Date: 10/08/08 04:26 pm Title: A Night Out
A boo-boo huh? I was thinking one of them got lucky or something, lmao. I am still upset at you for allowing such a thing to happen...maybe I need to be crawling out of your computer screen instead of into your story! Watch out...I'm packing my pink slippers and I'm on the way! Wait...how do I get there? lol. The chapter was well written, as always and I am sitting here wanting to know what's next. PLEASE update as soon as humanly possible!
Author's Response: Ok yeah I had thought about it atleast in this chap, but then I went a different route. That is a boo boo for Ray anyways...that still might get lucky you know, the night is not over. haha!! I have another volunteer to enter the next chapter to whoop ass it's lenni I told her we could do a camp out. Oh my god you made me think of the GRUDGE *Gets goose bumps* AAAAHHH!!!! Your hilarious seriously. Oh thank you Kristal, I'm promise more is on the way, maybe after I respond to my reviews *Raises eyebrows and giggles* Thank you girl.
Date: 10/08/08 03:54 pm Title: A Night Out
She one silly girl and Nick idoit for not going to talk
Author's Response:
Poor Ray she is getting confused, and your right he could have just walked up to them before that happened to see if she would talk to him. Damn fool. Oops...you got me riled up. Thank you.
Date: 10/08/08 01:32 pm Title: A Night Out
you kill me with this one!!!! OOOHH MY GOD please update fast soon right now! i can't wait to long to see the next chapter
Author's Response: LOL!! Yes I did it!!! I'm glad it had that affect on you, I was hoping it would. More very soon. Thank you girl.
Date: 10/07/08 03:16 am Title: Some Truth
Oye vey in ah alf shell!!!!! TALK IT OUT PEOPLE!!!!! NO FISTS!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: OMG you sound like Kristal last review she wanted to jump into the story and kick some ass. Would you like to join her. LOL!! Thank you Lenni.
Date: 10/06/08 10:20 pm Title: Foolish Games
I like how you gave some insight as to WHY Ray is afraid of the water...and who it was she was talking about when she mentioned that her father blamed her for the death. Nick is being such a sweetheart...and he kissed her...YAY!!! :)
Author's Response: She's still very upset about her sisters death, it could be cause her father spends whatever time he can blaming her. Yay for NIck showing a soft side. Thank you!
Date: 10/06/08 08:39 pm Title: Some Truth
Good chapter. I guess Aj's gonna stay an ass? I hope Nick and Ray fix things.
Author's Response: Maybe he doesn't mean to be an ass, you know. He's just used to his life and he doesn't want it to change. He is being less of an ass!
Date: 10/06/08 07:38 pm Title: Some Truth
O...by the way...awesome chapter! Update soon please!
Date: 10/06/08 07:37 pm Title: Some Truth
Holy freaking cow, DUDE! It was really nice for Adam to take her in and then call Nick...I am beginning to think he's really not a horrid monster. Everyone has a past Adam, Nick, AJ, Ray AND Mia...there has to be some forgivin goin on, before ANYone is going to be happy! I am glad that the reason for Adam and Nick's spite finally came out. I just hope that Ray will listen, if and when Nick come to her. *sigh* What a tangled web they weave! It's going to take a lot for it all to get straightened out. I am warning your characters that they better not make me crawl back in there to whoop asses! I've been cranky lately, and they don't wanna mess with me!
Author's Response: Yeah I thought I would make the guy everyone sees as a monster, nice for once. Yeah I'm trying to decide who forgives who first. they should be good for a while, or I will warn them too, so you don't have to come into a chapter and open a can of whoop ass! Thank you Kris!
Date: 10/06/08 07:19 pm Title: Some Truth
oooooooo so amazing can't wait for more. He better go to Adams place.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah Nick better not give him a chance to make a move.
Date: 10/06/08 03:52 pm Title: Some Truth
WOW! for once I saw Adam as a human awesome!! uumm little by little we are discovering those nasty secrets, amazing chapter
Author's Response: Oh yeah secrets linger everywhere dont they. See Adam isn't so bad is he! Thank you girl.
Date: 10/06/08 03:47 pm Title: Disenchantment
Mia can't take Nick from Raidyn! I know he was never technically her's, but I think she was getting close to getting a chance. I'm glad that Leigh is so kind and gave Ray a chance to help out for the evening. Hopefully Howie is that kind when he gets home...
Author's Response: Yeah, that really sucked, I think he was gonna give her a chance and here comes Mia all confident. darn it! I thought I would make Leigh's character a pleasant one. Thank you.
Date: 10/06/08 03:33 pm Title: Maybe So
Nick was so close....and AJ ruined it! lol. Grrr. Again, I feel for Raidyn and her being self-conscious about her image. Everybody seems to judge from outside appearance alone without getting to know the person deep down. I agree with Maria though...Rai should stay away from Nick until he proves he isnt all jacked up.
Author's Response: Yeah the influence friends can have over people is amazing. I feel for Raidyn too, cause sometimes people miss out on a great person, cause they only see the exterior. Glad you are into the story. Thank you so much.
Date: 10/06/08 03:23 pm Title: Stumbled Upon
I can't believe that I haven't started this sooner. What an amazing beginning. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more. I cannot believe what an ass Nick was towards Raidyn though. Men can be suck pigs. UGH! Hopefully he straightens up...but asshole rich boy could be interesting too...lol. Reading on...
Author's Response: Well I'm glad that you are interested now, and taking the time to read and review it. Yeah men are such pigs sometimes! Yeah you'll be surprised how he turns out. thank you very much.
Date: 10/05/08 09:58 am Title: No She Wouldn't
awsome job can't wait for more I hope they find ray.
Author's Response: They should, they might not like where, but they will. Thank you girl!
Date: 10/05/08 06:38 am Title: No She Wouldn't
HOLLY CRAP!!!! that was heavy i don't know what to say, good job....very nice chapter....i don't know just freaking awesome
Author's Response: *Blushes* Aw thank you Negris I'm glad you liked it.
