Date: 10/20/09 04:21 am Title: Prologe
Quite possibly one of the hottest chapters of fanfic I have EVER read! Great job! I can't wait to see the other's reactions either, hwen he doesn't show up...or Nick explaining THAT sex scene with AJ...lmao!! Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 10/19/09 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
Omg so fucking hot. Can't wait for more.
Date: 10/19/09 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow thier sex scenes are intense. I think Nick is starting to fall for her though. I wonder what the guys are going to do since Nick didn't show up to rehersals lol....Great chapter more soon!
Date: 10/19/09 06:52 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh my such a hot story can't wait for more.
Date: 10/19/09 12:59 am Title: Chapter 7
Nice forplay. I really hope we find out more about her soon. Great chapter
Date: 10/15/09 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 6
She really is a mystery isn't she? I wonder what her story really is. I am hooked lol..great job, update soon!
Date: 10/15/09 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ooooooo so amazingly good. So can't wait for more.
Date: 10/14/09 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ohhhhh a challenge for Nick Carter. Damn that chapter was beyond hot. You are very talented on writing Erotica....I wonder what is going to happen on the rollercoaster!
Date: 10/14/09 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
again wow! your an awesome writer!
Date: 10/14/09 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
Omg so hot. Can't wait to see what is going to happen between them.
Date: 10/14/09 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
wow that is a really intresting twists. Are we going to find out the girls true idenity soon? Very good filler chapter and very well written. I really love how AJ is protective and yet teases the hell out of Nick! Update soon.
Date: 10/13/09 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
all i can say is WOW!!!! i'm loving this story. can't wait to find out what happens next!
Date: 10/13/09 08:51 pm Title: Prologe
leave us hanging??? a few moe please?? lol
Date: 10/13/09 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
Omg u can't just leave it there, he better go.
Date: 10/13/09 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
wow what a tease. I know I couldn't tell Nick no lol...Great chapter. I really like how you make her control a room and how she didn't even have to fight that girl off of Nick..I wonder what she is like. Please update soon!