Date: 07/27/13 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 14
Nick is such a bone head thinking if he stays into hiding everything will be A-OK.....we never write Nick having logical thinking in most of our stories, do we? Thats what makes his character so fun to write!! I love the emotions you have captured in this story - especially with AJ in this chapter! I can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: LMAO You are so right on that! Nick is always the illogical one doing something dumb or hiding something from the guys. It's a challenge sometimes to write his flawed thinking convincingly, but it's a fun challenge for sure. Thanks for much for the review!! I love that you're back!!!
Date: 07/25/13 06:28 am Title: Chapter 14
The part with AJ talking to Kevin was really good, I liked how you explained how they were all dealing with the coma in their own way. YAY Kevin opened his eyes, but as for Nick I do think his nightmares are foreshadowing something. So happy to see an update Julie!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Tracy! That is one of the aspects I'm enjoying writing in this story, showing how each of the guys are dealing with grief in his own way. Thanks for the review!
Date: 07/24/13 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 14
Yay, Kevin's coming out of his coma, but sounds like recovery will take a long time, if he recovers!
Author's Response: Yes, yes it will, IF, like you said, he recovers. LOL Thanks for the review, Steph!
