Date: 10/13/08 03:39 am Title: In Shambles
Nick is getting me tired and Ray too! come on guys do something and stop cry me a river or i will push you two to a river
Author's Response: Haha!! Your so funny, pushing them into a river. Maybe they will make up there...thank you girl
Date: 10/12/08 07:59 pm Title: In Shambles
awsome so can't wait for more. Loved it.
Author's Response:
Thank you girl!
Date: 10/12/08 09:21 am Title: Make it Right
Way to go Nick, Adam didn't even had to finish the sentence,lol. That was funny. That was a very noble thing for Adam to do, he also likes Ray a lot. She has 2 man literally fighting for her and she doesn't even know it, or she just doesn't want to see it. Pleaseeee update soon, I can't wait for the next chapter. Take Care!
Author's Response: Yeah I can see Nick just letting him have it. I'm debating on leaving Adam a good guy or making him go back to his old ways. hum...thank you!
Date: 10/12/08 09:06 am Title: Take the Pain Away
What? Why beatings?, the chapter was wonderful, I can't believe she had the nerve, courage, to be with Adam, but even thou I'm sorry for Nick; I'm glad for her, I know she must have done it out of anger, or whatever, but I'm glad she did it. And stupid Nick, didn't want to be with Ray without any protection and he was in love with her, but that slut got her way with him and he was so mad that he didn't do anything, hopefully this one is on the pill. Great Chapter, Take Care!
Author's Response: Well I thought everyone (Which some were) mad cause I had her sleep with Adam. i thoguht being with Adam would help her realize that she is worth something. Haha...Nick is such a fool! You made me laugh with (I hope she's on the pill) LOL! Thank you
Date: 10/12/08 08:47 am Title: A Night Out
What??? Well, go Ray!! Lets see how Nick likes that now. lol. Poor guy. I loved how Mia realised how she was, how she looked in some peoples eyes. Like a slut. Nice chaper.
Author's Response: Well Ray needs some pleasing too...haha! Who better than Adam. Yeah I thought I would give Mia a look at what she used to be. Thank you.
Date: 10/12/08 08:32 am Title: Some Truth
Not a nice thing to do Adam, tsk tsk. At least he called Nick and told her she was ok. It was so sweet how he described her, he is sooo in love with her. *sigh* Great chapter. Take Care!
Author's Response: Adam is so unpredictable. He cares about Ray and Nick was his friends at some point. Nick IS so in love and I think he doesn't even know it. Thank you.
Date: 10/12/08 08:18 am Title: No She Wouldn't
wow, intense chapter. Really good. Poor girls. That man is a beast. Hope Ray is ok.
Author's Response:
Thank you! He has his coming soon.
Date: 10/12/08 08:07 am Title: Secrets and Lies
Aww, he's so in love with her is cute and patetic. I just wish she could've seen him like that so she know how much he cares and how much he loves her. Take Care!
Author's Response: Haha Nick Pathetic, definately. Thank you girl.
Date: 10/12/08 01:24 am Title: Make it Right
Adams not such an ass any more,im actually starting to like him. amazing job keep up the work.
Author's Response: I know he grows on you, huh! Thank you so much!
Date: 10/11/08 09:08 pm Title: Make it Right
damn it i want them together i can' believe she slept with that adam guy i never thought she would o well keep em comin update
Author's Response: LOL! It's funny how surprised everyone is that she did that. The things angry people do...Thank you!
Date: 10/11/08 03:17 am Title: Make it Right
Okay, is it bad I wanna laugh at Nick punching Adam??? Lol.
And Ernie - poor, poor ernie. I hope he gets out of that relationship alvie & well ASAP!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: No not at all, I was actually grinning when I wrote it. LOL! You like Ernie don't you...? Thank you Lenni!
Date: 10/11/08 02:15 am Title: Make it Right
......................................................................................................................................(this is me not talking to you, even if I do luv ya.)...........................................................................................
Author's Response: LOL!!
Date: 10/10/08 08:52 pm Title: Make it Right
He's marriyibng Beth??!?!?!?! What's is wrong with you!
HAHA. Update soon!!!
Author's Response: LMAO!!! I like to make you guys suffer.
Date: 10/10/08 06:22 pm Title: Make it Right
Yay yay he better be going there after he leaves the park. Such an amazing job. And I so can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I don't know if it will be that soon, but he will. Thank you.
Date: 10/10/08 03:12 am Title: Take the Pain Away
DAMMIT!!!!! THEY HAD THEIR FRIGIN' CHANCE TO TALK!!!!!!!!!! IF THEY'D BOTH GET THEIR HEADS OUTTA THEIR SORRY ASSES, THEY COULD RESOLVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *curses wildly* WHERE IS MY POINTY STICK!?!?!?!?!?!?
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: I know damn stubborn asses. *covers mout in shock at Lenni's cursing and runs away from the pointy stick.* The pointy stick had me cracking up girl. Thanks Lenni
