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Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/08 02:57 am Title: No She Wouldn't

Oye vey. If they would all SIT THEIR FUCKING ASSES DOWN & TALK CALMLY ABOUT ALL THIS SHIT they would be fine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes, Ray's frustrated me beyond belief!!!!! Argh!!!!!!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: Breath Lenni!!! *chuckles* Your right if they would all just confront each other then they would talk and either forgive each other or piss each other off more. haha! Thank you Lenni

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/08 12:52 am Title: No She Wouldn't

Holy crop! Their father is a monster. I hope he didn't do anything to their mother after they left.

At least AJ wants to be a good friend and take care of Mia but he needs to Lose Beth!

Hopefully Ray can forgive herself for what happened to to Nora. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response: Yes he is, someone needs to knock him out. Haha!! Yeah he wont be able to commit fully if Beth is always around will he. More soon. Thank you girl!

Reviewer: Nicklvr Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/08 12:32 am Title: No She Wouldn't

oh man oh man...this can't be good please ray dont do anything stupid..nick loves you !!!!update soon!!

Author's Response: I'm debating on making her do something stupid, not sure how that would flow. She is kinda complicating herself with Nick. More soon. Thank you.

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/08 12:22 am Title: No She Wouldn't

Oh no... She's going to do something really stupid isn't she? Mia should get checked out by a doctor. That sounded pretty brutal and she's at a very vulnerable place in her pregnancy. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: She just might, cause thats what we do when we are hurt...well some of us. Wow thanks Mellz for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Nicklvr Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/08 09:41 pm Title: Secrets and Lies

his dumb ass better go after her before she gets raped....omg please let her get away from adam ..please let her forgive nick atleast she nows now maybe everything can get bettter they do say it has to get better before getti worse rite?

Author's Response:

Aw what if Adam isn't so bad as he seems? Hey I like that saying and it's true, but then that means there is more drama to come. woohoo i like drama. Thank you!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/08 03:17 am Title: Secrets and Lies

Oye vey. can she NOT just let them explain!?!? I SAID she jumps to conclusions way too fucking fast & easy!

UPDATE!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: Haha! I'm getting that Ray is frustrating you. Imagine how NIck feels? haha! Thank you Lenni

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/08 08:46 pm Title: Secrets and Lies

So many questions! When do we find out who the daddy is? If it's AJ is he going to stop being an ass and do he right thing? Great chapter. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: We find out very soon, I promise. I'm still debating on where to take it. I think AJ just might be it...hehe! Thank you!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/08 08:11 pm Title: Secrets and Lies

Wow...great chapter! I feel so bad for Ray. I'm not really sure if I feel bad for Nick and Mia, because if they were honest...they wouldn't be in that situation. It would have gone over much better if Mia came right out to Ray and said hey...I'm pregnant and I don't know whose it is. The way it went down, makes it SO look like they were perposly doing this behind her back. I would have reacted the same way. nick is most likely right...he's lost her! He better come up with something really damn good...even then, his chances are extremely slim. Unless test get done and prove the baby to be not Nick's. I am kinda hoping that it will be AJ's and then he and Mia will be able to develop some kind of relationship. There is also still a chance that she'll lose the baby, too...there would be another bump in the road. Geesh! I really can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you...I'm glad you see it my way. I would so think the same thing if my man was in the clinic and I overheard them getting congratulated. I would think he's been cheating on me with her the whole time, that would only explain why they haven't told me anything and their sneaking around. Oh not to mention when I offered myself he turned me down. Right? Yeah I'm rooting for AJ to be the daddy too, I'm just still indecisive about it. Aaah!! THANK YOU KRISTAL. love ya!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/08 07:46 pm Title: Secrets and Lies

OMG I so loved it amazing job can't wait for m

Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you loved it, I debated so much on how she could find out that wuold make it look suspicious. thank you soooo much!

Reviewer: Negris Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/08 02:56 pm Title: Secrets and Lies

you don't miss any, oh dear good poor...everybody expect Adam he is a ass.. but come bring the drama at full speed hahahaha

Author's Response: Haha! Yeah Adam comes off as an ass, but maybe he just likes her. I LOVE DRAMA Negris!!! Thank you girlie!

Reviewer: Nicklvr Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/08 09:58 pm Title: Monday Madness

damn she is gonna kill nick...my god that stupid bitch..an nick well he's just nick...update

Author's Response: I know I would too, if he was checking someone out right in font of me. Thank you!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/08 07:18 pm Title: Monday Madness

he better behave... Awsome job. So can't wait for more. Keep up the amazing job u are doing.

Author's Response: Thank you *Blushes*

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/08 06:47 pm Title: Monday Madness

Oye vey. Nick is such a fucking horn dog!

And I'd a feeling Ernie was being abused - dunno why I had that feeling, I just did. Bastards! The lot of them!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: Yeah he is damn fool! You are funny (Bastards! the lot of them) haha!! Thankyou Lenni

Reviewer: Negris Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/08 05:35 pm Title: Monday Madness

Oh my god that last part was so funny, but am very sad for Ernie he is so cute and sweet and know you put him in that situation. DAMN YOU Erika LOL! just joking you know that i adore you

Author's Response:

Cool that is what I wanted, for it to be messed up, but funny! *Smiles wickedly* I adore you too!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/08 02:28 pm Title: Monday Madness

That Ray is going to kill herself with her diets and pills, and now throwing up?? I have a feeling that this is about to get ugly, well uglier. And Ernie? Oh man!! Oh, and Nick is a dog, cheking up that girl in front of her, tsk tsk, not good Nicky,lol. Hope to read the next chapter soon. Take Care!

Author's Response: Yeah she's desperate to get thin. It sucks! You re so right it's getting ugly alright. Thank you!