Date: 11/13/11 04:54 am Title: Chapter 2
Aw poor fan but poor Nick more so! I have a feeling the guys will be back and you will keep my heart thudding hard in my chest. When you have me pulling my hair out in suspense that's when you know you rock the scary stuff besides the sad lol but I have more to read so off I go!
Author's Response: Aww! LOL Well, thanks!! That's a huge compliment... I love writing scary stuff, along with the sad, so I appreciate that!
Date: 10/10/10 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
Geez, poor Nick and his paranoia. And of course Daddy Kev with his questioning. Gonna keep reading, still loving this!
Author's Response: Old-school, right? LOL This reminds me of so many of those old suspense fics from the early days of Bsb fic; I wish there were more of those still being written. Glad you're enjoying it! :)
Date: 06/14/10 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait to see what happens next, I can already tell it's gonna be a suspenseful story! If I were Nick I'd be shitting myself too! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it so far! I'll have another chapter up later tonight. :)
Date: 06/14/10 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
I loved the way you had Nick go back and forth between calling the cops or not. That all seemed so real and something probably everyone would toy with if something like that were to happen. Also loved the bald guy who wasn't scary in that kind of way lol You've set up a great suspense here because the entire time I kept thinking uh oh like him, only to see nothing happen which can be a scary feeling. I can only imagine someone famous feeling that and constantly being clawed at. Creepy! Excellent job once again!
Author's Response: Thanks, Mare! I'm glad that seemed plausible. I always get annoyed in stories like this when they don't automatically go to the police, so I was trying hard to justify his decision not to, but I can see you'd be afraid to get involved, too. I'm glad you're feeling the suspense, even though nothing actually happened in this chapter. Thanks so much for your feedback; I'm glad you're still reading and enjoying it! :)
Date: 06/14/10 09:26 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow. It's amazing how vivid this chapter was. It was as if I was seriously feeling everything Nick was feeling at that moment; everything from unsettling thoughts racing through his head to his heart pounding, being jarred awake, the paranoia that wracked his brain. I'm feeling the suspense for poor Nicky. Loved the clerk, Karissa, such a sweetheart! But man, poor Nick for being so on edge. Can't wait to see what'll happen next, so please update soon my dear! :)
Btw, totally love the small zombie references both you and Rose got going on in your fics. ;)
Author's Response: Ahh thank you, that is awesome to hear (about the vividness)!! I'm glad it was still suspenseful, even though there wasn't much action in this chapter. I plan on having the next one up tomorrow. :) And hehe - thanks! ;) Zombie love.