Date: 02/11/09 06:36 am Title: Chapter 57
Shit BETTER hit the fan!
Author's Response: haha it will no worries thanks 4 the review hun
Date: 02/11/09 06:00 am Title: Chapter 57
Oye vey in ah alf shell! If she doesn't tell the cops, the Bastard is just going to go out & do it again!!!!!! Does she really want for some other girl her age to up & go through the same damned thing!?!?! And watch her end up pregnant because of that sonofabitch!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: yea it sucks but shes scared and I guess embarrassed in a way of what happened...hopefully angel can convince her to tell someone, at least Denise or AJ...we'll see what happens but he will get what's coming to him. thanks 4 the review<3
Date: 02/04/09 05:20 am Title: Chapter 56
*shaes head* She needs to tell someone, so she can tell the cops, & can get checked for diseases & shit. Condom or no condom, the damn thing coulda broke! Also, statuatory rape!!!!! Adam NEEDS to be locked up!!!! The asshole!!!!!
GO A.J.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Not quite the can of whoop ass I'd hope for, but Yay nonetheless!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: lol im not good at opening a major can of whoop ass haha but i try lol hopefully Adam will get what's coming to him thanks 4 the review hun!
Date: 02/04/09 01:21 am Title: Chapter 56
WOW! Okay so a lot happened in this chapter, which was great by the way. She really needs to tell AJ what happened and I hope he beats Adams ass good. haha.. As for things with Denise I hope she realizes how much her behavior is hurting her and changes her ways and fix their realtionship. I also would like to see her and AJ be close as they were before and for her to lose the attitude she has with him. Great chapter. Hope to read more soon!
Author's Response: thanks so much...yes her AJ and Denise all need 2 fix their relationships with each other and AJ does need 2 kick his ass lol more soon hopefully
Date: 02/03/09 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 56
Great chapter! I love the the way it flows. cant wait til the next chapter so aj can flip out! lol!
Author's Response: thanks so much for the review! im glad u like it...the next chapter will be good lol :-)
Date: 01/30/09 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 55
This was a great chapter. I cannot believe that she would keep putting herself in bad situations. AJ is going to kill Adam and Ashley is going to have to lean on her brother and friends after this. Keep up the great job
Author's Response: thanks so much for the review! lets hope she learns from this more soon!
Date: 01/29/09 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 55
Oh no! And I have a feeling she'll be seeing D the next day....she's going to be busted!! She really needs to listen to her friends more often :-(
Author's Response: hopefully she'll learn 2 listen now we'll see what happens...thanks 4 the review!
Date: 01/29/09 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 55
Oh man! Well first i'm sorry i haven't reviewed the last few chapters. not a reader on my part. Anyways wow! This going get crazy. I was actually thinking maybe something bad had to happen before she realized her brother was right and she needed to stop this behavior but I wasn't thinking this!! Can't wait to see what happened next. Bye Ash!! :)
Author's Response: aww its good 2 c u again! thanks for the review...yea sometimes things just need 2 get really bad b4 you wake up
Date: 01/29/09 08:42 am Title: Chapter 55
oh gosh. it had to come to that. poor thing. i think she could have fought him off a little harder. man i guess aj is going to wish he was there eventually. cant wait for more!
Author's Response: thanks so much for the review more soon!
Date: 01/29/09 08:18 am Title: Chapter 55
Tsk, tsk. This is what she gets for partying, drinking, & not listening to her wiser, older brother. But damn! I hope A.J. finds out & beats the shit outta Adam, before I pull out the pointy stick I usually only reserve for Kevin, & shove it up the Bastard's ass!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: uh ohh the pointy stick! i think regardless he deserves it. Thanks 4 the review!
Date: 01/27/09 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 54
oh jeez ashley....this is not going to be the fun night she hoped for i bet. when will she learn?
Author's Response: hopefully soon because she needs a big wakeup call
Date: 01/27/09 05:52 am Title: Chapter 54
Aw man you need to put AJ back in this story :(
Author's Response: hes coming back dont worry
Date: 01/27/09 05:47 am Title: Chapter 54
GRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope A.J. or Nick is at this club, & I hope they kick her ass royally!!!!!!!!! If she were younger - hell, anyway - I'd yell for them to give her a few good smacks on the ass, to try & knock some sense into her! Obviously, grounding her doesn't do a damned thing! Yeesh!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: she's gonna get a wake up call, believe me haha and u crack me up thanks 4 the review hun<3 more soon i promise
Date: 01/20/09 05:23 am Title: Chapter 53
Oye vey in a half shell. Ashley is being SO stupid!!!!!!! Is she CRAZY to get together with a drug dealer!?!!?!? I hope A.J. reams her a new asshole for this!!!!!!! DAMN!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: ohh shit will hit the fan soon enough, promise thanks 4 the review!
Date: 01/19/09 10:26 am Title: Chapter 53
hes 22. damn. she just digs herself deeper and deeper. ouch.
Author's Response: yea, she's not making the best decisions at the moment...thanks for the review! :-)
