Date: 06/09/10 09:18 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
I see him with a lil girl! i love this story! I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Aww that would be so cute! Thanks so much! :)
Date: 06/09/10 09:17 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
f*ck!!! they media knows, whatīs going on... thatīs a new experience for the two girls... nothing they know... but it seems that they girls could handle it... but i donīt think that the media would be so nice to brielle, because of reneé...
iīm really glad that denise, said what she said...i totally agree with her... sure this whole situation must be horrible for a woman, but they two had an open relationship... so something like that, could always happen...
alex always says in interviews, that he KNOWS, that he would be the one, that has a daughter in the future... and not a boy, like the other "boys".... :o)) so i "vote" for a girl.... ;o)
please please update soon.... canīt wait for more!!!! greetings from austria!!!!!
Author's Response: First, thank you so much for always being a faithful reviewer. And yes, it's definitely something new for the girls ...let's hope they can handle it okay. I think you're right there with the media showing Brielle in a not so good way since he is engaged to someone else. And one more girl vote hehe. Seems to be the popular opion. :) Thanks so much! Can't wait for you to read what happens next!
Date: 06/09/10 08:50 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Amazing. So detailed and just great. Glad the baby is healthy.
Author's Response: Thank you! Did you get my message to you in the community? Sorry it was so delayed.
Date: 06/09/10 08:50 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
So effin cute. They need a girl. And they NEED to freakin kiss already! This tension is KILLING ME.
and throw Rochelle I mean Rene off a cliff.
Author's Response: Aww thank you. LOL aww I'm sorry to make you anguish, but all in good time. :) LOL and you make me laugh; seriously. :)
Date: 06/07/10 06:11 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Very good chapter! We all know that Brie and Alex are gonna hook up again, so just get to it!!! Also, not a fan of this drinking business... :( Sorry I was a little late on the feedback, I was actually in Biloxi, MS for the BSB show, front row :) Where the real AJ held my hand and sang to me during More Than That... Amazing! :)
Author's Response: LOL aww where would the fun be in getting your reactions if I got to it already? And yeah, I'm not a fan of his drinking either, but I think it's realistic. And that's so awesome you had front row at the show!! Lucky girl! :)
Date: 06/07/10 07:18 am Title: Chapter Ten
awwwwww....alex is so cute and iīve wiped some tears, like he did, when his mum comforts him... he is really confused...right now everything is a little too much for him...
iīm glad, that he is strong for brielle, but maybe thereīs no need to hide that he is also scared!!! brielle feels the same, and iīm sure she completly understands him and they could help each other...
it makes me so worried, that he already drink again... i wish, he could find a way, to get through this tough time without alcohol...
i enjoyed the time, that the two sweet ones are had together... how interested alex is in the pregnancy and also her... how they act when they are together.... itīs so sweet and nice... she really helped alex, without knowing... and that makes me happy...
"WALKING PENISES" LMFAO... yeah...poor girl...with a dad like alex, she wonīt see much from this world... ;o) but when sheīs as charming like her dad... she wrapped him around her finger... easily!! ;o)
denise is a mother, and i think, i would act like her... she is a good mum and good mums protect her baby... i think she and brielle, when they know each other better, could be really friends!!!!
PLEASE UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! amazing chapter!!!
Author's Response: Aww *hands over tissues* I'm glad you liked that chapter. And yes, Alex is struggling and feeling pretty overwhelmed which is why he turns to the drinking. I'm sure that things will work out along the way, but I don't want to say too much lol. I'm trying to show how they're relationship is slowly developing and I don't want to rush it or force it too soon so all your awesome feedback is really helpful in that aspect. LOL and you're so right; if he has a girl he'd probably lock her in her room until she was 35 lol. Thanks again for your review! :)
Date: 06/06/10 10:01 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Besides the fact that AJ's drinking in this story and in real life makes me wanna hit him in the head with that bottle til he "tumblers" down the stairs haha...this chapter was adorable! I'm glad they're getting closer.
Author's Response: Haha that made me laugh out loud. Glad you enjoyed the chp and I'm sorry if his drinking is upsetting you. But thanks for the review!
