Date: 06/28/12 01:40 pm Title: Epilogue
Whoa.... that was sweet... spending their "afterlife" together. I can't believe I finished chapter 7 - 25 in one sitting. That is how interesting your story is. I can't stop reading it. I'll be back for a more thorough review. Thank you for coming up with this story. :)
Author's Response:
Wow, I made it to the end of the reviews! haha You sure did power through, I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as you did! Thanks for reading.
Date: 06/28/12 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 24
that was a sad goodbye that brought tears on my eyes. Very well written, Julilly.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! Your reviews have been really helpful!
Date: 06/28/12 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 23
So, Valerie is really dead. And the reason why everybody can see him is because she is in a mission. That was so clever. And Im glad Brian is alive. :)
Date: 06/28/12 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 22
Poor Brian... it wasnt easy to be in his position. I hope Valerie wont let anything bad happen to Brian. Now, i am waiting for Josh to pull the trigger and see what will happen. and by the way, where the hell is Nick?
Author's Response:
Nick likes to disappear at the most inconvinient time! lol This is around the point that I ran out of steam when I first started writing this story. I didn't pick it back up for almost a year, so I'm hoping that it doesn't seem too disjointed to readers!
Date: 06/28/12 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 21
Valerie's case and Nick's are connected. but Im still wondering about the girl talking to Josh. Is she really alive or not? LOL
Date: 06/28/12 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 20
Ugh! I can't wait to find out about Valerie, or should I say the woman the bad guys were talking to. If she's a ghost, why everyone can see her? why can they touch her? I 'll read the next chapter before I lose my mind. lol
Author's Response:
There's mysterious things at work and Valerie is pretty mysterious! :)
Date: 06/28/12 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 19
Now things are getting more complicated but I'm loving it. Suspense, drama, comedy... they're all in this story. And I cant help but wanting more. :)
Date: 06/28/12 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 18
I can't believe I am happy Valerie is already dead! See? this story has a lot of surprises and I'm loving it! You got me literally jumped out of my seat. Good thing, I'm alone here or hubby might thought I just received a crazy news or something. But how can other people see Valerie? that's a mystery. Yay! Nick has a love interest after all.... :D
Author's Response:
Haha! That's fantastic to hear. That's one of the few times where someone would say "I'm glad this person is dead!", I would think :P
Date: 06/28/12 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 17
things are getting really, really interesting.
Date: 06/28/12 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 16
oh my goodness! another surprise.... Nick was able to be her. I wonder how the date/meeting with the bad boyfriend would go. LOL at the ghost thinking he can still do CPR. I just dont like Nick forgiving her quickly. He must have loved her so much.
Author's Response:
Sometimes love can be blind! I think that it was more than it's impossible to ever completely stop caring about someone you loved.
Date: 06/28/12 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 15
whoa! another ghost? a she? who could that be? and I love how Valerie doesnt freak out. LOL. I am really loving the surprises on your story. :)
Date: 06/28/12 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 14
I hope none of Nick's friends is involved with that guy's dirty business. They would solve the case sooon.
Date: 06/28/12 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 13
Yay! Valerie is on Nick's side. She's not part of Toni's boyfriend's group. I like Sgt. Baker, he seems like a really good guy. :)
Author's Response:
Doesn't he though? I liked him too! :P
Date: 06/28/12 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 12
awww poor Nickolas, still in love with his ex-girlfriend who cheated on him. I wonder why Toni is still alive and still with the bad guy. If the bad guy thought toni had the list, why would he let her live? why killing Nick is enough? oh well, my questions will be answered sooon. *click next*
Author's Response:
Hopefully all your questions ended up being answered! haha
Date: 06/28/12 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 11
the story about Valerie's father is a bit sad. But im still a little suspicious about Valerie, hope the matchbook won't end up with the wrong people and Nick would get the justice and closure he needed.
Author's Response:
It's been so long since I've read this story I almost wasn't sure about Valerie's dad... I had to go back and read it again! I can definitely see why you would still be suspicious at this point.
