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Reviewer: Carter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/14 02:49 am Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

I am glad he finally has told the world they needed to know.

Author's Response: They did, but now Nick needs to really come to terms, as do the Boys.

Reviewer: Purpura Lipstick Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/12 05:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

that was a bit much for the fan Rose!

so sad, his final performance.  I'd like to think that the crowd would be silent if something like that was said but I fear someone in the crowd would cheer, jerks.



Author's Response: LMFAO you know I had to click on the chapter to see what you meant? I forgot all about that. What's an angst without comic relief? It's definitely sad but I think people would be respectful, maybe I have more faith in humanity.

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/11 01:26 am Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

Oooooh my, that crazy fan made me CRINGE!! Eye babies?! LMFAO!! Classic!! And I swear, I love the lyrics you came up with!! :)



Author's Response: LMAO as does the person it may...or may not be based on lmao. And thanks! I love when people compliment my fave lyrics

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/11 04:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

Oh my lord did he ever go out in style. Typical Nick. And you nailed the crazy fans to a tee. Especially the journalist. I bet there are tone like her. You are writing one hell of a story. Keep it up.
Marguerite

Author's Response: I'd like to think he did :). Thank you about the crazy fan bit haha, that was fun to write. And yes, there's some like her out there lmao. ;-). Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/11 02:13 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

Wow, that sounded like one hell of a performance he put on! He gave it his all and the crowd were loving it...and then the bombshell :( Poor Nick, that would've been such a hard thing to announce, and now he's standing there faced with a wall of silence :(

Great chapter Rose!!

Author's Response: I had to give him one really good moment, I think he's earned it :). I agree, that had to be the hardest thing he's ever done, was to announce that, but at least now the world knows. :(. Thanks Steph!

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 12:28 am Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

Yay for the lyrics to Thrill Ride! Good job :) Great chap, Rose. The whole time I was waiting for the climax...it was giving me anxiety! lol. I love how Kevin is still the big brother trying to protect Nick. And I can't imagine how the Carters are going to act when they find out. I love how supportive the guys are being, even going to the performance with him. Can't wait for another update :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I try :) Awwww I'm not trying to give you a heart attack...(though I'd be proud if I did just cause I made you that anxious LMFAO). I love the Kevin/Nick relationship, I really do, so it ends up being touched on a lot in this story. As for the Carters...yeah, Nick knows that's not gonna be pretty. So do I lol. Thanks Sel!

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 05:57 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

This was so sad! I really loved his performance at the end, and I'm glad it went so smoothly. I could picture is perfectly as he made his announcement and everyone fell silent. It was really eerie - silence at a BSB concert/performance does not sit right and it would feel very odd! So I think you did a great job with that moment :) I also liked the journalist who attacked him.. lmao ;) Great chpater, Rose!

Author's Response: Awww, I'm glad you liked it! I feel he needed one good moment with no issues before everything goes really downhill. I can definitely see the silent moment as just stunned and awkward. Poor Nick :(. I couldn't see any other way for them to really react lol. I'm also happy everyone loved the psycho fan LMAO, that was way too fun to write. Thanks Steph!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 12:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

You must have posted this right after I went to bed. Great chapter, Rose. Loved how you got the media involved. I could see them saying all of those things about him. I'm so glad he was able to get through his performance perfectly. I was worried he was going to forget everything. I actually was able to see the visual image of him standing there at the very end of the song holding his fist up in the air as the lights faded. That would have been a perfect ending place as well. I actually said, "Wow, I can see the credits rolling after that!" lol Also nicely done with the lyrics. You should try to make these real songs when you are done with the story. :O) Okay done babbling. Yay for you being ahead of schedule. Maybe you don't need 2 weeks between updates!



Author's Response: I did lol. Thank you! I knew the media was going to have to come into play soon, and thought now was a good time. I was nice about the performance, I felt he did deserve one good moment LOL. I'm glad you could see that image! That's so what I was going for. I almost ended there...then was like...no, he needs to say the announcement LOL. (And actually originally that wasn't the ending place for the chapter either, but it felt right ending it there.). Thank you about the lyrics! I always always always second guess myself about them, so I love that you think they're well done. Thank you Mare! And as for being ahead of schedule...I feel like if we shorten the deadlines, I'll fail lmao.

Reviewer: Sam_noelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 10:52 am Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

Why do I have the feeling (and please tell me if I'm wrong in this assumption) that the crazy journalist/fan fic writer was based on someone who exists in the fandom in real life...Hmmmm. Coincidence, I think not, funny, I think yes. lmao

Author's Response: ....maaaaaaaaaaybe LMAO. I'm glad I'm not the only one who found it funny. I worry about that sometimes. Glad you enjoyed it too!

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 08:51 am Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

WOW!! Just....WOW! I can't imagine what it was like for you to write that, but for me, I could see the whole thing in my head reading the detail you put into that performance.  Wonderfully done.  Man, why did you have to leave it THERE?!  Way to leave us hangin! 

Again, beautifully done chaper!



Author's Response: Oh I had the whole thing in my head, visually. I was complaining to Julie that this was one of those things I could make into video LOL. Cause I could see it perfectly, but was really hoping it carried over well into words. Thanks Jen! I am kinda mean to leave it hanging, but hey if my streak continues, it won't be for long :). Thanks!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 08:08 am Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

As sad as this chapter was, I had to LMAO at the "rabid fangirl" because I knew exactly who it was that you were talking about. I just about died laughing to the point where I cried lol. I'm sad Nick didn't get to tell his family anything before he told the world. I nearly choked when Nick but that girl's tongue, I couldn't help but cringe. LOL. This was brilliant, one of my favorite chapters so far. Loving this story, Rose.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed my rabid fangirl bit LMAO. I've had that scene idea for awhile, I was just looking for the right moment to actually use it. I about died laughing as I wrote it lol. Gotta love it. :). Nick wanted to tell his family (beyond Angel, who knows lol) but it's not like they give him a chance. So, they'll find out with everyone else. As for Nick biting the fangirl's tongue...well LMAO what else could he do? hehe. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: AJBrianFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 07:15 am Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

Amazing, amazing update. There it is. Out in the open. Finally. Don't leave us hanging for too long.

Author's Response: Thanks! It's about time right? lol. I'll try not to keep you guys waiting, I've been pretty good about that lately.

Reviewer: x__shiningstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 06:26 am Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

OMG, Nick told everybody! I can't believe it... I so wanna know what's going to happen now! Now that the fans, his family, everybody knows! I loved how he rock in stage for the last time! I'm so waiting for the next chapter!!



Author's Response: Yep, it was time lol. Everyone knows, and while that comes with new problems, it at least solves a few right? I felt Nick deserved one last moment on stage. Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: RokofAges75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/11 06:08 am Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

The end of this chapter was sooo sad. I can't imagine how much courage it must have taken him to do that at the VMAs, of all places. Wow. I can't imagine hearing it that way as a fan. So tragic, to think of this being their last big public appearance, his last performance. It came at a good time, though, with all the tabloid stories about him. I can't wait to hear about the public reaction! Also, you know I loved the krazy journalist attack; that was totally epic LMFAO.

Author's Response: Thank you! With the ending... awww I know! But when I decided Nick was going to hide it for some time, that he'd want to announce it at a major place, so he wouldn't have to do it more than once. Oddly, the VMAs seemed to fit. As a fan, omg I'd be bawling lol. I agree, at least the timing was good. I'm glad you loved the krazy journalist attack, I loved and adored writing that LMAO. Cause she was acting like an alien...