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Reviewer: Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/14 06:17 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

How can someone NOT love roller coasters...pft...maybe Nick should just take Brian anyway =p but I am glad its out in the open with at least AJ...which I believe just leaves Howie now.

Author's Response: No idea but Brian's said he can't ride them so yeah lol.AJ knows but how is he taking it is the question and yup, only Howie. Who is awesome lol

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/12 06:08 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

wow, that was an interesting way to tell AJ, kind of a funny way too.  Right before going down the big hill of the rollercoaster. 



Author's Response: I wanted to try and be different. I feel like Nick didn't plan to do it on the rollercoaster, but just knew he couldn't avoid it forever and had to put it out there.

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/11 10:22 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Wow. I love me some Nick and AJ moments, but this was just wow. You had my anticipation growing right with them, as if I were AJ... strapped in that roller coaster with Nick, riding on that cart upwards, slowly building, but on top of that anticipation was awaiting the news Nick would share with him. I truly felt as if I was being told for the first time what was wrong with Nick! That's how simple, yet vivid this chapter was! And the way you ended it, man... *quickly runs off to the next chapter*

Btw, I like that word... yoot. Perhaps I'll start using that word. ;) LOL!!



Author's Response: This chapter is one of my faves, looking back. Julie gave me the idea because I was stumped on how Nick would break it to AJ, and she suggested maybe a fair, or a rollercoaster. I fell in love with it, building it up just like a ride and then Nick saying it just before they plummet down...and I'm so glad it came off the way I pictured it before writing it. As for Yoot...that came from Mare lmao. I loved it enough to toss it in :)

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/11 01:40 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

It was nice to have a entire day with A.J. I'm wondering what he got to say about this :(



Author's Response: AJ....well he never handles bad news well (Kevin leaving, for example). But Nick and AJ can be cute together.

Reviewer: Eugenie1505 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/10 10:01 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

The last part of this chapter was written so beautifully it made me cry out loud! :$

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! I'm just awed that it affected you so deeply. Thanks!

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/10 07:06 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Oh lord Nick finally told him. I think AJ will be the most understanding. He has the biggest heart. My concern is Someone handeling Nick's legal concerns before Jane the witch finds out and tries to take it all away from him. I would love to see him have some peace before it all ends.
Marguerite

Author's Response: Yep, about time right? LOL. AJ's reaction will definitely be next chapter. As for the rest...you'll see :).

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/10 04:50 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Omg Rose...this chapter was genius. Loved the clown part! Silly AJ. And I loved how he told AJ on the rollercoaster.. It's like I can actually see the scene going down in a movie or something. Very interested to see how he'll tell Howie.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Sel! After Lopez, how could I not use the clowns? LMAO. And thank you again! It's such a huge compliment to hear you picturing it like a movie.

Reviewer: Smoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 03:19 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Great story, don't know how many times I can tell you. But it just is....

Author's Response: Awww well thank you!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 01:01 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

I loved the bet they had going on and can just imagine them trying to out do each other. What a way to find out, just as the roller coaster is about to begin its descent!

Author's Response: LOL I totally can, it's Nick and AJ. That's probably how a lot of their WTF moments happen haha. Thanks Steph!

Reviewer: Ashley1984 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 04:55 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

OMG! What a way to end that chapter! And wow... Nick just dropped the bomb at the top of a roller coaster. This is just getting intense! Please update soon!

Author's Response: I know, everyone's telling me how I mean I am LOL. Thankies!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 04:41 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

Yoot for the update! :O) I'm so glad that you are finally letting the guys find out about Nick's condition and I loved how you chose to tell AJ. That was the perfect scene. Right before the roller coaster came shooting down. Kind of like how Nick is feeling himself. Very deep Rose! Excellent. I'm looking forward to Howie finding out!



Author's Response: Yoot for the review! :D Thanks! I can't take the credit for the carnival idea, that was Julie helping me, when I was trying to figure it out. Thank you! I was really trying to make it fit exactly how Nick and AJ are. :) I'm glad it came off well.

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 04:08 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

Gotta love the Lopez interview inside info!  Love that you wove those in!  And again...left hanging for AJ's reaction...*glares at you*...

You have NO clue just how much I would dearly LOVE to go to an amuzement park with those two! hehe.. Great chap! Can't WAIT for the next!

 

And Julie is the SHIT ain't she? lol...Love her!



Author's Response: LOL how could I not. It's funny, Julie and I were chatting as we watched the twitter video and declared it was perfect for fanfic hehe. And yes, I'm mean....but it's fun! LOL. Thanks Jen! (And yes, she is hehe)

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 04:04 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

Wow, what a way for Nick to tell AJ. But I really like the way you ended this chapter, the last line. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Nick's not the best with good timing is he? Thanks! :)

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 04:04 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

Wow. Nick knows just when to tell his secrets doesn't he? Great chapter....I want more

Author's Response: LOL Nick and bad timing look to be synonymous. Thanks!

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 03:56 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

Awww, thanks DR! =D This story is so intense!! AJ's probably all like, "Oh my Go-od! What does it mean?!" and you're so mean, you don't even get to his reaction! I can't wait for that! The rollercoaster idea turned out epic! DRATW! It makes me want to RFAB! ;) (jk)

Author's Response: Thanks! I totally meant it ya know. You're so bright and vivid! I am mean....but ya know, you're the master of mean so you would know LOL. Thanks for the idea! And as for RFAB....it almost makes me wanna go to the L-I-B-R-A-R-Y ;-)