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Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/09 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 27

Took them long enough, but I'm glad they finally said 2 eachother how hey truly feel. And what's with Sofia? Is she the second girlfriend now? That's 1 very open relationship, lol. Great chapter girls.

Reviewer: nickgene25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/09 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 33

Well that was a break through. I want to know more...please update soon!

Reviewer: nickgene25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/09 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 32

Nick was pissed. What Paige did was wrong and she knows it. I don't know if he should have forgiven her or not...on to the next chapter

Reviewer: nickgene25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/09 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 31

Wow Nick really is hurt. I love how you write his feelings and how is afriad to show them.

Reviewer: nickgene25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/09 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 30

I can see why he is hurt but this can't lead to anywhere good...oh no!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/09 11:53 am Title: Chapter 25

Great chapter!! Nice bday surprise. I don't like all the sharing that's going on I mean one time is great but everytime, definetly she's not like other girls, cause I'd be dead jealous ready, lol.

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/09 04:27 am Title: Chapter 24

I wonder what she has up her sleeve.

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/09 04:20 am Title: Chapter 23

Who would say they only been 2gether 4 such a short time, they're so comfortable with eachother already that they were able 2 do all that great, awesome, hot, kinky stuff, lol. They're the perfect couple. Greta chapter, very hot.

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/09 02:48 am Title: Chapter 22

Wow, I think this is 1 of the hottest scenes I've read in my life, u girls are amazing. I think I need 2 take a shower, soonnn, lol.

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/09 02:33 am Title: Chapter 21

Those girls are the devil, lol. Kinkyyyy. Poor Nick, or should I say, lucky Nick, lol

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/09 02:15 am Title: Chapter 20

Super hot!!! Loved it. Cant wait 2 see how that turns out. ( I'm glad he went 2 her & took her food, that was sooo sweet of him)

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/09 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 19

Great chapter. He's already hooked with her. He loves herrrr, he does. Let's see how that moving out thing works 4 them.

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/09 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 18

Awwww, I lovedddd this chapter. It was time 4 them 2 express how they really felt about eachother and 2 put their insecurities on the table and figure things out. I'm super happy 4 them, lets see how that boyfriend/ girlfriend thing goes 4 them.

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/09 08:45 am Title: Chapter 17

Awww, hope they come clean about their feelings. And AJ, serves u right 4 being so nosy,jajaja.

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/09 08:33 am Title: Chapter 16

Well, I'm glad things with her stepmonster didn't go that far. Great chapter, love the story so far.