Date: 11/04/08 01:03 am Title: Surprise
well we all got that idea Ray's dad is a dirty bastard....and i was thinking that maybe he wasn't the father but he has something to do like he let one of his friend do it with mia..but damn poor mia
Date: 11/03/08 09:33 pm Title: Surprise
OMG!!!! I knew it. Somebody needs to kill the sick son of a bitch! UGHHHH!!!!
Great Job Erika, keep it up!
Author's Response: Yeah darn it you did!! *smiles* I love these reactions...I would kill him too...Thank you so much Brandy.
Date: 11/03/08 08:33 pm Title: Surprise
that was the shit right there it turned out perfect great job.
Author's Response: YAY *Does a happy dance* Thanks so much, I'm happy to hear that, I'm so glad you liked it! Woohoo!
Date: 11/03/08 08:21 pm Title: Surprise
ahh. i was right. ahhh. ahhh. that was horrible. poor thing. and aj does not make it any better. cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Yes you were right girl...Yeah I think it's the time she needed AJ the most and now he's avoiding her. Thanks so much Mary...more drama to come soon.
Date: 11/03/08 08:02 pm Title: Surprise
*wiggles but through screen and into story* That BASTARD...even though I knew all about this...reading it made me SOOO mad! I just wanna punch that guy in the teeth, make him swallow those teeth, shit them out and stuff his nose in that shit THEN I would chop his dick off and feed it to a pig! Why are there men lke that out there? I'm all emotional and upset...I can't stand people like that, they really piss me off. You wrote this really well, Erika...I think you captured her fear and emotions really well. A lot of women have been put in very similar situations and had to make hard decisions that end up making them suffer, in order to keep another from that harm. It makes you look at her in a bit of a different light. Anywho...I'll talk to you later on...good job!
Author's Response: *Joins you in the story, to beat down on Ray's dad* Yeah you did, and you seem like you didn't. I'm not sure why there are pigs like that out there, and it's a sad thing. I can say that almost every girl has gone through something like that or similar in their lifetime. It's horrible. But they pay in the long run....I'm sooooo glad that you liked the chapter and that I brought out the emotions, Yeah you can definately see a different side to poor Mia. I hope to talk to you later on tonght...Thank you Kris...
Date: 11/03/08 06:06 pm Title: Surprise
Hey! So sorry that I couldnt review so quick! But I loved the update!! I knew he was the dad!! This sucks though because Nick and Ray are finally happy and now if this gets out all hell will break lose...update soon though! DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA just like in my story (what coming anyway lol) Anyway I'm loving this story...update soon!!! xoxo
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the review, yeah you did know haha! It definately sucks, cause now Mia is unhappy and she might decide to tell Ray the truth and who knows how she will react. There is certainly more drama on the way girl. I already read yours...I'm waiting for it unfold. Thanks alot Leigh Anna!
Date: 11/03/08 05:48 pm Title: Surprise
Wow... So the plot thickens. Poor Mia :(
Yes I am FINALLY caught back up again. Fo how long? Who knows LOl
Author's Response: It sure does, yeah I feel bad for Mia. I just hope she pulls through. Yay I'm so glad that you decided to catch up with the story. Well I hope that even though you don't know for how long, that you still check it out when you can. It's an honor to have you as a reader. Thanks Mellz!
Date: 11/03/08 05:44 pm Title: Surprise
I knew it omg omg. I can't wait for more. He is such a bastered. I loved it nick and ray are so cute together. I was hoping it was aj with a surprise.
Author's Response:
I know...you guys were on the dot about it being Ray's nasty father. I'm so glad that you loved it! Yeah Ray and Nick are in their lovey dovey stage right now. I was hoping you guys would think it was AJ visitiing...tricked you!!! Thank you soo much girl!
Date: 11/03/08 02:35 am Title: U R Not the Father
see I knew it!!! but who the hell is the third guy I totally agree with everyone else that it is Rays dad, but we could all be wrong and also you can not not tell us either that would be just horrible.
Author's Response:
It seems like you guys all got together to discuss the babby daddy. It's hilarious! LOL!! I promise to name the daddy...in the next chapter. Thank you sooo much!
Date: 11/02/08 05:35 pm Title: Stumbled Upon
you are scheming a new twist aren't???
Date: 11/01/08 11:51 pm Title: U R Not the Father
Hmmm...I think I have an idea who the father might be...lol. If it's who I'm thinking, then ew. lol. Good chapter though, at least it wasn't Nick's like I thought it was gonna be! LOL. Hope you update soon:)
Author's Response: I think your idea might be slightly correct...Yeah I thought of it being NIck's, but I just couldnt' think of what else would happen if he was. Thank you Jay...
Date: 11/01/08 07:29 pm Title: U R Not the Father
I have got money on Raidyn's dad...
I think it is going to be him. The way he is always slapping around on her and calling her a whore. I think he is jealous and hhe is the reason why she is so easy to begin with. I was really hoping for AJ to be the daddy, but that would have just been to easy. Now it is going to take a lot more for Mia to win AJ over from Beth! Great Job Erika!!!
Author's Response: HUm...I like your thinking. I know, believe me I put a lot of thought on where the story would go if he was the daddy, but like you said it would have been to easy. Thank you so much girl.
Date: 11/01/08 02:45 am Title: U R Not the Father
you didn't say crap but darn Rays father yuk....great update!
Author's Response: LMAO!!! Yes I did, I said who the father was, that he doesn't have a name is a WHOLE other thing. LMAO!! Maybe it is Ray's dad...maybe it isn't. Thank you Jackie.
Date: 11/01/08 02:26 am Title: What a Party
WOW, I hope she doesn't loose the baby...
Date: 10/31/08 03:43 am Title: U R Not the Father
it's rays father?????? Omg I so can't wait for more. Loved it.
Author's Response:
Well...we will just have to see won't we...why is everyone guessing it's him. hum...Thanks so much girl, I'm glad that you love it!
