Date: 06/10/14 01:40 am Title: Chapter 4
I liked seeing some more insight into Nicks relationship with the other guys. It makes a lot more sense knowing why Nick isnt vocal about not liking how they treat him.
It was nice of him to help Elena and I have a feeling Carrie will give him shit about going through her purse.
Author's Response: I don't think he has it in him to be cruel to a person! It's different when it's money or material things.
Date: 06/10/14 01:20 am Title: Chapter 3
I feel for Nick in this chapter because he doesnt seem to like what he is doing. I like how you made Brian a jerk because you dont normally see that in bsb fics. It is refreshing to see him as an asshole.
Nick really is like Cinderella, i hope he grows some balls soon cause he is getting pushed around big time.
Author's Response: I was telling someone recently that I find I enjoy writing Brian really out of character because he's not terribly exciting to write for me most times lol also, I felt like Nick could have this really submissive side when it comes to people whose respect he wants.
Date: 06/09/14 08:39 am Title: Chapter 2
Nick doesnt seem to like what hes doing to Elena and I liked the exchange between them, especially about his tattoos. He isnt a very good kidnapper LOL. liking this so far.
Author's Response: Kidnapping definitely isn't his strongest skill lol glad to see you're enjoying it!
Date: 05/31/14 08:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Thought I would give this a go early. I chose this story because I havent read a whole lot of your work. I also don't read much AU although I do write it. I liked the quick introductions to the guys and what their motives are. I will try to read one or two chapters a day at least until this is finished. Looking forward to seeing how it turns out!
Author's Response: Glad you decided to give this one a go even though it's AU!
Date: 05/08/12 05:52 am Title: Chapter 15
I really enjoyed this. I liked that you made Brian the bad guy! I'm so glad that Nick found someone to help him grow some balls!! Awesome Julilly!
Author's Response:
Thanks Erika!! :D
Date: 05/08/12 03:48 am Title: Chapter 14
Omg!! It's the police and they've shot Nick! :(
Date: 05/08/12 03:37 am Title: Chapter 13
Those two are cute!
Date: 05/08/12 03:19 am Title: Chapter 11
Talk about a quickie! Oh CRAP!!
Date: 05/08/12 03:15 am Title: Chapter 10
Brian is livid! Not good for Nick.
Date: 05/06/12 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow AJ is an asshole!
Crap, I knew AJ would want Nick to rough up the girl. I'm glad Brian didn't agree. Wow this is good and I'm hooked. I feel so bad for nick, but I know he's gonna stand up for himself at some point.
Author's Response:
Wow! I was definitely surprised to see reviews pop up on this one lol Thanks so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it! :)
Date: 05/06/12 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 6
Damn Kevin don't be tight!! Things are gonna get complicated!
Date: 05/06/12 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
I am back to reading...Well that's a start to standing up for himself. I don't think he'll fully do so overnight though.
I loved pogs!
Date: 08/30/11 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 15
This is a very good story. I never liked Alternate universe genre but I loved this. Great work! :)
Date: 07/30/11 04:34 am Title: Chapter 15
loved loved LOVED IT! Will leave more detailed feedback in the thread on the board!
Date: 07/30/11 04:19 am Title: Chapter 12
LMFAO The not liking Howie part made me crack up. I can't wait to see how this ends.
