Date: 07/30/11 04:14 am Title: Chapter 11
Damn, I was all into the sex scene and Brian just HAD to show up, didn't he?
Date: 07/29/11 05:55 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh shit... Damn Jane for opening her mouth. Will finish tomorrow!
Date: 07/29/11 05:48 am Title: Chapter 9
Lol sorry but nick telling her she stunk was awesome lol
Date: 07/29/11 05:44 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh snap, nick just grew a pair!
Date: 07/29/11 05:38 am Title: Chapter 7
Dude if I were nick I would have punched the hell out of all three of them... I mean really? Who does that?
Date: 07/29/11 05:30 am Title: Chapter 6
Dude Brian has balls going to work with everything going on around the house!
Date: 07/26/11 03:21 am Title: Chapter 4
LMFAO She started her period. Only Nick would get stuck kidnapping a woman and she starts her period.
That other chick is a bitch, tho. I'd cut her.
Author's Response:
I should be sleeping but instead I'm giggling at your reviews! lol Glad you're entertained thus far! :P
Date: 07/26/11 03:15 am Title: Chapter 3
Poor Nick is like Cinderella and the others are his evil step sisters. Have I mentioned how interesting it is that Kevin is the girl's father. Can't wait to see him come into the story.
Date: 07/26/11 03:06 am Title: Chapter 2
LMFAO I so thought about the tattoos when he opened the door in just his boxers and the mask. Poor Nick, I just want to pat him on the head.
I'm really liking this so far!
Date: 07/26/11 03:00 am Title: Chapter 1
For once, I think Nick is smart in a story because, I too, think this is the stupidest thing they've ever done LOL
Date: 07/21/11 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 15
Woot! Fantastic! if only it worked like that in real life and the other 3 wouldn't be trying to link Nick too. It would be interesting to see how the trial of the three would be handled, I'm not asking you to write another, I just like when stories make you wonder about what happens next kind of a thing. Great Job!
Date: 07/21/11 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
Though I expected this to happen between them, it came about quick. If she's still using him, which I think she is... grrrr
Date: 07/20/11 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 8
I really like the turn Nick's character is taking. I am glad that he is taking a stand for himself and even getting the girl out.
Date: 07/20/11 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
oh no, this can't be good! What are they going to do to her now?
Date: 07/20/11 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
uh oh maybe he will do more then just stand up to them, perhaps he will pull a 180 and be the bad guy.
Pogs! I remember the guys all collecting those in middle school.
