Date: 10/02/08 03:22 am Title: Loss of Face
oh ray gonna do a mess with his head over that, he is acting so good and now she don't believe it him, this one was such good party
Author's Response: Thank you...yeah everyone is saying it. He tried doing right and it looks to her like he's dissing her. Poor guy!
Date: 10/01/08 07:08 am Title: Loss of Face
Poor girl, the night was going so good, and that had to happen, insecurities are a bitch. Nick ended up being in trouble with her for finally thinking and doing the right thing, that's messed up,lol. Pleaseeee update soon., Love it, Take Care!
Author's Response: You said it girl. Insecurities ARE a bitch! I would know! Hopefully he can make it up to her soon. More trouble on the way...Thank you Yara!
Date: 10/01/08 06:55 am Title: Almost Goodbye
Great chapter. I'm happy they made up and that Mia didn't go thru with the abortion. By the way I have a bad feeling about who the other possible father of the baby might be, and if my suspicions are right he is a f*ing bastard. Taske Care!
Author's Response: Yeah me too. Maybe she was just freaking out you know. Bad feeling huh??? you might just be right on it. Thank you!!
Date: 10/01/08 06:41 am Title: Confessions
wow, it was weird seeing Nick like this, in a kinda sorta responsible mode. Hope Mia realizes what she's about to do and how much she will regret her decision later on. Nice chapter.
Author's Response: I know thought I would give him a twist you know. She will definately realize it, if she can get the support that she REALLY wants. THANK YOU
Date: 09/30/08 11:54 pm Title: Loss of Face
awww i feel so sorry for her i think he really is just afraid of screwing up an in return he screws up more...update ..let them be ok..let that kid be aj an mia an aj need to get together an beth needs to go bye bye!!!
Author's Response: yeah you said it, like he wants to do things right this time, but she just takes it personal. Haha! Beth going bye bye! Funny! Well I guess she is holding him back right! Thank you!
Date: 09/30/08 09:28 pm Title: Loss of Face
aw poor thing. they really need to just tell her about the baby or have a paternity test done. they are lying to her far too much. great update. cant wait for more. : )
Author's Response:
Yeah its going to be ugly when she finds out if they don't tell her soon. More soon. Thank you!
Date: 09/30/08 09:26 pm Title: Loss of Face
"Oye vey. The man is trying to protect her from stds & getting pregnant, & all she can think about is him thinking of her as repulsive???? C'mon!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: Haha!! Yeah us insecure girls take lots of things personal you know. Maybe once she finds out about his reasons she will understand...I think! Thanks Lenni
Date: 09/30/08 08:42 pm Title: Loss of Face
Oh that was so sad. I hope things work out for them.
Author's Response: Yeah I think it was sad, for her atleast since she is so touchy about her appearance. Thank you. More soon!
Date: 09/30/08 08:00 pm Title: Loss of Face
he should of just told her that he had to go to the store hehe.... so cant wait for more loved it.
Author's Response:
OMG!!! That had me busting up so bad. I can see him "Wait here Ray I have to go to the store" I bet if AJ would have been home, he would have excused himself and asked him for some. HAHAHA! Thank you!
Date: 09/30/08 07:26 pm Title: Loss of Face
ch.21
that was not just a cliff hanger that was a, what the fuck. Can she pull it together.
Author's Response: Ooh I like the sound of that!!! Hum...we will have to find out. I will update tonight. Thank you.
Date: 09/30/08 06:58 pm Title: Loss of Face
Alright, Erika, move over! I'm marching into the next chapter and I'm going to knock some heads! How dare he! If he didn't have protection...he shouldn't have let it go as far as it did..he should have KNOWN she would take it personal...HELLO Nick...just friggin use your tongue..at least it wouldn't have crushed the poor girl! Seriously! Or maybe..PLAN AHEAD! You could have made sure you had one BEFORE you picked her up...if you had intimate intentions. Do I have to hold your hand and walk you through this, step by step? Come ON Carter...seriously...you aren't THAT blonde, what are you? Two? You're a man...act like it, damnit! I don't blame the poor girl for feeling rejected. I oughta knock you in your teeth. >:-( *sigh*
I don't know why I put up with that boy! I don't know why Ray lets him be like that! She should just take charge and be like "You know what. I am fucking beautiful and if someone doesn't think so...screw them!" She could have just jumped his bones and not give him the chance to object! Lol. Update really really really soon!
Author's Response:
This is so funny, cause I have so many opinions going around. haha!!! I know I relate soooo much to Ray and I would have taken it person myself, cause how was it that he could do one girl in the bathroom and the other out in Washington. It would only make me feel like I'm not good enough to drive you that mad!! hehe! Oh my god you had me laughing when you said (Use your tongue) I'm still laughing as I type. LOL!!! By the way *cough cough* he just might need you to hold his hand, cause he is a damn fool. I love the AGRESSION that comes out of cheerful you when you review its so exciting and comical.
Ray is in love that is why she takes his shit. (Jump his bones) hahaha!! Your just hilarious love you for that *hugs Crystal tightly and giggles* wooohooo. Thank you so much!
Date: 09/29/08 05:32 am Title: Almost Goodbye
Oye vey in a half shell!!! Raidyn needs to know about the baby!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: She sure does and well it's coming up very soon girl! Thank you Lenni!
Date: 09/29/08 02:23 am Title: Almost Goodbye
Alright, you know what...Ima gonna knock Adam to his ass, too! Oh, and Ray's dad...don't even get me started on that bastard! What the hell is his problem? Why does he hate Ray do much? I'm glad that Mia decided against the abortion and that she stood up for Ray...but if she don't come clean soon...oooo! Ray is gonna seriously get hurt here! And Nick for making assumptions and telling her that if she didn't quit, they were over?!?!? What is his issue? I mean, seriously...is he THAT self absorbed? Sure, he came back around, but he shouldn't have said it, to begin with! I have a bad feeling about this. Ray is gonna get a broken heart and it's going to be AJ, Mia and Nick's fault! I sure hope you got some good stuff comin, otherwise Ima going to kill all your characters and then the story will be over! ;-) Grrr. Look at you...you got me all workied up! By the way, I'm still totally into the story...in case you had any question, about that.
Author's Response: *Laughs* Now poor Adam too!!! Yeah Ray's dad is a great issue at the time, he might mellow out soon. hehe! I love your reviews it's like you make my day or night. All reviews do (but you get so into it....haha) love it! Thanks Crystal really! Oh and I love the fact that you get all worked up...hehe
Date: 09/29/08 02:18 am Title: Confessions
Ooooooh! She better not! Ima gonna crack that chick in the friggin teeth if she gets an abortion! Rrrrr! And AJ for approving! I am personally going to make my way into that story and knock them AAAAAAALL around, because I am about fed up with it! AJ's a figgin dick...Nick's not much better, Mia is secrative and thinking about ABORTION! And all of them are leaving poor Ray out of the loop! Ooooo, you just let me at 'em!
Author's Response: Yeah I agree, she shoudl face the consequences of her actions. I think AJ is confused and might also want an easy way out. *Giggles at the mental picture of Crystal making a cameo in the story just to slap some sense into everyone and not verbally* hahaha! Thanks
Date: 09/29/08 01:45 am Title: Almost Goodbye
uuhh one dirty secret between mia and dad? and where the heck is ernie i miss him
Author's Response: Oh I know I'm working on Ernie, just debating on having him come back or just stay in the shadows. Hum...dad and Mia huh? I don't know! thank you girl.
