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Reviewer: Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/14 06:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty

I am glad Kevin showed up....it seems he understands him the most.

Author's Response: I feel Kevin does understand Nick most. I love their bond.

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/12 06:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

they called in the "big guns" calling Kevin. Yikes, that is a huge lapse in memory and just randomly stuck in there I had to reread the line to make sure I was reading it right, it was a nice subtle way of showing the change.  

And I don't EVEN want to know what was going on with AJ.  heh.



Author's Response: Yep, one of the first things it hits is your short term memory. I wanted to strike him quickly there when he had his first really big lapse. AJ...is AJ lol.

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/11 11:56 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Oooooh my... definitely did NOT need to read AJ in that light, lmao!! I mean, we all know he's a freak, but... ooooh my, lmao!! I couldn't help than to laugh at Nick's reponse of, "Wow. You know what, wrong room!" LMFAO!! But everything sombered up real quick with Nick's episode. Man, that's freaking sad! :(



Author's Response: LMFAO seriously, if it was gonna happen, it was gonna be AJ. Of course, sadly Nick's condition isn't going anywhere.

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/11 02:43 am Title: Chapter Twenty

That was a pretty good joke on Nick, haha. He is starting to lose his memory :( I'm wondering what Kevin has to say.



Author's Response: LOL Nick's pretty good with pranks, gotta love it. Yeah, slowly the memory is gonna get a bit muddled. :(, but at least Kevin is there right?

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/10 03:23 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Voted!

Nice to see you back again. Thanks for the update, it was good! Curious to hear what Kevin has to say.

Author's Response: Thanks! It's awesome note having the glitch anymore lol. Glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/10 07:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Thank God it's Kevin. He is exactly what Nick needs right now. I just hope he can help him. Keep up the very excellent work.
Marguierite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/10 07:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Thank God it's Kevin. He is exactly what Nick needs right now. I just hope he can help him. Keep up the very excellent work.
Marguierite

Author's Response: Well, there's only so much any of them can do unfortunately. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Nikkix3BSB Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/10 08:18 am Title: Chapter Twenty

This is really good cant wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/10 02:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Aw, this chapter had lots of laughs but also lots of sadness.

I loved Brian with the green comb over chasing Nick into AJ's room. I can imagine AJ up to all that kinky shit too.

Poor Nick :( I wonder what'll happen with Kevin there.

Author's Response: LOL it had to be AJ, cause really, who else would be caught like that lmao. *hugs Nick* we'll see if Kevin helps. Thanks Steph!

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/10 03:47 am Title: Chapter Twenty

P.S. I loved the Double Rainbow references! WHAT DOES IT MEAN?!

Author's Response: I thought you might LOL. Hehe...so bright and soooo vivid...

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/10 03:46 am Title: Chapter Twenty

OMG Rose!!! This chapter was SO triple rainbow all the way!!! I love the way it started out so light and funny and then got SO dark and angsty! I was laughing my ass off at the beginning, especially with Brian's "balding green head" and god-knows-what was going on in AJ's room (LMFAO!!!!). But it was so sad when Nick forgot all that instantly, and then the last scene was just... wow... intense!! Poor Nick. :( It's totally understandable, how he's feeling... I think anyone would consider just ending it all on their terms, while they were still with it enough to do so. Obviously glad he didn't, though! And YAY, Kevin to the rescue!!! I freaking love it!!! This was probably my favorite chapter yet! More soon! :)

Author's Response: Awwww thanks TR! Poor Brian, but I figure in five years he'll have lost more hair lmao, and then picturing that neon green LMAO. I was cracking myself up. I feel so bad for what I'm putting Nick through, but it's also fun LOL. I think it's understandable too, cause he's only got two options. And I can see why ending it now would be incredibly tempting. Kevin's always to the rescue hehe. :) I'm happy you loved it!

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/10 01:07 am Title: Chapter Twenty

What a great update, Rose! It was really sad to see Nick starting to go downhill. Seems like the guys don't even know how to handle it. LOVED the part with AJ! That was awesome and pretty rockstar of him. Lol. I love how you had them shocked after...it's like they couldn't even comprehend what they just saw.

The part where he's thinking about suicide is really sad. Loved the way you wrote him alone in the room at the end-very descriptive. Can't wait to see what'll happen next when Kevin talks to him.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah that's the thing, people know Nick doesn't know how to handle this, but really, the others don't know how to deal with this either. Despite everything, there's probably been a layer of denial this whole time. As Nick started to deteriorate, that's gonna give. LOL I'm glad you loved the part about AJ, if anyone was gonna be doing that it would have to be him. Thankies about the suicide scene. I feel like with Nick, suicide's always going to be lingering in his mind somewhere, how could it not be, given the situation? As sad as it is, it makes you wonder what you would do if you were in his place. We'll see what happens with Kevin now. He's been on my mind lately thanks to the interview and Oprah, so I felt the need to bring him back in.

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 11:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Oh snap, Kevin...dun, dun, duuuuun. Poor Nick, he feels so scared helpless with what's happening to him. Great update, Rose.

Author's Response: LOL *insert dramatic music here* and that's exactly it, Nick's terrified and I can't blame him. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 11:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

aww, I loved the playful start of the chapter and lmao "so bright, so vivid" :OP And then the turn it took when he forget everything. :O( Poor Nick. I'm happy to see Kevin making an appearance. Please don't kill him or shoot him. LOL ;O) this has been the emoticon review!

Author's Response: LOL you know I had to stick that in there somehow. And I know :( poor Nick, I wanna hug the guy. LOL I won't kill or shoot Kevin :P. Thanks for the fabulous emoticon review! lol

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/10 09:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Heavy stuff. Loved Brian chasing Nick into AJ's room...yikes. I'm glad I wasn't them because that was...wow. AJ is such a freak! I wanted to cry when Nick contemplated slitting his wrists...I have been there and chose not to do it either. I was surprised that Kevin showed up, I am interested to see how it pans out :) love daddy kevin! Amazing chapter as usual!

Author's Response: LOL gotta have a dash of comedy with the drama. AJ is a freak, and I think we all know that lmao. (Hopefully not THAT much though haha). Awww, the thing with Nick, is that there really aren't a lot of options for him. Nick's surprised Kevin showed up too. Thanks!