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Reviewer: summer03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/10 08:10 am Title: Chapter Four

Oh my... so awesome of alex to man up and go see her. I can't wait to see what she decides on the whole moving to LA thing.

Author's Response: Thank you. :) I think that's something he'd do. Read on and you shall see her decision. :)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/10 06:10 am Title: Chapter Five

oh my poor man! You did the shit.. now clean it! Love this story, go on, hun!

Author's Response: LOL that's for real! He's got lots of cleaning up to do! Thank you!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/10 06:07 am Title: Chapter Five

Wow, I love that this is so realistic. I kinda like that Brie is oblivious to how AJ's "rough night" really went. Wait 'til she and others find out what he'll continue to be up to...

Still loving this, keep the updates coming! Can't wait for more! :D

Author's Response:

LOL, I'm glad you caught on to that. I was trying to keep her from knowing what was going on. And I know ..I'm already thinking 'bout further on down the road when she finds out about his drinking. Should be some good stuff.

 So glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 04:27 pm Title: Chapter Four

GOOD LORD I LOVE HIM!!!

Author's Response: Hehehe! Thank you!

Reviewer: Gabby Ghigonetto Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 04:20 pm Title: Chapter Four

GOOD LORD I LOVE HIM!!!

Author's Response: :) Thanks!

Reviewer: tablittrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 03:12 pm Title: Chapter Four

I've just read all the chapters you put up so far, and am loving it! Can't wait to see what happens next...It's already on my favorites list :)



Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you'll keep reading and let me know how you feel it's going. And yay for the favorites list! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 12:22 pm Title: Chapter Four

Thanks for the update...I hope to see more soon.
I wonder what Alex is going to do about his fiancee.

Author's Response: You're welcome and yes...I posted a new one just a few ago. Check it out! Keep on reading because I'm working on that issue as I type. :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 11:51 am Title: Chapter Four

Really really loving this story and glad AJ is manning up to his responsibilites, although I never doubted him on that!  Wonder if she'll take him up on his offer?  She seems so independent.  Hmm, we'll see!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really think he'd step up and do what he could. Check out the latest chp for some answers to your questions. And thanks again for the review...I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 10:28 am Title: Chapter One

Really loving this so far!  Poor Brie getting caught out like that though, that is unlucky after a drunken one nighter!

Author's Response: Thanks! I know right ...that poor girl. But it only takes just once lol. Hopefully she and Alex can help each other figure it all out. :)

Reviewer: Masquerade Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 10:04 am Title: Chapter Four

this wasn't a good chapter...this was a great one!!!

poor brielle... i didn't think she would be SO shocked... now i'm glad that everything is okay with the baby and her...and i hope she takes care of the baby and herself now better!!! And alex...i love him ;)... he is amazing... the things he did and said...and he will be there for her and the baby =) i think brielle will go with him, because it's the best what she can do in this situation... denise will be proud of her son she can be are sure this baby is his and renee... well i'm dying to know how she reacts ^^

sooo now i'm waiting for a new update... greetings MEL

Author's Response: Gosh, you scared me when I read the first few words...I thought you were gonna hate it. But you love it! Thank you! Alex was pretty great in that last chp and after I finished writing it, I was pretty excited to have you guys read it. I'm so glad it was so well recieved. I hope all the rest of them will be too. Thanks again and I can't wait to hear your thoughts on the next few chps hehe. :)

Reviewer: sammidanca Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 09:13 am Title: Chapter Four

love the plot look forward to more

Author's Response: Thank you and thank you for letting me know. :)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 08:35 am Title: Chapter Four

Wow, I wasn't expecting AJ to show up so soon. And poor Brielle, getting worked up like that and having to be in the hospital. I like AJ wants to help her, but how is Renee going to react? Can't wait to find out, thanks for the update! :D

Author's Response: Yeah, I had thought about dragging it out ...but I didn't want to do the conversation between Lily and Alex to be an actual convo and I wanted the element of surprise. So I went with it and it worked out pretty well. I still have to figure out Renee's reaction ...which I'll be doing asap. Thanks for the feedback. I'm excited for you to read the next one. :)

Reviewer: Xhex30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 08:30 am Title: Chapter Four

Oooookay...
this didnīt goes the way lily thought... who would expect that she collaps, when she saw alex... 
or maybe it goes the way, because alex is such a great man and take care of brielle and his unborn child! i hope she will say yes and go with him to LA but he has any idea what his engaged one will say if he tells her about brielle...he will tell her about...or not??? 
and what about his mother? i think she dying to see her!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE!!! canīt wait for more!!!!
greetings =o) iīm glad you understand everthing!!! :o)

Author's Response: Aww yes, Alex is a great man and he's gonna try his best to take care of them. It's gonna be some drama with his fiancee and if Brie goes out to LA. I'm definitely keeping his mom in the mix of it so you'll have the answers to all your questions within the next few chapters. Thank you so much for your awesome feedback. I can't wait to get your thoughts on what's to come. :)

Reviewer: Masquerade Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 10:49 am Title: Chapter Three

WOW!!! love our story... and i need to know more about brielle and alex... i really was surprised that lily contacted denise but maybe it was the right decision... and brielle? will she be furios or pleased that alex will know about her pregnancy? and what will he do at first? i really have to know... so please please update as soon as possible =)
my english is not so good, but i hope you know what i mean ;)
many greetings from austria... MEL

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! It means a lot to know that people really enjoy my hard work. I'm trying to get you all the chps as soon as I can. You'll have to keep on reading to see how Brielle reacts when she finds out what Lily did. It's a good chp and I can't wait for you to read it ...let me know what you thought when you do. I'm working on getting the udpates out as fast as I can. I hope you'll continue to read and review. And yes, I had no problems understanding your review. I think your English is great. :)

Reviewer: sbrown21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 07:33 am Title: Chapter Three

Good chapter. I never would have thought that Lily will contact AJ's mom. Thought she would track him down and talk to him directly. Want to know how he will contact Brielle. Please update soon

Author's Response: Thank you! I had thought about going that route, but with them being on other sides of the country and it being a little difficult to find AJ and just go up to him...I figured his mom would be the easiest approach. Lily was wanting to get things going so she didn't waste any time. I really appreciate your feedback and thanks for giving me your thoughts. :) Hope you'll continue to read and review!