Date: 06/03/12 04:17 pm Title: Snowed In
the first four chapters doesn't have any mistakes as far as I can see.
Chapter 14 and 15 doesn't have any mistakes as far as I can see.
The rest you may want to go over,That's what....Nine chapters? LOL
Date: 06/03/12 04:09 pm Title: Snowed In
Oh love the ending!
Date: 06/03/12 03:44 am Title: Snowed In
Another great chapter :)
Date: 06/02/12 07:28 pm Title: Snowed In
sorry about thoose last two posts,I was half asleep writting.You may have to proof-read its not the the spelling but missing words here and there.
Author's Response: Thank you. Did you notice anywhere specific cuz it's been awhile since I've looked at this one.
Date: 06/01/12 04:02 am Title: Snowed In
going to be gone on vacation,i'll read the rest when i get back.do you want me to review the chapters 2-9?
Author's Response: If you want to yes or you can just send me an email. either way works for me.
Date: 06/01/12 03:53 am Title: Snowed In
omg!!!Pregnant?Its could be nick's kid
Author's Response: It could be:D Thank you!
Date: 06/01/12 03:30 am Title: Snowed In
this is really cool,I've never read a story like it
Author's Response: I try to color outside the lines every now and again :) Thank you!
Date: 06/01/12 03:10 am Title: Snowed In
On this chapter,you left out a few words but only on two sentences as far as I see.
Author's Response: okay. I'll check it out.
Date: 06/01/12 03:05 am Title: Snowed In
OMG...OMG,We used the same name LOL
okay I won't give any more of mine away this is a great story so far.I'm on chapter 11 already!
Author's Response: LOL Taking you like it then? :) Thank you
Date: 12/27/11 08:51 am Title: Fun In The Sun
Amazing story. Thanks for writing it!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading it. I'll have the third in the seasons of love series up in the next couple of weeks.
Date: 12/11/11 04:22 am Title: Fun In The Sun
Loved the way you ended it, with a cliffhanger. I can't wait to see what is going to happen with Nick and Krista. Great story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I still have two more seasons to go and still have to keep Kevin and Skylar in the mix. After all they are the reason Krista and Nick met:)
Date: 12/11/11 03:13 am Title: Fun In The Sun
Oh yes she is moving in with him. But what she said about explaining him to the women she hung out with. Who cares what they say. She's not ashamed of him is she? So there's 2 more left? I can't wait to read them.
Marguerite
Author's Response: There are two more and she's not ashamed more just worried about their jealousy lol. Thank you!
Date: 12/11/11 01:25 am Title: Fun In The Sun
Well that was hot. I want an office encounter like that. YOWZA. Those two are right for each other. Keep up the great work.
MArguerite
Author's Response: I like a lil steam every now and then myself. As for Nick and Krista, they do seem to balance each other out dont they? Thank you!
Date: 12/11/11 01:16 am Title: Fun In The Sun
SO he was kind to the psycho. Good for him. Now for the hot office scene. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite
Author's Response: Yeah but Krista was to thank for that. All it takes is the love of a good woman to make you see the light. thank you!
Date: 12/10/11 08:08 am Title: Fun In The Sun
OMG....hot, hot, hot!!!!!
Author's Response: I guess that worked for you eh? :p Thank you!