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Reviewer: JordansLady Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/12 02:17 am Title: A Forced Marriage That Turns Into A Happy Ending

I hope you update soon



Author's Response: im going to as soon as i can would u happen to want to help write the story?

Reviewer: bouncerok Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/11 01:40 am Title: A Forced Marriage That Turns Into A Happy Ending

I love it please update asap must know wha going to happen next



Author's Response: it should be soon my bata is helping i think lol she been going threw a lot but as soon as i can i will add a new chapter

Reviewer: Kaos_Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/11 10:15 pm Title: A Forced Marriage That Turns Into A Happy Ending

oh man i love this story to be honest at first thot was weird bt im lovin it..please update!

 



Author's Response: thanks im trying to get it done my friend who helping me out has been really biz im hopeing to get it finished soon

Reviewer: Carterkid Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/10 01:42 am Title: A Forced Marriage That Turns Into A Happy Ending

I read you have a beta reader but the grammar is still a little off.lol

Author's Response: I asked both of my beta's to look it over I'm not sure when they will get to it but I hope soon I also use my computers word programe to help but I am trying I hope ur likeing the story other wise

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 05:55 pm Title: A Forced Marriage That Turns Into A Happy Ending

Hey girl. Did you work on the chapter and send it to me? I can't wait to start it.

Author's Response: The one we worked on?

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 05:28 pm Title: A Forced Marriage That Turns Into A Happy Ending

Oh this was so sweet. At least they like each other enough to give it a try. And a new Jeep was such a wonderful gift. I can see them falling in love. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Thank you I'm glad u liked the chapter. I'm going to add the next chapter today after I clean lol. Next chapter is going to be there wedding night hehehe got to add the carter love in to it hehehe

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/10 09:44 pm Title: A Forced Marriage That Turns Into A Happy Ending

I think you could do with someone to help out with the spelling and layout of the story.

I'm not having a go at you, just offering some advice :)

Author's Response: I have someone ito do that for me :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/10 09:01 pm Title: A Forced Marriage That Turns Into A Happy Ending

Sure. Sounds good to me.

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/10 08:27 pm Title: A Forced Marriage That Turns Into A Happy Ending

This was sweet. At least they have a lot in common. My only suggestion is get a beta reader for the grammar. Other than that great story so far.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Would you like to be that? Ill add you tomorrow so you can go over the storys?

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/10 07:44 pm Title: A Forced Marriage That Turns Into A Happy Ending

Well parents really suck. At least theirs do. Keep the updates coming.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Stay tooned

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/10 07:42 pm Title: A Forced Marriage That Turns Into A Happy Ending

Oh I am really going to like this one. I hope they fall in love and he tells his management, parents and jen to f off. How can they do this to him? Keep up the great work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: I'm glad u like it just came to me :) but I am glad u like I I will add another chapter today

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