Date: 10/15/10 02:55 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
I KNEW IT!!!!! And make Renne herself be the one to say it all, and spill the non said part... brilliant!
That woman is EVIL, I'm sure she will try to kill Brie's baby or steal her/him from them!
Now my question: with whom she was talking about? Her mom? Dad? WHOM?
I KNEW!!! Lord... Renne is EVIL she would kill Brie if Alex wasn't there!
This isn't over yet.. Alex will do something too.....
NEXT! PLEASE!!!
Author's Response:
LOL that was great wasn't it? She did herself in on that one. But it was about time that things come to a head and Renee get hers. Gosh, let's hope she doesn't go after the baby ...but thanks for the idea lol. And Renee was talking to one of her friends; it wasn't either of her parents. They really thought she was pregnant and lost the baby. So she's lying to him too. And thanks for your awesome review! :)
Date: 10/15/10 02:26 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
I knew that crazy ass bitch was lying from the begining! She's doing too much just to win over some man. Glad Aj believed Brielle over Renee. I just hate that he went through all that for nothing.
Good chapter! I enjoyed it!
Author's Response:
Hehe it was so hard not to tell you guys. I wanted to hehe. She's definitely got some issues, so let's hope her parents can help her. :) Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/15/10 02:14 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Finally!! I KNEW Renee was faking/lying! Great job on the fight. Renee can't leave AJ's house fast enough, haha. And about AJ brushing stuff off and whether he's gonna drink again or not: Brielle needs to remember once and alcoholic, always an alcoholic. The temptation is always going to be there for AJ. He may drink just because he feels he was stupid enough to believe Renee's lies, who knows.
I don't know, I feel like we haven't seen the last of Renee...
As to when AJ and Brielle should get married, when they're sure Renee is gone for good. Maybe before the baby's born. I can picture a summer-beach wedding, but I don't know what the date is in the story. lol
Anyway, thanks for another update. :)
Author's Response:
Hehe, you were so smart! I wanted to tell you guys, but couldn't. LOL She was a blur running out of that house. I hope AJ doesn't go back to the bottle, but it's going to be a struggle for him, that much you should know from his disease. And Renee may or may not be out of the picture for good hehe, I'll never tell. Aww the summer/beach wedding is a cute idea. I will keep it in mind, though as of right now, I have no idea when they will get married. So thank you for the suggestions. And your wonderful review. :)
Date: 10/15/10 01:06 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two
Yeah so glad that's the truth!!! Don't make him grab a bottle though or I'll kick your butt!
Author's Response:
Yikes lol I don't wanna piss you off. hehe. He'll be bottle free for a lil while, but he may have some struggles.
Date: 10/13/10 10:09 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
“I...I’m sorry,” he choked out. “I just…I just had this mental…” and then more laughter bubbled up and he trailed off.
Date: 10/12/10 03:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-One
Wow, that was a bit of a shocker!! But a good one!! Finally all is well, go ahead and end the story, we're good now, no need to continue on, well maybe just till the baby is born but that can happen next chapter. I'm good with this happy ending. ;) Great chapter I can't wait to see what unfolds and how Renee takes the news.
Author's Response: Glad to know I can still surprise you lol. Thank you! LOL @ you wanting me to end the story. I still got lots ahead, how can I end it now? LOL and we don't want the baby to come too soon. Thank you so much though :)
Date: 10/12/10 03:34 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
PLEASE add more chapters. I really like this story :)
Author's Response: I just did. Thank you so much! :)
Date: 10/11/10 05:43 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
I was loving this chapter until Renee. lol Brielle felt she had to do what was best for all them. I think her parents found out she wasn't pregnant after all and that is why they decided to leave. We'll see what happens.
Author's Response: LOL Yeah Renee tends to put a sour note on things. And you're right, she was doing what she thought was best. That's interesting about Renee's parents. Thanks so much for the feedback!
Date: 10/11/10 04:39 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
YES! We're getting somewhere! Lets boot Renee out now. :D
Author's Response: Hehehe. That's coming next. ;)
Date: 10/11/10 04:39 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
So wow didn't see that coming so soon (like j knew it would happen but not so soon) I'm so excited for them!!!!! Alex is such a sweeite. So glad they are on the right track to being really happy. Now all Alex has to do is send Renee off andthings will be great, but we all know she won't be leaving quitely.... No that would be way to hard for her.
Great chapter!!! I can't wait for more, update again soon!!! Please!!!
