I were in the girls' position! The guys are taking for granted what they have! Whay does Adam keep popping up? It's kind of odd. I wonder if you have a twist planned. I know you have lots of trick up your sleeve, but I only know what half of them are...you keep me on my toes, with this one! Another thing...what in the halibut is Nick's mom doing there?!? There seem to be people just popping up out of nowhere! What is going on here? Geesh! Lots of questions...I hope there are answers soon woman! I wub ya! Update soon...you know you're kickin ass with this story (not like it's anything out of the ordinary for you!)

Author's Response: You bother, because you know I LOVE YOUR REVIEWS. Aw *blushes and gives you squishy hug* thank you so much for that. Yeah I would have been just as pissed and I wouldn't hae returned...until the very next day and Adam would have been with me the whole time. lmao!! Anywho, yeah Adam has his reasons for showing up all the time, I'm just not sure what it is. LOL!! just kidding! Yup you do know half of them he...he...have I ever told you that your full of questions...yeah you are! I like it though. By the way I wub ya too. Yay *makes a happy dance for kickin ass* Thank you my BF!