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Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/10 12:23 am Title: Bad feelings

That was such a sweet chapter!!  I love that they are getting closer and closer!! 

 

How bout....one of the sibs says something about seeing a possible Nick sighting in NJ...see how THAT plays out and how Pepper handles it.  

 

And yay!! You used my sardine sammich idea! 

 

Still loving the story!! And can't wait to see the other fellas reactions when Nick finally tells them the reason they are there...



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it lady! =) And yes, so do I. I really love love love how I'm getting them to be towards one another. And you just gave me a wonderful idea for a Nick sighting =) You're gonna love it when it happens. I'm currently debating how to managed the sibling visit and the guys' visit. I think I have something but we'll see how it pans out when I write it =) I literally got 2 reviews within five seconds of each other so this makes me happier lol. One of the readers on the other site this is on gave me a craving I know I'm going to put the guys through Nick having lol. Hopefully I'll be updating soon, but this cold/virus is kicking my ass, hence the lack of updates lately.

Reviewer: nicksbeautifulwoman Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/10 12:21 am Title: Bad feelings

Love the update!! Great story, you're a great writer!

Author's Response: Yay I love reviews! lol And thank you so much for the compliment! Things like that spark creativity!