Date: 06/06/10 07:09 pm Title: Chapter Ten
thanks for this great chapter!!!
denise's chat with brielle and lil was okay and i can really understand why she is cautious... and it is okay, she is alex' mum and mothers are like that... she only wants to be sure if this baby is her grandchild... and i think, when she knows that it is so, she will see things more relaxed ;)
it' s great, that alex has not one minute doubted, that brielle says the truth... i like how they have talked about the baby... but i hope it will be not a girl LOL...
i love alex in your story, but i hope he will stop drinking!!! and lily... she is brielles "denise" :D
it's amazing how she takes care of her best friend... okay... maybe it's a little bit too much sometimes... but she means only good and without her, it would be boring :)
i hope you understand my "english" ^^ it's certainly a bit confusing ;)
please update soon i LOVE your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
MEL=)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review! Denise is definitely cautious; she just wants the best for her son and doesn't want him to end up hurt or taken advantage of. I think she's going to come around as more time passes.
LOL, you don't want a girl? Why not? Honestly, I don't know yet what it's going to be ..so any suggestions you may have are welcome. :)
I'm glad that I'm able to make Alex someone that you adore and that you're enjoying the story. LOL, his drinking is just another storyline in the tale and will be addressed as time goes by, no worries. And Lily is just protecting her friend; you are so spot on. She is definitely Brielle's "Denise". :)
I understand your English perfectly. :) Thank you so much for your wonderful reviews!
Date: 06/06/10 03:20 pm Title: Chapter Ten
awwwwwwwwwwww i'm so glad they're getting along so well. I can't wait to see what happens next. great chapter!
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I'm glad I'm able to portray it well enough. Thank you for the review and I hope you'll continue to stick with me. :)
Date: 06/06/10 07:34 am Title: Chapter Ten
Awe this was good chapter for me I got to see Alex and Brie talk and I think they will work things out. I think Denise is just watching out for Alex but when she finds out it is Alex's baby she is going to be excited her first grandbaby. hehe... loving it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you for the review. Denise is definitely watching out for Alex; she isn't doing anything out of spite towards Brielle. I think she'll come around eventually. Thanks again! :)
Date: 06/06/10 07:19 am Title: Chapter Ten
Loving this story so far!xo
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
Date: 06/06/10 03:06 am Title: Chapter Ten
Lord, Denise is the Bear Mom! haha but, I have a feeling that she will like Brie.
What about the talk..loved hoe they work together!! MORE!!
Author's Response: LOL she certainly is the Mama Bear. I have a feeling she's going to start liking Brie too. Glad you liked their conversation ..I'm trying to show a relationship developing so any comments/suggestions on it are always appreciated. Thanks again!
Date: 06/06/10 02:48 am Title: Chapter Ten
Denise's chat with them was interesting...I'm glad she's made her feelings known to AJ about this situation. Brielle and AJ's was unexspected for me but I liked it. I can't wait to read how AJ slips up with his drinking and everyone finds out...oh the drama. lol
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! And what about Denise's chat did you find interesting? Was there something you feel I missed? As for AJ and Brielle's convo, I wanted to show them starting to come closer to each other and develop a real relationship. What about it was unexpected? I appreciate any feedback you may have on it. And yes, lots of drama when AJ's drinking comes out. Thanks so much!!
Date: 06/06/10 02:21 am Title: Chapter Ten
Great chapter. She seems comfortable talking to them which is good. Hope they develop into a friendship and maybe more.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I'm trying to show that they're slowly becoming more comfortable with each other and can talk about things. I see a friendship ahead, ...don't want to give anything away about more ...but keep reading and you'll see. Thanks so much!
Date: 06/02/10 11:02 pm Title: Chapter Nine
alex and brielle are getting closer... he is soooo sweet.... god... i think iīm in love... ;-)
how he cares about her, how he trusts her, when she says this baby is his, how he comforts her and donīt think sheīs after money or publicity.... what an adorable man...
he wants to be with her, when she sees the doctor... sure itīs his baby too, but heīs so interested in this whole baby-thing and that makes him only cuter....
there is something between them, that i canīt describe... they donīt know each other very well, but how they act with each other and talk...
i hope reneé needs much more "space"... hopefully while the next few months... ^^ but i donīt think she makes us this easy.... :-)
denise seems pretty cool... and i hope she is more friendly than reneé...
i honestly understand, why she wants alex and brielle to have a paternity test... she donīt know her... and he only wants to protect him... i would do the same, when iīm in her shoes... he always will be her baby...
PLS UUUUPDATE!!!!! iīm craving to read more!!!!
Author's Response: Aww you're so sweet and I just updated for you! It's a long one too hehe, so enjoy. And yeah, AJ and Brielle are definitely getting closer. He's so sweet to her hehe. I'm glad I'm making him cute and that you're enjoying it. LOL, Renee may give them some space, but she's going to be back so don't get too excited lol. And Denise is just trying to look out for her baby; I think any mom would be the same way. Thank you so much for your feedback, it's always so awesome to read. :)
