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Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/11 11:55 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Six

I'm glad you are back! Poor Brielle, too bad the paparazzi were almost stalking her. Great update!



Author's Response:

Aww, I know; the poor girl. And thanks so much! Hopefully I'll be updating this one more often. :)

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/10 03:19 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

I just read all the chapters in like 2 days and... I LOVE THIS STORY! I mean, is amazing! The way they meet, and know they are going to marry! I thought that Renee wasn't pregnant, I knew it. I can't believe she is still making their life miserable, I hope they do something about it. This was so cute! The proposal, the roses, everything <3 Can't wait for more <3



Author's Response:

Aww I'm so glad you do! I love meeting new readhers so welcome! Thank you for your wonderful review and I hope you'll stick with me and enjoy what's to come. So glad you liked the proposal. :) Thanks again!

Reviewer: WishingOnAStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 03:25 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Cute chapter, although I'm still not sure how I feel about them moving sooo freakin fast! However, if a guy gave me a 2 1/2 karat diamond I'm pretty sure I'd say yes regardless! :) Haha, I can't wait for the next update. I'm interested to see where you go from here.

Author's Response:

Yeah they are moving pretty fast. Let's hope it doesn't mess anything up for them. LOL @ you and the ring. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 09:49 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Awe that was so amazing the proposal. I just wow. I can't wait for the next update... hope its soon.:)

Author's Response:

Aww thank you lol. I had been trying to figure out something cute and different and not cliche and I think that fit the bill. Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: AJsCuTiePiE93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 06:10 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

HOLY SHIT did NOT see this one coming.......:)

Author's Response:

LOL glad I still can surprise you. :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 04:42 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

AWWWWWWWWWW! AJ proposed! Beautiful! Wow, this chapter was long, I thought it would never end. lol An amazing update. :D

Author's Response:

Aww hehe thanks. And sorry about the long chp. Hope you'll keep reading. :)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 02:56 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

''“Mm, good.” Then he kissed her again and again, over and over until they were both breathless and holding each other tight, their hearts beating wildly against their chests. And in that moment, Alex knew he was right where he needed to be and Brielle was right where she belonged…forever.''
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW HE DID IT!!! SUCH A LOVELY MOMENT!!
AWWWW
They are growing together, they even has a code!!! LOVELY the way she makes him think.. and the cuss thing.. the things we do for love!


NEXT!
Please, dont take this long!!!!

Author's Response:

Aww hehe so glad you liked that. :)

And yeah, I figured they would need one with certain situations they may get into. A total couple thing though hehe. And so sorry about the delays! Hope you'll keep reading. :)

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/10 11:06 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

What a b-iatch that Sarah, I'm glad Alex turned to Brielle and not to the bottle ;)

Author's Response:

She is so horrible lol, but her name is Renee (though I totally know who you're thinking about lol). And let's hope Brielle can keep his mind off the bottle. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: WishingOnAStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/10 05:34 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

I knew we hadn't seen the last of Renee!!! Part of me says Alex shouldn't even give Renee the satisfacation of making a statement or doing a reply interview. That's what she wants. She wants him to go into panic mode. But I guess I'll see in time. Great update! I can't wait for the next!

Author's Response:

She's a sneaky one. And I think you have a really good point. Just ignore it and hopefully it will fade away. She really does want him in panic mode and to look the fool. Let's hope it doesn't work out. Thanks so much for the feedback!

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/10 05:22 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

WOW! I'm thirsty here.... and wanting that wall thing with him too!!!! Jesus....
WOW!
Okay, we all knew that R Bitch would do something like that, thank God he haves Brie to put some sense on his mind. He needed to do what he needed to do... he drank Brie... okay he ate her too... but hey! Who's bitching about it? lol
And the press.. oohhh Summer.. she will be mom then.. poor Mcleans!
Oh this burger trip... trouble or not? I WANT SOME TOO!!!
NEXT! And PLEASE don't take too long!
Congrats for the Felix nomination! You had my vote!

Author's Response:

Ooh was that good for you? lol I hope so. Renee is sure trying to keep messing things up for them, let's hope she can't keep doing it. LOL I love your metaphor there with him and Brielle. I'm so sorry about the delay in posting, but I'm swamped with work. And you're such a sweetheart! Thank you for your support with my fic. PS. have you checked out my latest story Breathe Again? I think you'd like it. :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/10 04:08 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

I had a feeling that Renee would do something like that...what a bitch. I hope that AJ and Brielle can figure out the whole pregnancy/birth/tour/post-birth thing, that's gonna be tough. Ah, it's too bad that AJ can't have lots of sex every time he wants to drink...

