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Reviewer: Nikkix3BSB Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/10 03:26 am Title: There's a Hole in My Heart

Okay.. So its sad what happen to chelsea i totally cried. But i really like Abby. I think her and Nick will have something?? Im hoping..

Author's Response: It was extremely sad what happened to Chelsea :( I cried too as I was writing it! I really like Abby too, I think she'll be a good support system for Ally.

Reviewer: Lynzer4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/10 01:10 am Title: There's a Hole in My Heart

Do I sense a spark between Abby and Nick... Me Likely.... While Chelsea might be gone and no one can ever replace her I think Abby might be the person to step into the friend role.... and also maybe the "mom" role.

Its hard to say great last few chapters... not bc they are not good but bc its hard to stay something so sad is great. It feels real -- reading these last few chapters. I lost an uncle in a car crash 5 years ago last month. I can see and feel the pain Ally is feeling.

Love teh story and can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response: Abby and Nick have a lot in common - they both seem to think alike which is nice to have reinforcement sometimes. And I know what you mean about it hitting home. Car accident or not I think a lot of people can relate to a gone without goodbye - that life can change in an instant with absolutely no control over it. I am sorry for your loss and hope you know that your uncle is in a better place right now, sometimes life is just a stepping stone to bigger and better things. :)

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/10 12:15 am Title: There's a Hole in My Heart

Boy, Jen has some BIG ASS BALLS for showing up at the hosptital.  I can NOT wait to hear what AJ told her.  It's probably what she needed to hear..I hope.  An x-rated version of buzz the hell off!

Is Abby single?  If she is, I bet Ally is formulating step 1 of "find a girlfriend for Nick"...lol!  That's another positive she can add to her list!

Great update!



Author's Response: Thanks :) yes, Jen is something else, I can't wait to see what Alex said to her. And you think Abby would be good for Nick?? ;)

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/10 12:04 am Title: There's a Hole in My Heart

excellent update! ally seems to be doing better... that makes me happy!



Author's Response: Yeah, Ally is rational even when it comes to her grief it seems :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/10 10:39 pm Title: There's a Hole in My Heart

Nick is one awesome father & Ally knows that. He can't take her pain away but he can help. I really want to know what Alex said to Jen. Man I know he edited what he told Ally. With his mouth defiantly xrated. I like Abby. Very sad about her son. Hey maybe she would be good for Nick. Both a bit older & looking for that someone special. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: I reallyy want to know what Alex said to Jen too!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/10 10:00 pm Title: There's a Hole in My Heart

I'm glad that Nick and Abby are telling Ally to focus on the positives. That's so sad about Abby losing her son, but at least Ally knows that she understands how she's feeling and that there are better days ahead. I hope that Ally's hand surgery will go well. Thanks for the update. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, they're 2 positive influences she absolutely needs right now :)

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/10 01:10 pm Title: There's a Hole in My Heart

Ow no...she died. That's sad.
But yes, Ally you need to fight, for her.

Author's Response: She's tough, she'll get through it

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/10 10:37 pm Title: There's a Hole in My Heart

Oh man this made me cry. She lost her best friend. Just when she was getting her life together. Maybe Abby can help her & Nick. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/10 10:30 pm Title: There's a Hole in My Heart

Oh shit Chelsea died. I hope Ally can pull through this. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/10 05:13 pm Title: There's a Hole in My Heart

So sad about Chelsea...I know that'll it definitely won't be easy but I hope that Ally can work to heal after that loss. Poor Nick...I'm sure he was attached to her as well, especially with him letting her stay there. I know they'll be ok as long as they have each other to heal. Great writing again, can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) And yes, Nick was attached to her as well. :(

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/10 01:13 am Title: There's a Hole in My Heart

Poor Ally she got a long road head of her and cant believe Chelsea died :( that so said.

Abby sounds really nice doc



Author's Response: Chelsea dying is really sad :( It was so hard to write but I knew this is where her character was headed from the very beginning. Hopefully Ally can overcome her grief and live her life the way Chelsea would've wanted her to.

Reviewer: elleinad Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/10 10:39 pm Title: There's a Hole in My Heart

this is so sad, but maybe many really great things will come from it? excellent work!



Author's Response: Like Abby said, when you feel like you're at the end of your rope - tie a knot and hang on :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/10 08:20 pm Title: There's a Hole in My Heart

So sad. :( :( Poor Ally, but I know she can make it. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: I know she can make it too - she's tough!

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/10 11:21 pm Title: There's a Hole in My Heart

Well now I'm hysterical myself....is Chelsea still alive or not? horrible, not thise chapter though, it was a good one.

Author's Response: Yeah, it's horrible :(

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/10 11:10 pm Title: I Wish My Life Was Normal

Thanks for chapter 7...I wonder if Nick still has some feelings for Jen.

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