Date: 12/03/09 02:00 am Title: Chapter Fifty
Oh no, you need to fix this! That was so sad. Alex needs to get over whatever problem he has and go win her back. He definitely has some explaining to do, but their feelings for each other go past just fighting. She just needs him to reach out to her! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Aww, I'm gonna try, but sometimes these things just write themselves. And yes, Alex has lots and lots of explaining to do. I agree that he needs to reach out to her. Hehe, I hope you'll continue to read and give me feedback, because there's lots of stuff in store for them both!
Date: 12/02/09 01:40 am Title: Chapter Fifty
Oh and btw I meant glad everything is ok with YOU LOL obviously everything is not ok in this fic...and you need to fix that....now! LOL
Author's Response: LOL, yeah, I figured that's what you meant. And I'm working on fixing it ....I'm trying. LOL. Thanks!
Date: 12/01/09 06:35 am Title: Chapter Fifty
OMG! AJ why? Stop her... great update can't wait for the next...
Author's Response: Aww, cuz he's a guy. LOL, don't lose faith...there's more ahead. Thanks so much!
Date: 12/01/09 03:41 am Title: Chapter Fifty
PLEASE PLEASE ADD SOE MORE CHAPTERS
Author's Response: I just added one! I'm trying to get them up as quick as I can! Thanks for the comment! :)
Date: 12/01/09 03:17 am Title: Chapter Fifty
wow i know what it feels like to have your heart broken and that is pain that you never want to feel or go though again. i really really REALLY hope that this isn't the end of Morgan & Alex so he has to be doing something really really REALLY amazing so hurry up with it. all i am saying is that it's the holidays so we need some coziness up by the fire some sweet talking and other stuff but i guess you have to go though the rain in order to appreciate the sunshine. Sad but good chapter thanks for updating when you can, happy holidays to you and your family and please be safe. A fan always Hazel :)
Author's Response: Aww, yes, they are not fun and not something you ever want to have happen to you. LOL, you are too sweet and I really appreciate the reviews you leave. I will say it's not the end to them, because then what would I write about? LOL, I have more in store, and I hope you'll continue to stick with me and leave your thoughts. Thanks so much for the holidays wishes and I hope that you had a great holiday as well! Take care!
Date: 12/01/09 02:37 am Title: Chapter Fifty
WHAT??????? NO!!!!!!!!!! DAMMIT AJ!!!!!!!!!! They CAN'T break up!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE update again soon!
Author's Response: Awww!!!!!! I just updated! I'm sorry to make you wait and make you upset! I hope you'll continue to read! :) Thanks so much!
Date: 12/01/09 02:05 am Title: Chapter Fifty
...............................................................................................................*smacks alex*
Author's Response: Haha, that made me laugh out loud. Thank you! *smacks him too*
Date: 12/01/09 02:00 am Title: Chapter Fifty
WTF! Oh man oh man. Please fix it. Great chapter. but please fix them. They are soo perfect for each other!!!
Author's Response: Aww, I'm trying. They gotta go through the bad to get to the extra good...but I'm trying! Sorry to make you wait so long! :)
Date: 12/01/09 01:55 am Title: Chapter Fifty
Glad everything is ok. Loved this...update again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you. Sorry to make you wait. But I'm back! :)
Date: 12/01/09 01:47 am Title: Chapter Fifty
ouch. ahh what is his problem? after all thats happened between them thats what he does? eek
Author's Response: Awww I know right! You just wanna shake him! Let's hope he gets his act together soon! Thanks so much for the review and I hope you'll stick with me through this. :)
Date: 11/09/09 10:01 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Nine
Wow, I finally caught up on this story. I was even more behind than I realized. Sorry I took so long, but now I really need you to update because that was really good! I want to know what's up with Alex and I want them to fix what's wrong. They need to stop arguing. Update soon please. That was awesome.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you got caught up. And that's alright, you're caught up, so that's all that matters. I lacked for a few weeks in updates, everyone's allowed that once or twice lol. j/k. And I'm going to try to update as often as I can. I hope you'll continue to read and review. I enjoy hearing from you. :)
Date: 11/06/09 05:40 am Title: Chapter Forty-Nine
hmmm.... tsk tsk Alex must be hiding something more... I hope he can finally open up to Morgan... I think they make such a good couple... Love it please update soon.