Thanks so much for the update, I was where you/your stories went! :)

Author's Response:

It's definitely going to be a stressful situation trying to figure out the tour/birth/pregnancy situation. Though most all their relationship has been stressful lol so hopefully they'll work it out. And lol @ your comment about AJ and sex. That'd sure solve his problem though. And I'm so sorry to keep you waiting and wondering :( It wasn't my intention, but things have just been mad crazy. I'll try to have another one up soon. :) Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Justy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/10 10:19 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Wow, when did Lily become Debbie Downer? LOL. Little Miss Push Push Push to get them together is now all whoa, hold on, wait a minute.

Ugh. And you know what that "Ugh" is about, lol.

LOL the whole cake thing, I remember something about this. hehehe.

Hahaha.. What the hell? What the hell? What about... "The hell?!"

*covers eyes* I'm not too sure my virgin eyes should be reading that. haha.

Haha oh my gosh. The taste of salt flooded his mouth... haha poor Alex.

Awwwwww, haha a nice evening in and lots of boom chicka bow wow is right up his alley haha.

Great chapter, it's nice to have such a sweet every day kind of thing happen after some big dramatic scene, you know? Not getting hit with drama bam bam bam is a nice relief.

You're doing great, girl, so keep it up so we can find out what happens. No pressure, though. :D



Author's Response:

LOL yes the cake thing ...you know all about that. :) And Lily just doesn't want this rushed engagement to cause any problems or a rushed wedding to be the wrong thing. She wants to make sure they're both ready and in the same place in their lives. She's just concerned is all ..she's no debbie downer lol. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Justy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

Yoo hoo! I'm back with reviews! Let's just hope these turn out better than the last, not to mention hoping they end up on the right chapters this time, haha.

Okay.. Alex is looking for Renee.. I bet that hussy is in his bed! *keeps reading* :O haha I hthink I had to force my eyeballs back in my sockets, mouth up off the floor. I knew it, the dirty ho!

Haha, I dunno why it's so funny... the thought of Alex being accosted in his own bedroom. Sexual harrassment and unwanted advances... it's funny!

Renee’s green eyes grew hard and she yanked her clothes from his hands. “Do not talk to me like I’m a child.”

“Then don’t act like one.” <-- Ooooooh, SNAP! I be done sporked the hussy in the neck.

*Gasp* No she didn't.. hussy attacked him! *keeps reading*

Whew... who knew he had a pair of balls laying around like that. Go Alex...

"..... someone better let the bitch know before she got a hot poker to her eyes." <- Hahaha, SoG version of a good ol' fashioned sporking, haha.

Omg, cat fight!! Hahaha.

Oh hell she cooled off a lot quicker than I would've. I would've still been stalking that room and cussing and throwing shit... I'd be plotting that witches demise 15 ways from Sunday if for no other reason than to make me feel better.

But I knew it! I knew the bitch was lying the whole time, didn't I call it? Ugh, why do women gotta be like that? Okay, those kind of women cause we're not all that way.

Great job on the chapter, chicka, and you know it. You did such a wonderful job with the fight, even if it was your classic chick fight, haha. Loved it!!



Author's Response:

LOL yes, let's keep the right reviews on the correct chapters. Well, she just hides her cooling off better, but she's not ever Renee's lil stunt by a long shot. Thanks so much and glad you thought the chick fight was good. I was hoping it was. :)

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/27/10 08:03 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Well they finally 'reconnected' again hihi..always nice to see that happen. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Aww thanks hehe. I thought it was time that happened. :)

Reviewer: AJsCuTiePiE93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/10 04:39 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Totally didn't realize I hadn't commented on this chapter! Love it and I'm glad you listened to me and they finally screwed! Next time you have my permission to make it slower and romantic :) But I loved it and the cake thing was cute!

Author's Response:

LOL you're slacking ...tsk tsk. And yes, they finally did the deed. I hope you are happy. :) I thought it would be cute/nice if she wasn't too great in the kitchen. A nice touch I think. Thanks so much!