Date: 05/07/12 10:39 pm Title: When My World Is Crashing
Hi Mellz! I have been following this serie for quiet a week already and it is amazing!!
I liked a lot the way you manage to describe all these years of the relationship between Alyssa and Nick, it was so clear. The way they went thru all the ups and downs its simply incredible and it surprises me to find that there is a big story ahead of them...
Hope you can find a way soon to balance your moving, job and writting!
Date: 08/26/11 02:46 am Title: A Little Taste of Sin
awe... yay finally together! nice Job!
Date: 08/24/11 11:09 pm Title: A Little Taste of Sin
oh boy... alyssa is really confused huh? finally Nick is leaving shayla again for good... ok on to the NeXT
Date: 08/24/11 10:57 pm Title: A Little Taste of Sin
omg... poor Zoey awe! ok this was sad...
Date: 08/22/11 05:40 am Title: A Little Taste of Sin
poor Ian... yes at first I thought it was Sean
Date: 08/22/11 05:25 am Title: A Little Taste of Sin
well this was one christmas! awe... for alyssa deciding to name the baby Zoe
Date: 08/18/11 03:46 am Title: A Little Taste of Sin
oh man shayla is no fool! man this is crazy and messy! but good! ok next chapter...
Date: 08/16/11 08:38 pm Title: A Little Taste of Sin
well Meg is right let's hope Alyssa can have that talk with Nick... hmm this is getting good... on to the next
Date: 08/16/11 08:07 pm Title: A Little Taste of Sin
still reading... wow nick has bewitched her! boy what will happen when Sean comes back?!? ok on to the next few chapters
Date: 08/11/11 11:55 pm Title: A Little Taste of Sin
OK when I started reading this I was like... ok shayla did not really propose that to alyssa OMG! phew then I got to the April fools thing I was ok good... you scared me there ok on to the next chap.
Author's Response:
I almost forgot about this lame April Fool's joke. I think I meant to take it down afterwards, but never did. I hope you enjoyed the REAL Chapter 19 MUCH better LOL.
Date: 08/11/11 12:18 am Title: A Little Taste of Sin
uhm... wow ok bad Shayla! but also bad Alyssa! oh boy trouble is brewing... ok so I am not for the whole I infidelity but I can see why this is happening... ok on to the next.
Author's Response:
Yea... It is definitely a grey area and I am totally against infidelity to. I really tried to acknowledge both sides of the issue the best that I could with this story. There are definitely moments where you want to smack them both for being so selfish, but other times you can't really blame them. I hope you are enjoying!
Date: 08/06/11 09:47 pm Title: A Little Taste of Sin
uhoh... what a dream. haha she finally adimitted outloud! ok uhm on to the next chapter... gotta go see what happens.
Author's Response:
Sorry for not responding to your feedback. This time I was the one witrh internet issues but I should be back now. Haha Yepp... The truth is finally starting to come out!
Date: 08/05/11 01:41 am Title: A Little Taste of Sin
Lord hopefully Nick does not take AJ's advise i dont think alyssa will be comfortable with that! Ok uhm nothing bad in can say evrything is flowing good and very well elaborated.., continuing on
Author's Response:
We'll see about the pictures. They were supposed to come back later on in the story but the idea kind of fizzled out. I am glad to hear that you are enjoying it.
Date: 08/04/11 08:36 pm Title: A Little Taste of Sin
ok sorry for the delay in reviews was really busy with work and i was out of town this weekend but i am reading and i have to say i smell trouble with this friendship between alyssa and Nick. liking it sorry mel for the long time but stay assured i will review More now that i am on reading mode. i have no computer so all this is being done through my iPhone. ok on to the NeXT few chapters
Author's Response:
Oh man! That has to suck trying to read and review an entire story on your iPhone! Thanks for being a trooper though and staying committed.
Date: 07/23/11 03:50 pm Title: For the First Time
I enjoyed this chapter! good one!
