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Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/09 09:17 am Title: Chapter 9

I'm glad she's ok. That would've suck big time. That said; finallyyy, it was time they finally did it. And look at that, he let her kiss him, jum. He likes her 2 nuch already. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/09 08:52 am Title: Chapter 8

He's already hooked on her. Well, I think she is 2. Bet the guys are going 2 kill him when he gets back. Loved the chapter, reallyyyy hot.

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/09 08:22 am Title: Chapter 7

Now take that you nameless girl,lol. Way 2 go Nick.

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/09 08:10 am Title: Chapter 6

That is one small city 4 sure.

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/09 07:57 am Title: Chapter 5

Nice chapter, pretty hot. She's evil,lol. Can u say blue balls,lol.

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/09 07:29 am Title: Chapter 4

Planned? That IS weird and kind of gross,lol. Nice chapter.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/09 07:25 am Title: Chapter 28

all the new chapter are amazing. so cant wait for more

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/09 07:22 am Title: Chapter 3

What are the odds, right? Í like her, she's playing the player. How does it feel Nick,lol. Great Chapter.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/09 07:08 am Title: Chapter 27

yay they said i love u's

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/09 07:01 am Title: Chapter 2

Nice chapter. DOn't like the way Nick treats the girls though, well, anything 4 a 1night stand, I guess.

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/09 06:54 am Title: Chapter 1

It serves you right Nick, you're not that important,lol. Nice start.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/09 06:25 am Title: Chapter 26

thay are so cute together...

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/09 06:05 am Title: Chapter 25

oh my god so hot...

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/09 05:14 am Title: Chapter 24

oooooo awesome job.

Reviewer: nickgene25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/20/09 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 23

wow I need a cold shower after that chaper. You are amazing at writing Erotica...AMAZING. I love this chapter but I wonder if there is going to be any resentment or hard feelings that usually occur after a couple invites another person in thier bed. I hope you update soon!