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Reviewer: Eileen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/10 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 80

I only started reading this story a few days ago, and have fallen in love with it. It's so good, but please write definitely and not definatly. I'm picky ha ha ha, maybe do a spell check before posting a chapter?
Will Nick get back with Paige? I think he should, but in the end he should end up with Lindsay. They are the perfect match, but he seems emotionally connected with Paige?

Reviewer: SCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/10 10:18 am Title: Chapter 80

mhmmm I don't know what to say ... it seems to be love between Nick and Linds but I'm able to get into that story with them ... I'm sorry for this ... :( I guess I'm the only one here who wants nick and paige relationship back and that the baby is Nicks .... :( hopefully it will hapen that they get another proper chance ... please let it be nicks baby ... thanks for the update of the last 3 chapters ... please update soon and have a nice not so stressful week :) take care

Reviewer: nicksbeautifulwoman Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/10 12:10 am Title: Prologe

Love the update! :-D

Reviewer: Xhex30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/10 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 80

THANK YOU FOR ANOTHER AMAZING AND HOT UPDATE!!!!!
this chapter is a recent proof for me, that Iīm right!!! haha... cause this loving behave, that nick and linds have...he and paige never have (or am I only getting old and canīt remember... ^^) aaaand they donīt need any "acrobatic or adventurously sex", to have a FANTASTIC time!!!!!
i love how they talk to each other...how comfortable theyīve been together!!!

I am astonished, he want that lindsay joines him on tour!!! and he wants to plan it in the vacation, so she had not to choose, between school and him!!!

and paige...hmmm...my friend masquerade and i wonder if SHE is "the beautiful lie" and if she will cause them many problems in the future!!!
LOOOOVE YOUR STORY!!!!! take care!!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 80

awww they are just so cute together. i cant wait for more. amazing job, loved loved loved it

Reviewer: Masquerade Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/10 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 80

i love how lindsay and nick act and talk together... they are so sweet and hot... and wow... i was speechless for a moment as nick asked her to come along with him on tour... i know paige was there too when they were together but this seems different, this whole relation between them seems more intensive than with paige ...the feelings for each other are really strong and i hope it will last forever... so PLEASE... i don't want this baby is nicks...

god.. it's really hard(?) for me to write in english... hope my comments are not to confused for you...:D

have a nice week...and you know i'm still waiting for a new update...

Reviewer: Nikkix3BSB Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/10 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 79

Okay so paige is totally hiding something, and i really hope she dont mess up nick and linds relationship,, i love the story deff my fav

Reviewer: Xhex30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/10 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 78

nick and lindsay are for me the perfect couple, and how they act together is so wonderful! it seems so different between them. they act so tender and sweet!!!

I hope paigeīs baby isnīt nicks and that she donīt want him back!! but when itīs like this, i hope nick can resist her!! it seems he likes her much, but not love her...he feels sorry for her...and i really really hope this is the only reason, why he wants her to stay!!!

i canīt wait for more and i want to read about their date...
i wish you a beautiful week and don't let yourself put under stress!!!
I already look forward to a new update!!!
take care!!! =)

Author's Response: Aww thank you. I'll be updating some more soon.

Reviewer: Fernanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/10 04:25 am Title: Chapter 78

I've been reading this story for the past few days and I can't stop now. I loved the relationship that Nick and Paige had. I was so sad when they broke up :(
Now I know that Lindsay is amazing and all but I don't know, I really hope that Nick and Paige could work things out and be together again. oh! and I have the feeling that Paige's baby is Nicks.

Please update SOON!! :D

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/10 04:16 am Title: Chapter 78

loving the updates. I was in lindays position exactly until a few months ago and now im kinda in her position now so its interesting to read..

by the way i think you meant lindsay here..

"Paige hissed as his hand brushed against her and he couldn’t help but press his thumb against her clit."

Author's Response: haha woops! Guess thats what happens when you update half asleep haha! I changed it now

Reviewer: nicksbeautifulwoman Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/10 03:22 am Title: Prologe

They are so sweet!! Lindsay seems like a great match for Nickolas. I love how they are so cutely infatuated w/ each other. Can't WAIT to see what happens on their date!! Update soon!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/10 12:41 am Title: Chapter 78

awww that are so cute together love them. i have a gut feeling that the baby is going to be nicks not her step-fathers. i so cant wait for more. amazing job.

Reviewer: Xhex30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 77

YES...PLEASE...PLEASE...PLEASE...UPDATE...WE NEED MOOOOOORE!!!! ;-)

Reviewer: SCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 77

it would be soooooo nice from you if could upload a lil more today ;) ya know we're all addicted in your story ;) thanks greets from carterheaven ;)

Reviewer: SCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 08:27 am Title: Chapter 77

mhmmm don't know what to day ... I guess I'll be ever pro Paige and Nick ... Sorry I don't get into the thing with Linds :( ... Secrtly I'm hoping that the bady is Nicks and not from the Step-monster ....
deep down in my heart I hope nick and paige get another chance one day ... sorry that I don't agree with all the others .....but anyway it was a good chapter .... please update soooooooon can't wait for more THX