Reviews For Ray of Hope
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Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 05:24 am Title: Happy Thanksgiving!

Great update ...I cannot wait to read more !!!

Author's Response: Thanks Jackie, more on the way.

Reviewer: Nicklvr Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 03:40 am Title: Happy Thanksgiving!

holy shit he is in som much trouble..pretty shitty of him to treat ray an mia like that an im sorry but the whole tiffany thing would have pissed meoff 2..she's a bitch an she shouldn't have been there but ray needs to stay the fuck away form adam is shw wasnts to be with nick...
update your doin a kick ass job!

Author's Response: Yeah he's a little stressed and taking it out on the girls. I'm with you on the Tiffany, he alraedy knows Ray doesn't think much of her...men they are so insensitive. Oh wow your the first to say that about Adam...I like it! Thanks very much *blushes*

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 01:50 am Title: Happy Thanksgiving!

Ooooooo so amazingly good I can't wait for more. Loved it.

Author's Response: THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 01:19 am Title: Happy Thanksgiving!

That's it? Can't wait for more. AJ is sooo close to splitting form Beth. Just gotta make it happen!! update soon :)

Author's Response: Yup...my mind was about to combust! He sure is, but who knows if he will have the guts to make the right choice. LOL!! Thanks girl!

Reviewer: BSB-Chick-101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 12:23 am Title: Happy Thanksgiving!

First Reviewer for the chapter! Boo-Ya!! LOL! Great update!! I would be pissed at Nick for missing Thanksgiving too! God, if Beth don't stop! I can literally picture her nagging in my mind! And Nick's MOTHER?! Oh god this is so awesome...let the drama begin!! Update soon!!! xoxo

{Leigh-Anna}

Author's Response: Your funny! Oh yeah it's a big pile of drama come your way...Beth really annoys me and I can't imagine how AJ's ears don't bleed. Thank you so much LA!

Reviewer: alexalovet Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 08:35 pm Title: The Video

~~~ Loved it. Cant wait till the next chap that was so good. ~~~

Author's Response: Aw thank you! I'm soo glad you did! Another chapter right after I click submit on this response. Thank you girl!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 09:09 am Title: The Video

Jum, is she pregnnt? We';; have to wait and see. And those she feel for Adam something more than friendship? Cause her stomach flipped and all that stuff that happens when you like someone,lol. Please update soon, can't wait. Take Care!

Author's Response: Hum...we will have to find out!!! I don't know, maybe it's just the akwardness of the fact taht they slept together. That is always weird. Thank you yara. You take care too.

Reviewer: AngelgirlD Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 05:32 am Title: The Video

Great update but he better not be an idiot Adam is back and might loose her for good...people come and goes and in his case models or oall sort of girls but the ones that loves you are going to be there for ever if you treat them right...

Author's Response:

Yup Adam is back and willing to help Ray forget about NIck. Although she's not having it though...she loves Nick blindly. Thanks Jackie for the reviews.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 04:19 am Title: The Video

Oye vy. If Ray's pregnant.....I hope to God it ain't Adam's!!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: OMG!! I hadn't even thought about her being preggers by Adam...good catch! Thanks Lenni!

Reviewer: dolphingirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/08 03:31 am Title: The Video

damn straight she should give it to him update soon love it

Author's Response: LOL! Yeah he needs a good beating. Thank you girl!

Reviewer: brandy_d Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/08 11:57 pm Title: The Video

Nick better get his act together. I would assume that now is not a good time for him to be treating Ray like shit. I am sure Adam would have no problem sweeping in and saving the day again.

I wonder what Beth thought of AJ drunk rambling about Mia...more so, I wonder when AJ is going to stop being an idiot and just be with MIA!

Keep it coming!

Author's Response:

Oh your so right about that, Adam is always up to make Ray happy. Saving the day! That was funny! You'll get to know what Beth said in this next chapter. Thanks Brandy!

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/08 05:58 pm Title: The Video

Wow... Poor Mia! Now she finds out she's preggers with twins? It just gets worse and worse for her, doesn't it? Hmm... I'm wondering what is up with Ray. Somehow I think her questions towards Mia were not so innocent and she is acting pretty emotional lately. Could she be preggers too?



Author's Response: Uh yeah...I think I'm done torturing her for now though. She'll make it through with Ernie and Ray on her side. Hum...she could be?? Thanks sooo much Mellz!

Reviewer: BSB-Chick-101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/08 04:31 pm Title: The Video

AW!! I loved the ending of the chapter! I'd love having Nick apoligize to me!! LOL!! Anyway, Beth is a real nagger! Urgh it makes me mad! I hope he and Mia work things out! Great update hun! Hope I can read more soon!! xoxo

{Leigh-Anna}

Author's Response: LOL! Yeah I bet you would. Oh yeah you haven't seen nothing...she's worse. They might but not yet. Thank you LA!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/08 04:00 pm Title: The Video

loved it amazing job can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you more very soon.

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/08 01:54 pm Title: The Video

Ok Nicck neds to get his act together and not do this to Ray anymore and AJ needs to get his head straight andrealize he should be with Mia not Beth.  great update. more soon please. :)

Author's Response: Yeah I think this producing a video is going to his head. I know AJ does have to get his shit striaght, I promise he has his reasons. Yay more very soon. Thank you girl!