Date: 07/25/11 09:05 pm Title: In Pieces
Honestly I was a little disapppinted to see that you decided to continue this story. I LOVED the way rhe first one ended so abruptly leaving things up to our imagaintations. That being said, you are wacko! lol Great descriptions and just a chilling read. LMAO loved the literal use of In Pieces. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Mare! I was always planning to continue it; if I could have gotten the whole story down in 3000 words without short-changing it, I would have done so in the original challenge. This is just the rest of the story I had in my head then, that I wanted to finish telling. It still leaves a lot of questions unanswered, but it feels like a story to me now, instead of an unfinished scene. I'm glad you liked the descriptions, and thanks for the compliments! >:)
Date: 07/25/11 04:37 pm Title: In Pieces
That's what I thought she was doing! LOL. Julie you crazy fan ;) I know it was you. You did a great job of writing these years apart, yet it flowed like you wrote them the same time.
Fantastic!
Now how am I supposed to write sappy love stuff with images of this in my head? lol
Author's Response: LMAO Thanks Lore! It's weird that it took me so long to finish this, because I had the whole story in my head when I posted the first part, but somehow in stopping at the word count, I kinda lost my drive to finish telling the story. I had to go back and do some rereading, but once I got started, it came together. I'm glad you felt it flowed as if I'd written them all at once. Thanks so much!! Um, good luck with that sappy stuff... =P
Date: 07/25/11 04:37 pm Title: In Pieces
HOLY SHIT ZDR! I love you! I love your twisted mind and the way it came up with this. I mean the first half (which you already knew my love of lol) was twisted enough. But chopping off AJ's arms and Kevin's legs?! That's epic! And I love that it was probably a psychotic fan, someone who's intelligent along with being completely warped in the head.
This was horrifying, and epic. SPP!
Author's Response: Back at ya, ZDR! This is where the rest of the story was always going; I'm glad I finally got around to actually writing it down LOL. I had to live up to my title as Choppage Queen! YEAH YOU KNOW ME! Glad you enjoyed! ;)
Date: 07/25/11 04:20 pm Title: Watch Me As I Bleed
oh my gosh! I have an idea of what she's doing. gruesome, but must read continuation.
I'm sad I missed this challenge, sounded like it was fun.
Author's Response: Thanks, Lore! This was a fun challenge!! I hope we do it again sometime; it's one that could easily be repeated.
Date: 07/25/11 10:30 am Title: In Pieces
Poor AJ and Kevin being left like that and to deal with the deaths of Nick, Brian and Howie :( How awful for AJ to have to re-live the ordeal through his police statement.
She was a truly sick in the head fan.
Really enjoyed reading this Julie, you managed to capture the terror perfectly.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Steph! It was hard to put some of that into words; sometimes I think there are no words that can truly capture an emotion as strong as pure terror, but I tried my best. I'm glad you liked it!! :)
Date: 07/25/11 10:12 am Title: Watch Me As I Bleed
Wow, what a complete psycho! Poor Howie having to endure endless amounts of torture before finally being put out of his misery, and Nick, oh god that was horrific, especially with his eyes blinking when his head was severed. Brian, oh god, poor guy choking on his own blood and not being able to do a thing.
This is so gruesome, but I love it! *clicks to read In Pieces*
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Steph! Glad you liked the story, even though it was sick and gruesome. =D
Date: 08/21/08 09:36 pm Title: Watch Me As I Bleed
I would love to see a second part to this. I want to know what happened to Kevin and AJ.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm definitely going to write a second part at some point to explain what happened to Kevin and AJ... mwahaha.
Date: 08/18/08 11:24 pm Title: Watch Me As I Bleed
Oh god I can't believe you stopped! You have to carry on! LOL is she trying to make one super backstreet boy?!
Author's Response: LMAO... I'll answer that question in the continuation, which I will write... at some point. LOL Probably not real soon cause I am crazy busy right now, but I definitely plan to finish it.
Date: 08/18/08 05:25 pm Title: Watch Me As I Bleed
You, my friend, are one CRAZY person. This was bloody and gruesome. This reminds me of both Saw and Texas Chainsaw Massacre combine. Really, really sick.. lol Great job.
Author's Response: LMAO I'll take that as a compliment. =D I guess I accomplished the task at hand! LOL Thanks Veronica!!
Date: 08/18/08 05:34 am Title: Watch Me As I Bleed
Nicely done, my dear! I was all like, unwillingly pictureing it and getting all queezy and stuff...so yeah...I'd say you accomplished the challenge!
Author's Response: LOL yay! Thanks Kristal!
Date: 08/18/08 04:26 am Title: Watch Me As I Bleed
OMG! Wow! lol crazy! nice work though!
Author's Response: LOL thanks! Glad you liked it!
Date: 08/18/08 03:32 am Title: Watch Me As I Bleed
Okay... wow and yuck and amazingly written! And... thank you so much for leaving us all hanging!
Author's Response: LOL thank YOU for the review! =P I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 08/17/08 10:24 pm Title: Watch Me As I Bleed
That was freaking amazing! And extremely gruesome and scary. And what a freakin cliffie!!! I need to know the rest =(
Author's Response: LOL thanks Sel!! And the cliffie... I know, right? I'm going to write a "sequel" at some point... like hopefully soon while my inspiration is still there LOL.
Date: 08/17/08 07:21 pm Title: Watch Me As I Bleed
I'm jealous. I wish I had written this, cuz it's amazing. I'd go so far as to say it's eggzellent.
Author's Response: Wow! That means a lot coming from you cause you are way more eggzellent at this stuff than I am! Thanks, Julilly! =D
Date: 08/17/08 06:50 pm Title: Watch Me As I Bleed
oh come on, you had to stop it there lol, very well written for a horror story.
Author's Response: LOL you know I had to. ;) Thank you!!
