Date: 10/22/10 05:48 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
Cute chapter! :) I'm glad Lily said something to her about it being very fast, but I was thinking the same thing! I def. think it needs to be a long engagement! I love how she burnt the cake!! And wow, talk about things getting hot in a kitchen!!!! Haha!!! I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Yes, Lily is definitely wondering why it has to be so fast. I was wondering if anyone would think that. I'm glad you do. Hehe, thanks so much!
Date: 10/21/10 03:04 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
I understand Lily's worry thoughts. It's normal, since Brie and Alex know each other not a long time and all. Time will tell the story.
Brie haves such things in mind that she never stop to think when Alex were born.... she's a lill off from the time. We must gave her some thumbs up, she tried hard. The frame with the picture were the perfect gift, skulls, silver and love. All about Mclean!
And the cake...OOOOHHH THAT CAKE! haahah Alex is a love to eat that... oh the price!
After all these months of undercover love and desire.... they will try to pass by it, and what a beginning! That was HOT!!!
I still fear fro Crazy R.... well...
NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
You're very right. Time is the only thing that can tell their story. I love how you put it. LOL yeah, she's never really stopped to think about his birthday, so it's a good thing Lily noticed and said something to her. LOL, I'm glad everyone liked the cake incident, I hoped it came across well to the reader and it looks like it did. Thanks so much!
Date: 10/21/10 01:52 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
Awww! Alex is so sweet to eat the cake. I would have just threw it away when she wasn't lookn or said that my stomach was hurting. Lol
Author's Response:
LOL He didn't want her freaking out or crying on him. And how can he tell her how horrible it was when she worked so hard on it LOL. That's a man in love right there. Thanks so much for your review :)
Date: 10/21/10 01:52 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
:) A sweet chapter. Lily's reaction to Brielle's announcement was interesting, I do hope they're not going to rush into a wedding. And I know that Renee's not gone for good just yet. ;) What a trooper AJ was, eating that cake even though it was horrible. lol Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I hope they don't rush into a wedding either; but this is AJ lol. He tends to rush things I think. And you're smart to think Renee isn't gonna bow out to easily lol. Thanks so much for all your support! :)
Date: 10/21/10 01:38 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Okay, let's try this review one last time.
"I...I'm sorry," he choked out. "I just.... I just had this mental..." and then more laughter bubbled up and he trailed off. <-- Haha, does that sound familiar?
Haha, we'll have a no name baby. Again, sounds familiar.
"Then tell her to go back to her place."
Alex felt his body sagging back into the couch. "It's not that easy." <-- Actually, it is that easy, lol. He could just embrass the asshole within and tell her to get the eff out. Or he could have her committed since she's being wild with all the craziness and not taking care of herself.
"Will you marry me?" Whoa, Nelly. I'm all for happy endings but whoa, nelly. Though, again, this is typical Alex. LOL.
Awwwwwwwwww. I think the Vegas idea sounds really good, lol. Call Lily and his mom and have them meet them there and just do it before anyone is the wiser or anyone can chicken out. Then get Renee the hell up outta the house and voila, happily ever after. Maybe.
But.... this being a story, we can't have that just yet. There's many more twists and turns and ups and downs and drama to have happen before it can be a happy ending, thus causing the end of the story. And we can't have that.
You've done a wonderful job, girl, you know you have. You knock it out of the park every single time. I'm sorry it's taken me so long to get back around to reading this - but it's not for not wanting to, I've just been busy (which we both know isn't the norm for me). You're such a talented writer, and you know you are, and I can't wait to see what happens next. :D
Author's Response:
You know me too well lol. What fun would the story be without any twists or turns? Gotta have those ..they're a staple to all dramas. And you make me blush at your words. Thanks so much. I do try and I'm glad people like my work. :)
Date: 10/21/10 01:31 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Three
Awwwwww I loved this chapter!!!!!! Sooooo cute!! Great update can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) So glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/21/10 01:20 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Haha I knew it!!!!!!!! So glad to see her gone and now they can move on with their lives!!!
Author's Response:
Hehe. It was hard to keep it all under wraps. I think lots of people saw it coming hehe. Glad you liked it. :)
Date: 10/16/10 05:30 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
FIN-AL-LY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's about freakin time! Haha, great update!!! :) I can't wait to see what is in store for them next. I just hope Renee is out of the picture for good, although I have a feeling that isn't the case. We shall see! :)
Author's Response:
Aww thank you! So glad you're happy hehe. It's been a long time coming, but she's gone!
Date: 10/15/10 03:52 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Oeh I was almost afraid Alex would fall for Renee's seduction but thankfully he didn't. I loved the fight haha, glad that nothing really happend to Brielle or the baby.
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
Aww no, he's tired of her crap. He had a weak moment, but he's a strong guy thanks to Brielle. LOL glad you liked the fight, I hoped I could portray it well enough. Thanks so much :)
Date: 10/15/10 07:20 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
So first off congrats on your stories being nominated :)... OK second sorry for not reviewing earlier... (shame on me) but What a chapter! I loved that Brielle went at her...lol. Glad finally the truth is out and Alex doesn't have to feel guilty! Can't wait for more...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :) LOL and you need to get on the ball missy and leave me your feedback lol *shakes finger at you* And yeah, I think Brielle's as tired of her crap as Alex is. She woulda done her a lot more damage had she not been pregnant.
Date: 10/15/10 05:23 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Finally! Love it.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 10/15/10 04:50 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
oh nvm
Date: 10/15/10 04:49 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Rolling his eyes at that thought, he pushed away from the wall and moved back down the hall to the stairs and back to the first floor. Before he headed into the living room to talk with Renee, he wandered into his kitchen and took out a glass, filling it with ice then water from the door of the fridge. A bottle of Corona sounded really good to him at the moment, but he knew he couldn’t go there. Not today, not ever.
^^^ did you mean to go to the living room to talk to Brielle? I think so LOL
Date: 10/15/10 04:19 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
I knew it! Wait til Denise finds out.....oh man hahahaha.
Author's Response:
LOL she's gonna be so mad! And so glad Renee is gone!
Date: 10/15/10 04:07 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Yes and no as far as thinking it's too fast. As long as they pace themselves with being engaged and maybe try to ease into being a couple while enjoying just being together and engaged...I don't wanna see any plans too soon LOL.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your opinion. I'm not sure yet when they'll get married, so it may be awhile. Neither of them wants to rush into anything. :)
