Date: 05/04/10 01:11 pm Title: ~* Stay Or Let Go*~
Holy shit Kel. That was an intense chapter...and I don't just mean the end! lol. The fight between them was very intense and I can totally see that happening in that situation. I'm glad that he voiced how he felt to her. And you wanna know something funny? With AJ's like "Yes, very nasty" I read it in my head with a lisp. It's like I can hear him say it and then you mentioned that he said it with a lisp. LOL. Good stuff. Can't wait for the next chap :)
Date: 05/04/10 01:01 pm Title: ~*Can't Change The Past*~
Wow at his confession. I'm sure that was scary to share but I'm it says a lot about him to let her know that. That was interesting.
Date: 05/04/10 03:46 am Title: ~*Help To Make It Through The Night*~
Aw. I can totally see him doing this. I love that he came to see her. I hope that he can help her turn things around.
Date: 05/03/10 08:53 pm Title: ~* Stay Or Let Go*~
Ah, I like this story more and more with each chapter. Shayne does need help and can't help but feel like them continuing to have sex is a mistake, like sex isn't gonna fix her problems or something...I don't know why. I feel like she needs professional help, more than AJ can give her. This is just one reader's opinion.
Anyway, another great chapter and I can't wait for another update! :) (Sorry if this review is confusing lol)
Date: 05/03/10 03:41 pm Title: ~* Stay Or Let Go*~
Well done on these chapters. So well written about shayne's feeling, thoughts, actions and about alex' feelings, thoughts and actions. It almost made me cry. And I haven't said anything about the sex scene, feeling hot hot hot! ;)
Author's Response: Awww girl. Thanks so much! I'm glad you are still enjoying it. Keep checking back for more. :)
Date: 05/03/10 05:09 am Title: ~*Can't Change The Past*~
I just read all the recent updates and I love them! I can't wait to see what happens next. You did some really great work. Shayne's really becoming a well-rounded character and it's making the story more and more interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks girl! Yeah, I think I'm starting to get inside of her head a bit. I appreciate the feedback!
Date: 05/03/10 03:43 am Title: ~*Can't Change The Past*~
I'm loving this! I'm curious as to when Shayne will need a drink and how you'll portray that. AJ is being really sweet to her and I like that he was honest with her question.
Can't wait for more! :D
Date: 05/03/10 03:02 am Title: ~*Help To Make It Through The Night*~
So effin cute. But a few ch's back, I don't like how AJ thought it was ok to drink. Ugh that bugs me in his latest real interview too!
Author's Response: Yeah, I understand where you're coming from. But it's still a real issue, so I'm trying to find ways to incorporate it. :) Thanks for reading!
Date: 05/02/10 11:47 pm Title: ~*Help To Make It Through The Night*~
Aw, AJ came all that way for her! How sweet, that's the kind of person we know him as, so caring. Poor Shayne, I really feel for her. I've felt and still feel some of the same things that she is right now. I hope AJ can help or at least be there to guide her through this rough time.
As always, thanks for the update and I like the new summary for the story. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, MA! I'm glad that her character, or bits and pieces of it anyways, is something you can relate to. I think she's a very relatable character and I'm growing to really love her. Oh yeah, thanks about the summary. The story has kinda taken a new direction than I initially intended so yeah, I thought it was due. :)
Date: 05/02/10 04:34 pm Title: ~*Shame*~
wowzah. getting to be an intense story. looking forward to more. xo
Date: 05/02/10 11:55 am Title: ~*Shame*~
This was some heavy stuff. Well written. Thank you.
Date: 05/02/10 10:54 am Title: ~*Set in Stone*~
Hey Girl,
Not sure if I commented before, but I'm following your story since the start. Love the way you write and how the story is devoloping. Keep on writing.
Date: 05/02/10 02:40 am Title: ~*Shame*~
Wow.Great chapter Kel. First off, poor AJ because I can only imagine how hard it is for him to try to keep himself on track while being smitten by Shayne, who essentially has the same problems. And poor Shayne. She definitely has some stuff going on. I'm glad that Gavin did what he did for her sake. But I really wonder what's going to happen with their relationship. Can't wait to see. Love the direction that the story is going in.
Date: 05/02/10 01:40 am Title: ~*Shame*~
Wow, I like where this going (or where it might be headed). Thanks for the update. :)
Date: 05/01/10 09:59 pm Title: ~*Righting The Wrong*~
Oh good, he ended it with Renee, finally! I hope it works out with A.j. and Shanye.