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I promise you'll find out what's going on within the next few chapters. I'm going to do my best to get them finished so I can update and don't leave you hanging. Thanks so much for taking some time and leaving me the review. :)
Date: 11/04/09 04:18 am Title: Chapter Forty-Nine
OK, so I finally got all caught up. I've been working like crazy and had no idea how far behind I had gotten!
I still love this story! There has been so much going on that I don't even know where to begin! So I will go with some main points, and hopefully get back to my detailed reviews next chapter.
I love how you didn't make meeting mom all peaches and cream...that it took time for mom to accept her. I really think Denise would be leary of his girlfriends, because in reality, he has been burt so many times. I don't know that she would be quite so rude, but do feel it was more realistic that "Hi, I'm his mom, oh I just love you!"
Being a drama lover, I enjoyed, yet was infuriated with the whole Andrew thing. I'm glad that Alex was so protective, and ready to seriously pound the guy. I'm also quite happy, Andrew has been taken care of.
I'm on the edge of my seat, with all this argueing. They deserve to be happy. But, I agree with the women, about him paying for other people's shit. What's up with that? It's not right, but yet, it would not surprise me one bit, if AJ really did that. He is such a soft hearted person, no matter what he likes poeple to think, or how he comes across. AJ is a badass, but AJ is not the real person...Alex is, and Alex is a soft, caring, and trusting person. I can very much believe that something like this would really happen, and am glad that you are able to write and deliver a story that is fiction, but very believable. This is part of the reason I enjoy this story so much...I can really buy into it, without thinking "Yeah right, Alex would so not do that".
So in closing, I love the story...look forward to more...and think you have done a great job with the story-line.
Author's Response:
Yay on getting caught up! I've been wondering if you were still reading hehe. And I totally feel ya on the working like crazy thing. It's been taking over my life and it shows in my lack of updates. But I'm going to try harder.
I'm so glad that you brought up meeting his mom. I didn't want it to be like every other fic out there where they meet and they love each other right away and there are no real issues. It doesn't work like that in real life and I wanted to portray a different side of that. As for the rudeness; I would hope it wouldn't go down that way lol, but I wanted to add a little more drama than usual. But they made up ...so long as that sticks, I think things will be okay.
LOL and yes, it was about time Andrew was put away. I don't think he'll be back for awhile at least, if he comes back at all. It's not something I have written out, but I'm not going to worry or focus on that for a bit. There are bigger things on the table right now. And yes, if Alex had been let alone to do what he wished with him, Andrew would probably have ended up in the hospital. I'd considered a fight, but then thoubht better, because in real life, it probably would have landed Alex in jail. Oy vey.
And you're completely right about AJ/Alex. I wanted to show a vulnerable side to the man and show that sometimes he didn't have the control of his life that he wanted or felt he deserved. I want to bring up some issues between him and Morgan that aren't in all the other fics and something that could possibly happen. A part of me thinks that AJ does struggle with how he sees and feels about himself.
And thank you so much for the review. I really appreciate it and I love hearing what you think. I like to know if my readers think of it realistically or if there's something going on that doesn't sit right with them. I'm so glad I'm able to keep it believeable and that I'm continuing to draw you in. I look forward to hearing more from you. Thanks so much!
Date: 11/03/09 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Nine
That's more like it, a real full out fight!!! :) I love it, although I hate to see them fight, but it's a healthy thing for the relationship. I just hope that he finally opens up to her a little more... great update! I can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Yes, fighting is good in relationships. You hate it while it's going on, but afterwards you realize that it was needed. Thank you for the review and I hope you enjoy the next chp. It can't be sunshine and roses the entire time, can it? :)
Date: 11/03/09 08:44 am Title: Chapter Forty-Nine
hummmm blackmail? kid? i don't know but it has to be something big for Alexs to lose the best thing that ever happened to him. i hope this works it self out and he comes around to trust her and tell her! great chapter we are a a break up moment now but i think.... better yet i know that we will work though this! can't wait to read the next one, thanks for sharing! :)
Author's Response: Aww, I don't want to worry you, but I don't want to give anything away. All I can say is that everything will come to light in the next few chps, so stick with me. Things are going to be interesting and I can't wait to read your thoughts on them. You're so sweet and your reviews always make me smile. Take care, hon!