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Reviewer: Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/14 12:09 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

His family has always been such a train wreck....and even though its fictional...i can see so much of this going on in real life.

Author's Response: While my immediate family is really stable, my extended is pretty dysfunctional so I had some real life help lol. I watched HOC a lot I. Channeling the Carter's and sadly it didn't seem too much of a stretch either. Thanks :)

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/12 05:49 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

I really feel for him everytime anyone writes about his family.  He got such a shit end of the stick where family is concerned.  I am glad that he has his Backstreet Family though. 



Author's Response: So do I. My own family has it's issues, but lord knows the Carters make me seem normal lol. It's sad because of the fact it's realistic. I really believe that the reason he's okay now is cause he had the Boys. (Case in Point - Aaron lol).

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/11 10:12 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Wow, talk about intense! I'm glad Angel stuck up for Nick the way she had... leave it to the youngest to talk some sense into anybody! Again, I find myself saying, poor Nick. :(



Author's Response: Nick's family...well, we all know they're a mess. So far Angel seems to be the only sane one :(

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/11 01:21 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

OMG; he makes an effort to go with his family and he is treated that way? Poor Nick. At least he has the guys <3



Author's Response: Yeah....the Carters never did appreciate Nick. Did you ever watch House of Carters? Thank lordie Nick has the Boys.

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/10 11:18 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

WOW. Nick's family is crazy. I feel so bad for him in real life as well, that his real family is the guys. I relate to Nick because my own mother uses me like an ATM...I work 70 hours a week and she gets 90 percent of my money. I don't get along well with her either, so I can totally see how Nick feels about Jane. I feel the same way about my mom....and I also feel that angel is the only Carter besides Nick that has any heart at all. Aaron is the worst example, no wonder he didn't show up. On a happier note, I liked that Nick was drinking Mountain Dew...I am drinking it right now myself. I love code red too :) But still feel bad Nick has to deal with such a rotten family. Great update!

Author's Response: Awww I'm sorry! That sucks.... but thank you. :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/10 05:07 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Oh lord you made me cry reading this. Shit no wonder he doesn't like his family. I wouldn't either. Angel is the only one worth anything. I really hope he finds some peace before it all hits him. Keep up the excellent work.
Marguerite

Author's Response: awwww! I didn't mean to make you cry lol. But that's a compliment :). Yeah, you really can't blame him can you? Thanks!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/10 07:32 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

What a heartless ungrateful family! I really feel sorry for Nick, all he wants is a normal family and he's stuck with them. He'd be better off cutting them out of his life with the exception of Angel.

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Those would be the Carters... sadly I wrote them how I see them based off of HOC and everything since then. You're completely right, he's better off without them, not including Angel. Too bad you can't pick your family huh? Thankies :)

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 11:14 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

aww whenever the Carters are invovled in a chapter, I usually run the other way but you did a great job of capturing all of Nick's anxiety and sadness when it comes to his family. I feel so bad for him, the real him. Sad that I could really see that scenerio happening and probably has on more than one occasion.



Author's Response: I know, part of me didn't want to. But at the same time, I couldn't ignore them and I knew it. I really feel bad for real life Nick, cause like you, I can see this happening in real life. I wrote it how I really think it is. Poor Nick, I wanna hug him lol. Thanks Mare, happy to see I was able to capture his emotions, I was struggling with this one cause I was trying to make sure I did that right. So thank you :)

Reviewer: SweetDsPixie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 11:12 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Poor Nick atleast he has his true family that he needs to hurry up and tell the rest of.
Love this story cant wait till the next update

Author's Response: I know :(, thank god for the Boys right? :) Thank you so much.

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 10:40 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Aw, poor Nick. :( His family sucks. lol Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: LOL so true. Thanks :)

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 10:10 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

God...poor Nick.  No wonder he doesn't wanna tell them.  I pray Nick gets his shit in order before anything bad happens so that greedy clan can't get their hands on anything....

 

Great, dramatic chapter!



Author's Response: Basically. :( Angel's the only decent one. (Which I really believe is true in real life). Thanks!

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/10 09:04 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

I loved this chapter! Crazy Carter clan... parts with them are always sort of entertaining, but mostly just sad. This chapter made me sad for Nick. :( I hope he tells AJ and Howie soon so he can get the support he needs from his true family. Keep up the great work; this story is so intense, so bright, so vivid, so ))) ))) ATW!

Author's Response: They really are. And this is exactly why he told the therapist they don't deserve to know. Except Angel lol. I agree, the Boys are his true family, so he needs to tell AJ and Howie already. Soon, hopefully. Thank you Julie, you are totally my Triple Rainbow! :)