Author's Response: Hehe thanks man! I know; the proposal was very spur of the moment. I wasn't even planning it until it came out. Those darn fingers sometimes have a brain of their own. And I think you are going to be pleased with the latest chp. :)
Date: 10/11/10 04:21 am Title: Chapter Thirty-One
AWWWWWWWWWWW I LOVE HIM!!! FINALLY they had this conversation, THE convo! FINALLY!
Jesus, two stubborn and one baby... you think this kid will be easy? NO AT ALL!
And FINALLY alex will have the guts to go till the end of Renne's road?? Let's see...
Aww Brie finally said I Love You!! Awww GO MCLEANS!
I so see Renne having a crazy fit there... oh Lord....
and the names... oh boy!
NEXT!
Author's Response: Aww hehe thank you! They're both so stubborn but they finally admitted their feelings. Let's hope things keep going this well. As for Renee... oy vey.
Date: 10/11/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter Thirty
I'm all for hating the Evil Woman aka The Hussy, but you know, technically Brie is the one who (unintentionally) pushed HER our into the cold.... so.... lol. But you know I got a big ol' hate on for The Hussy so it's all good.
Man, I love Lily so much. I love how she's the more... what's the word... spiteful one haha. She's all up in Brie's corner all "Girl, nuh uh, you better not let him do that..." Brie needs it though, she's too nice and too nice people usually end up getting used and screwed over.
I bet the bitch Renee is even staying in Brie's room just for spite. Stupid heifer.
Oh noes... Brie knows Renee was in his room and now she's gonna think she's sleeping in there with him. Oh noes.
"She wasn’t going to worry herself about the woman anymore. Though maybe it might be a good idea to let Alex stay with her at the hotel tonight; keep him away from his ex. Especially if the woman continued to take shelter in bedrooms she shouldn’t be in." < - Woo hoo. Loved that line.
Author's Response: How did she push Renee out into the cold? I'm just curious. And Lily's just trying to take care of her friend. She feels like mama bear sometimes when it comes to Brielle. Thanks so much for the feedback. I love reading your comments, they make me laugh. :)
Date: 10/11/10 12:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine
Awwww he wrote in his journal? Are we going to get to see any more of his entries? I thought those were really cool...
Awwww@Brie's call. How sweet.
Uh oh! I bet the Hussy pulled him back in... *keeps reading*
AHHHHHHHH!!! Stupid Alex... but GOD it sounds just like something his dumb butt would do in RL.
"Someone needs to be the bigger person here and she’s too hurt to do that.”
Author's Response: I'm gonna try to get more of his entries on paper for you to read. LOL and yes, a lot of what he's doing is stuff I can definitely see him doing in real life. LOL poor guy.
Date: 10/10/10 11:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight
You know how I write my reviews, I write them as I read them then give a follow up, lol, so here we go.
I'm at the part where Brie joins him on the balcony after she hung up on Renee. Alex really needs to take some baby steps with that woman. I mean, I know he feels all guilty about the whole miscarriage thing but he's gotta realize that these things aren't his fault. Yeah, it was terrible that it happened but it's done and over with - it's time they go their seperate ways. He's really gotta learn to press the "off" button when it comes to her. But then, this is Alex..... so..... *keeps reading*
She really does need to have a real talk with him. Take him to an elevator and stop it between floors so no one can bother them, turn the phones off for no interruptions. Tell him how she feels and let him know what's what. Like how she feels but right now she doesn't want to get into a relationship type of situation because of the stress he's going through BUT that she'll be right there with him if he needs her. I think if he knew he had a somewhat solid foothold with Brie, it'd help him out with Renee... it'd make him feel stronger, like someone like Brie loves him - so wtf is he holding onto Renee for? You see what I'm saying?
Author's Response: I don't think he's holding onto Renee consciously. He wants her go as much as Brielle does. But it might be a subconscious thing. I think you're right on that one. Let's hope she can talk to him and help him work through it and realize he really, truly doesn't need to hold onto the leech. Thanks so much for the review! :)
Date: 10/10/10 07:57 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-One
There was a lot to handle in this one chapter. lol So, they're thinking about finding out the sex of the baby, picking out names, MAKING WEDDING PLANS...I wonder if AJ will keep his word and will really get rid of Renee. Here's hoping he will. Great update. :D
Author's Response: Aww I'm sorry if it overwhelmed you. They sure have a lot going on, let's hope they can keep their cool. And when do you think they should get married? I need to take a poll. Thanks so much though!
